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there's super annoying side character and it manages to annoy me just as much as MC other than that it's okay
Wassup G, Newbie novels' rating genius right here.... What an absolute concept. Honestly the cover inspired me a lot. Reminded of a certain Chinese fan fiction about Kaito kid. Now leaving that, your boy has a grammaratical dysfunction ig... Just kidding... Improve your grammar, rating improves, Story wise you banged it..... Well then see ya
Pretty good so far. The grammar could be better. For example they keep calling there special ability helmet for some reason. otherwise it's interesting. Though I do enjoy your other fic more.
The value of 1 year is known by the student who failed the class - The value of 1 month is known by the woman who gave birth prematurely - The value of 1 week is known by the animator working at Mappa - The value of 1 hour is known by the person waiting on the train platform to send off his lover - The value of 1 minute is known by the person who missed his flight - The value of 1 second is known at the last moment before death The survivor knows - The silver medalist knows the value of 1 split second. Therefore, would you please read my book and add value to the time I spent writing this book?
there's super annoying side character and it manages to annoy me just as much as MC other than that it's okay
Wassup G, Newbie novels' rating genius right here.... What an absolute concept. Honestly the cover inspired me a lot. Reminded of a certain Chinese fan fiction about Kaito kid. Now leaving that, your boy has a grammaratical dysfunction ig... Just kidding... Improve your grammar, rating improves, Story wise you banged it..... Well then see ya
Pretty good so far. The grammar could be better. For example they keep calling there special ability helmet for some reason. otherwise it's interesting. Though I do enjoy your other fic more.
The value of 1 year is known by the student who failed the class - The value of 1 month is known by the woman who gave birth prematurely - The value of 1 week is known by the animator working at Mappa - The value of 1 hour is known by the person waiting on the train platform to send off his lover - The value of 1 minute is known by the person who missed his flight - The value of 1 second is known at the last moment before death The survivor knows - The silver medalist knows the value of 1 split second. Therefore, would you please read my book and add value to the time I spent writing this book?
The grammar is not very good, it use “me” when it should be “you”