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I like how it shows even when mc get reincarnated into a new life she still making the same old mistakes and has to learn from so she goes on a journey to become strong. Nice tense moments but also nice relaxing funny moments.
Awesome novel, recommended to read it, but you might end up popping a boner so be mindful of your surroundings ๐๐, Chelsea its just supper sexy, as for RPG and combat it also has, not so detailed but its still good, also dont expect an overuse of the system since she does try not to use it.
first of all I'm not dun with the book and have a same problem I can't find the discord pls help Secondly I really like your writing
this is very good not only is the plot good but i also have a huge fetish for this
Bonjour Madjic je suis un fan de la derniรจre heure, j'ai aimรฉ 2 de vos ลuvres j'aimerais connaรฎtre les dates et les heures de publication prรฉcise des chapitres de ces ลuvres si vous pouviez m'aider parce que actuellement je suis dans une pรฉriode scolaire trรจs importante et je ne pourrai pas surveiller ร chaque fois ร quel moment vous avez pu publier le chapitres du jour donc j'aimerais connaรฎtre les dates et heures prรฉcises de publication les ลuvres en question sont the futanari system Et un chasseur de prime galactique merci beaucoup de votre attention.
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Man needs to study English and writing more, I'm at CH:15 and its not very good...I can write better drunk
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Might be good for others if just looking for the lewd stuff & seemed somewhat like could be an ok story, but I found too much repetitiveness in the writing that annoyed me during the first 8 chapters. Plus the character background build of the supposed high intelligence of the MC to not see basic everyday things during the large time skip. Just make the story seem dull.
Awesome book ๐๐๐ผ I like the story and all the interactions between the characters and the FL learning from past mistakes ๐
author, could you upload your novel on another platform? it's very good but due to the webnovel problem I won't be able to read it anymore since I speak another language
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Sou do Brasil e estou adorando o desenvolvimento da obra, apesar de ter muito foco em sexo, a outras coisas para focar como o foco polรญtico e a trama da guerra e isso รฉ maravilhoso, o que me deixa incomodado รฉ que o "sistema" parece estar um pouco fora de foco no momento. Fora isso recomendo de mais a leitura caso goste da temรกtica.
AMAZING NOVEL!!!!!!!! ........................................................................................................................................
why is it that for every chapter bust a nut once or twice which i really didn't expect until i happen to realize how hot every chapter was with it's details. To be honest every chapter is better than watching a video or reading a doujin๐
This is okay at best as far as I've seen. If you're looking for some adult reading, so to say, and have exhausted your other options then this is an okay choice. Don't go into this expecting much and you can probably find some enjoyment.
Love it!!! It has a great magic system in place, great story telling, and the sexy bits are amazing! Keep up the great work! I can't like this enough and want to give this 10 stars out of 5!
Like im really enjoying it for the most part but everytime doorknocker gets mentioned it ruins everything. not to mention the stupid amount of straight up eugenics in it
Extremely good novel, be it the characters or the world, the reason I put 3 stars into story development is because the story gets stuck when she goes to the Demon lands. It goes from fantasy adventure to desk working. In my opinion it was a big mistake to take this route. Her powers has been stucked for like forever. It's a shame truly, all of the girls of her harem has dissapeared somewhere, although we know there are constant conection with MC. That is why 4 general stars are given. If i wrote this review 10 chapters ago, giving 3 would have been generous.
It's starts out pretty iffy if not a little cringe but it shapes out to be really pretty good. Though I must say if you came partially because of the system aspect, there's not much of it, honestly you could take it out and the story would be almost unchanged.
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usually I would stop reading a book with so many chapter's because of my short attention span but this book is really goog. 10/10 ............
read it, its fun, you wont be able to stop reading, its a genious girl reincarnates and becomes a futanari demi human and forms her own harem of women but they are like **** friends that all love each other, there's no ra.pe, its all good vibes and fighting, if i said anything else i would do spoiler, so give it a read and find out yourself.
freaking gold, damn be prepared to read with a hard on, not many battle though which would have been nice for the mc to level up. Spoiler By the way, i though a song that would be perfect as Kate's song: "Irresistible ft. Demi Lovato - Fall Out Boy"
I love this book, multi characters, development of said characters evolving world where actions and decisions have far flung events caused because of them.
One of the best erotic action adventure stories I've read. The characters are well fleshed out, the world building is in depth without be to over blown, and the smutty goodness is very descriptive. Keep up the good work.[img=recommend]
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Okay so as of now I really like the story and the fact that I have no idea how it will turn out. The reason for this is that there are two sides of this story both being writen st the same time which makes it both a fun foa and read, but also a well thought out novel even if you donโt include the lewd portions in it.
Story very amazing and its feel like we are in that world. I like character like sucubus and elf of course beatskin like catkins, sheepkins, and bunnykins.
Bro this novel is so fucking good, it brought a tear to my eye. Sometimes I pray to god at night "why did you give me such weird fetishes?" Then I immediately masturbate to futinari and fall asleep crying. Keep up the good work! I'll check.out the dominatrix one soon too ๐
I like how it shows even when mc get reincarnated into a new life she still making the same old mistakes and has to learn from so she goes on a journey to become strong. Nice tense moments but also nice relaxing funny moments.
