From the few sentences that makes up the 'first chapter':
Bad grammar
(Probably) cliched plot
Copycat summary over just about every other overpowered protagonist from a Chinese novel ever.
Yup.
Writing quality is good enough to read, updates there isn't much to talk about since there is only one chapter, almost no story development, no characters that are really mentioned, and this writing basically is just world background
From the few sentences that makes up the 'first chapter': Bad grammar (Probably) cliched plot Copycat summary over just about every other overpowered protagonist from a Chinese novel ever. Yup.