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A solid, enjoyable story for anyone interested in the system genre. The author does well with vivid descriptions as well as an intriguing plot to keep you hooked as you read. Lovely work author!
pretty good. Just thought a few things were weird. First there was no need for MC to be in a coma for one year. 2 that betrayal was not needed in my “opinion” MC already last his family and everyone. 3. The start of the story was about revenge but suddenly changed
Firstly, the writing style is amazing. I could visualize it as if it was a movie. It has a system which is one of my favorite genres to read about. This is quiet an interesting book and I really like it. This quest and reward system is wonderful and I am very eager to know what's gonna happen next. Continue doing the good work author!
I think this story has a lot of potential; You can tell the author worked very hard on his/her work. The setting of the story, as well as the characters and the plot, are all very well thought and written! The writing quality is amazing! Although, it still needs some improvement, the author gets his/her point across to the reader. I feel as if the author should use more meaningful adjectives to describe scenes throughout the story. So that's why I rated writing quality 4 stars out of 5. The updating stability is very frequent for a busy author like this one! So it's an easy 5 stars of out 5. The story development is well thought out and carefully written for the most part. The author really broadened his/her horizons with this story. He/she also allowed the reader(s) to connect with the characters of the story, feeling the same emotions as the main character and other characters as well! So 5 stars again! The character design is thoroughly planned! Yes, there may not be any art other than the front page of the story, but character design is mainly about the personalities of every individual character! The author's work on the personality and emotions of each character is splendid and nearly perfect! So 5 stars as well! Last of all, world background is amazing and productive! This gives readers the knowledge of the world this story resides in and how their common sense works. There are many memorable places described throughout each chapter. So 5 stars out of 5 again. If I were to recommend this to a friend, a family member, or someone else. I would definitely suggest this to them with a positive response! This story is one of its kind and is very impactful to the reader(s). I hope you continue your works FIRE_ANGEL. You will surely succeed as an author and as a person if you continue your works! I'm sure just about anyone will agree with me! Good luck!
I really enjoy the story but the updating is terrible, hopefully it’s fixed sooner than later
The writing and storyline in this novel is pretty good. the language is easy to understand and plot is interesting for newcomer. I actually enjoy a lot!
I gifted you an ice cola because your book is recommendable...The story line is ok and I need more of this...keep it [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Amazing[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] That's all I need to say about this book
Woah, the book is really well written. I hope to see more, already read all of the available chapters! please release quickly!
The plot of the story is very well structured and in the first chapter only, it makes the reader want to read more.I would highly recommend people to read this book if you're searching for a book that's clam yet interesting and eye catching.
I think this book is good for readers who enjoy system genre. We have such interesting protagonist here. Although there might not much unveil in this early stage. But it makes reader curious to find out how the story will takes. I hope more reader will take a chance to read this book. I'm sure the author later will improve to much better and the plot also not like other.
I can say that in the starting story writing looks blend but after the 5 and 6 chapter it looks great 👍.
It has a good story line and system to help Mc. Although, it only has three chapters now but I still liked it. But some may not like this novel so, don't come to me with your complains asking why liked it because its my choice and if any one have complain go talk to the author. Thus I am waiting more chapters and when 30 chapters complete I will write another review.
A solid, enjoyable story for anyone interested in the system genre. The author does well with vivid descriptions as well as an intriguing plot to keep you hooked as you read. Lovely work author!
pretty good. Just thought a few things were weird. First there was no need for MC to be in a coma for one year. 2 that betrayal was not needed in my “opinion” MC already last his family and everyone. 3. The start of the story was about revenge but suddenly changed
Firstly, the writing style is amazing. I could visualize it as if it was a movie. It has a system which is one of my favorite genres to read about. This is quiet an interesting book and I really like it. This quest and reward system is wonderful and I am very eager to know what's gonna happen next. Continue doing the good work author!
I think this story has a lot of potential; You can tell the author worked very hard on his/her work. The setting of the story, as well as the characters and the plot, are all very well thought and written! The writing quality is amazing! Although, it still needs some improvement, the author gets his/her point across to the reader. I feel as if the author should use more meaningful adjectives to describe scenes throughout the story. So that's why I rated writing quality 4 stars out of 5. The updating stability is very frequent for a busy author like this one! So it's an easy 5 stars of out 5. The story development is well thought out and carefully written for the most part. The author really broadened his/her horizons with this story. He/she also allowed the reader(s) to connect with the characters of the story, feeling the same emotions as the main character and other characters as well! So 5 stars again! The character design is thoroughly planned! Yes, there may not be any art other than the front page of the story, but character design is mainly about the personalities of every individual character! The author's work on the personality and emotions of each character is splendid and nearly perfect! So 5 stars as well! Last of all, world background is amazing and productive! This gives readers the knowledge of the world this story resides in and how their common sense works. There are many memorable places described throughout each chapter. So 5 stars out of 5 again. If I were to recommend this to a friend, a family member, or someone else. I would definitely suggest this to them with a positive response! This story is one of its kind and is very impactful to the reader(s). I hope you continue your works FIRE_ANGEL. You will surely succeed as an author and as a person if you continue your works! I'm sure just about anyone will agree with me! Good luck!
I really enjoy the story but the updating is terrible, hopefully it’s fixed sooner than later
The writing and storyline in this novel is pretty good. the language is easy to understand and plot is interesting for newcomer. I actually enjoy a lot!
I gifted you an ice cola because your book is recommendable...The story line is ok and I need more of this...keep it [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Amazing[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] That's all I need to say about this book
Woah, the book is really well written. I hope to see more, already read all of the available chapters! please release quickly!
The plot of the story is very well structured and in the first chapter only, it makes the reader want to read more.I would highly recommend people to read this book if you're searching for a book that's clam yet interesting and eye catching.
I think this book is good for readers who enjoy system genre. We have such interesting protagonist here. Although there might not much unveil in this early stage. But it makes reader curious to find out how the story will takes. I hope more reader will take a chance to read this book. I'm sure the author later will improve to much better and the plot also not like other.
I can say that in the starting story writing looks blend but after the 5 and 6 chapter it looks great 👍.
It has a good story line and system to help Mc. Although, it only has three chapters now but I still liked it. But some may not like this novel so, don't come to me with your complains asking why liked it because its my choice and if any one have complain go talk to the author. Thus I am waiting more chapters and when 30 chapters complete I will write another review.