Awesome novel, recommended to read it, but you might end up popping a boner so be mindful of your surroundings ๐๐, Chelsea its just supper sexy, as for RPG and combat it also has, not so detailed but its still good, also dont expect an overuse of the system since she does try not to use it.
first of all I'm not dun with the book and have a same problem I can't find the discord pls help Secondly I really like your writing
this is very good not only is the plot good but i also have a huge fetish for this
Bonjour Madjic je suis un fan de la derniรจre heure, j'ai aimรฉ 2 de vos ลuvres j'aimerais connaรฎtre les dates et les heures de publication prรฉcise des chapitres de ces ลuvres si vous pouviez m'aider parce que actuellement je suis dans une pรฉriode scolaire trรจs importante et je ne pourrai pas surveiller ร chaque fois ร quel moment vous avez pu publier le chapitres du jour donc j'aimerais connaรฎtre les dates et heures prรฉcises de publication les ลuvres en question sont the futanari system Et un chasseur de prime galactique merci beaucoup de votre attention.
Reveal Spoiler Man needs to study English and writing more, I'm at CH:15 and its not very good...I can write better drunk
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Might be good for others if just looking for the lewd stuff & seemed somewhat like could be an ok story, but I found too much repetitiveness in the writing that annoyed me during the first 8 chapters. Plus the character background build of the supposed high intelligence of the MC to not see basic everyday things during the large time skip. Just make the story seem dull.
Awesome book ๐๐๐ผ I like the story and all the interactions between the characters and the FL learning from past mistakes ๐
author, could you upload your novel on another platform? it's very good but due to the webnovel problem I won't be able to read it anymore since I speak another language
Reveal Spoiler Mandatory to give stars look at others for actual review ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Sou do Brasil e estou adorando o desenvolvimento da obra, apesar de ter muito foco em sexo, a outras coisas para focar como o foco polรญtico e a trama da guerra e isso รฉ maravilhoso, o que me deixa incomodado รฉ que o "sistema" parece estar um pouco fora de foco no momento. Fora isso recomendo de mais a leitura caso goste da temรกtica.
AMAZING NOVEL!!!!!!!! ........................................................................................................................................
why is it that for every chapter bust a nut once or twice which i really didn't expect until i happen to realize how hot every chapter was with it's details. To be honest every chapter is better than watching a video or reading a doujin๐
This is okay at best as far as I've seen. If you're looking for some adult reading, so to say, and have exhausted your other options then this is an okay choice. Don't go into this expecting much and you can probably find some enjoyment.
Love it!!! It has a great magic system in place, great story telling, and the sexy bits are amazing! Keep up the great work! I can't like this enough and want to give this 10 stars out of 5!
Like im really enjoying it for the most part but everytime doorknocker gets mentioned it ruins everything. not to mention the stupid amount of straight up eugenics in it
Extremely good novel, be it the characters or the world, the reason I put 3 stars into story development is because the story gets stuck when she goes to the Demon lands. It goes from fantasy adventure to desk working. In my opinion it was a big mistake to take this route. Her powers has been stucked for like forever. It's a shame truly, all of the girls of her harem has dissapeared somewhere, although we know there are constant conection with MC. That is why 4 general stars are given. If i wrote this review 10 chapters ago, giving 3 would have been generous.
It's starts out pretty iffy if not a little cringe but it shapes out to be really pretty good. Though I must say if you came partially because of the system aspect, there's not much of it, honestly you could take it out and the story would be almost unchanged.
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usually I would stop reading a book with so many chapter's because of my short attention span but this book is really goog. 10/10 ............
read it, its fun, you wont be able to stop reading, its a genious girl reincarnates and becomes a futanari demi human and forms her own harem of women but they are like **** friends that all love each other, there's no ra.pe, its all good vibes and fighting, if i said anything else i would do spoiler, so give it a read and find out yourself.
freaking gold, damn be prepared to read with a hard on, not many battle though which would have been nice for the mc to level up. Spoiler By the way, i though a song that would be perfect as Kate's song: "Irresistible ft. Demi Lovato - Fall Out Boy"
I love this book, multi characters, development of said characters evolving world where actions and decisions have far flung events caused because of them.
One of the best erotic action adventure stories I've read. The characters are well fleshed out, the world building is in depth without be to over blown, and the smutty goodness is very descriptive. Keep up the good work.[img=recommend]
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Okay so as of now I really like the story and the fact that I have no idea how it will turn out. The reason for this is that there are two sides of this story both being writen st the same time which makes it both a fun foa and read, but also a well thought out novel even if you donโt include the lewd portions in it.
Story very amazing and its feel like we are in that world. I like character like sucubus and elf of course beatskin like catkins, sheepkins, and bunnykins.
Bro this novel is so fucking good, it brought a tear to my eye. Sometimes I pray to god at night "why did you give me such weird fetishes?" Then I immediately masturbate to futinari and fall asleep crying. Keep up the good work! I'll check.out the dominatrix one soon too ๐