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I love your other fanfics, but this fanfic for sure is in the lowest rank....... why? bcuz the plot is very forced, the romance too..... i mean he's not that edgy/emo when he's with Itachi, or when he meet that assassin girl, or when he first got his mission...... but years after he suddenly became an Edgelord, an emo, a being who doesn't want to be attached with others, and also a being with no emotion showing on his face. It's okay if you told us what happened but nah you suddenly changed his personality....... The most irritating part of this ff too, is the fact that author repeatedly use the phrase (i forgot, but it's about the mc being an outsider and he accepted it blah blah something)........................ Dont misunderstand although i didn't like this fanfic, dontcha worry i love and support your other fanfics🥰🥰🥰
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It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😁👍👍 It have a good plot/storyline and good english/translate.. I think MC/Kai is too op (with how he can copy any jutsu with just see it).. I mean I don't mind strong/op MC, but at least make him train any jutsu he copy.. And please make him not like a robot, make him at least have a few important people (because a people/man need someone, they can't live alone).. But overall I love your story 😍😍 Keep up the good work author san 😁👍😍
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Soy el señor de la guerra Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka y hablo con la palabra de loz diozez. ¡Soy el profeta del WAAAGH! y mundos enteroz arderán en las huellas de mis botas «. – Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka
Good I love Martial world my very first novel it opened up this world to me and I am sad to see so little fanfics glad for this keep it up don't drop.
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This story has great writing quality. The ambiance is also good as the ninja world is great. My problem is with the interactions. They seem false. I understand the mc is the cold and quiet type but what i am talking about is almost everybody that the mc interacts with seems to have the need to tell him that he doesn’t belong there or to go away. And it happens in the most unrealistic ways sometimes. You need to work on making the conversations appear more realistic. I hope that this happens when he finds his “people”.
Will do a real review after more chapter is release. This review me supporting this ff.
Hello, my lovely readers! I have worked hard on my novels and have quite a stock of drafts. As you may already know, the plot revolves around character interactions more than the plot itself, and I would like you to keep that in mind. The novels are mostly about lemon, and each novel has unique aspects. One Piece Novel features fights, Bleach depicts the laid-back life of the main character, and the Naruto Novel provides a dystopian and unique perspective. Thank you, and I hope you enjoy.
This story is really good the only problem I had with it was in the first 50 chapters you kept repeating things a lot but you got better as time went on.
I love your other fanfics, but this fanfic for sure is in the lowest rank....... why? bcuz the plot is very forced, the romance too..... i mean he's not that edgy/emo when he's with Itachi, or when he meet that assassin girl, or when he first got his mission...... but years after he suddenly became an Edgelord, an emo, a being who doesn't want to be attached with others, and also a being with no emotion showing on his face. It's okay if you told us what happened but nah you suddenly changed his personality....... The most irritating part of this ff too, is the fact that author repeatedly use the phrase (i forgot, but it's about the mc being an outsider and he accepted it blah blah something)........................ Dont misunderstand although i didn't like this fanfic, dontcha worry i love and support your other fanfics🥰🥰🥰
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It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😁👍👍 It have a good plot/storyline and good english/translate.. I think MC/Kai is too op (with how he can copy any jutsu with just see it).. I mean I don't mind strong/op MC, but at least make him train any jutsu he copy.. And please make him not like a robot, make him at least have a few important people (because a people/man need someone, they can't live alone).. But overall I love your story 😍😍 Keep up the good work author san 😁👍😍
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Soy el señor de la guerra Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka y hablo con la palabra de loz diozez. ¡Soy el profeta del WAAAGH! y mundos enteroz arderán en las huellas de mis botas «. – Ghazghkull Mag Uruk Thraka
Good I love Martial world my very first novel it opened up this world to me and I am sad to see so little fanfics glad for this keep it up don't drop.
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This story has great writing quality. The ambiance is also good as the ninja world is great. My problem is with the interactions. They seem false. I understand the mc is the cold and quiet type but what i am talking about is almost everybody that the mc interacts with seems to have the need to tell him that he doesn’t belong there or to go away. And it happens in the most unrealistic ways sometimes. You need to work on making the conversations appear more realistic. I hope that this happens when he finds his “people”.
Will do a real review after more chapter is release. This review me supporting this ff.
Hello, my lovely readers! I have worked hard on my novels and have quite a stock of drafts. As you may already know, the plot revolves around character interactions more than the plot itself, and I would like you to keep that in mind. The novels are mostly about lemon, and each novel has unique aspects. One Piece Novel features fights, Bleach depicts the laid-back life of the main character, and the Naruto Novel provides a dystopian and unique perspective. Thank you, and I hope you enjoy.
This story is really good the only problem I had with it was in the first 50 chapters you kept repeating things a lot but you got better as time went on.