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Chapter 318: A Date with Lucy; Part 2

Earth Land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, Hargeon

 

February, x785.

 

"Mira? Why are you here?" Lucy asked in a confused tone.

 

Smiling brightly, though she was slightly confused to see Alfonzo and Lucy, Mirajane replied to Lucy's question without showing it.

 

"I'm on a quest." Mirajane replied. "Yajima hasn't filled all the positions here yet, since the restaurant opened not too long ago. So, he commissioned a quest for waiters and waitresses."

 

"Oh…" Lucy replied.

 

Then, Lucy looked over the uniform Mirajane was wearing. And when she saw how much cleavage and thigh it showed, she could not help but shake her head.

 

"Well, that uniform makes it obvious that Yajima is one of Master Makarov's best friends." Lucy said with a wry smile. "I mean, look how much skin you're showing."

 

"Yeah, they're both old perverts." Alfonzo added with a wry smile on of his own.

 

"Really?" Mirajane asked while looking down at herself. "But I think it's cute."

 

"Of course, you do." Alfonzo replied while rolling his eyes. "Anyway, yeah, can we get a table for two?"

 

"Of course!" Mirajane replied enthusiastically. "Right this way."

 

With that, Mirajane picked up a couple of menus. Then she gestured Alfonzo and Lucy to follow her while making her way towards a small table for two.

 

A moment later, Alfonzo, Mirajane, and Lucy were standing in front of a table in the corner of the restaurant near a window that gave a great view of the harbor and the ocean. Then, Alfonzo pulled Lucy's chair out for her before helping her get closer to the table, before taking his own seat. Meanwhile, Mirajane looked at all this with a bit of envy in her gaze.

 

"Then, please have a look at the menu." Mirajane said, hiding her envy with a bright smile. "Your waitress should be here shortly to take your orders. In the meantime, can I start you off with something to drink?"

 

'I'm definitely gonna get him to take me out on a date like this, too.' Mirajane thought to herself.

 

A few moments later, Mirajane left the table after taking Alfonzo and Lucy's drink orders.

 

"That was a real surprise." Lucy said as she opened the menu. "I really wasn't expecting to see Mira here."

 

"Yeah, something tells me she's not the only one here, either." Alfonzo replied.

 

"Really?" Lucy asked, looking up from the menu.

 

Nodding his head, Alfonzo also looked over the menu. And although he had not spread his [Magic Power Detection], his instincts were telling him that he would meet more people he was acquainted with during his date with Lucy.

 

"So, since you helped with the menu, is there anything you recommend?" Lucy asked while reading the menu.

 

"That depends." Alfonzo replied. "Is there anything you're in the mood for?"

 

"Hmm… Something light, I guess." Lucy replied.

 

"Then, how about this?" Alfonzo said after taking a few more looks at the menu. A moment later, he turned his menu around to face Lucy and pointed at a particular dish. "The Guillotine Crab Meat Salad should be pretty good."

 

Finding the dish in her own menu, Lucy took a moment to read its description. Then, she nodded her head in agreement.

 

"Sounds good, I'll have that." Lucy said with a smile. "What about you, what will you have?"

 

"I think I'll go with the Beastman Curry." Alfonzo replied. "I'm in the mood for something with deep flavor."

 

"Oh…" Lucy muttered while checking the description of the Beastman Curry. Then, with a slight frown, she continued. "It looks really spicy…"

 

"It can be." Alfonzo replied. "But you can choose the spice level."

 

"I see." Lucy replied with a nod. "Then, maybe I'll try it next time."

 

*Thud!*

 

Before the conversation could continue any further, Alfonzo and Lucy felt the table shake, accompanied by the sound of something being placed on it. Assuming that it was their waitress with their drinks, they both looked towards the sound.

 

"Yup, my instincts were right." Alfonzo muttered with a wry smile on his face.

 

"Good evening. I'm Erza, and I'll be your waitress tonight." Erza said with half of her butt on the table, her skirt flipped to reveal most of her thigh and half of her butt, her left hand supporting herself on the table, a tray with two glasses in her right hand, and a seductive smile on her face while her hair, styled into a pair of low ponytails, hung in front of her chest with the tips of her ponytails disappearing into the valley of her cleavage.

 

Meanwhile, Lucy could only gawk at Erza with her eyes and mouth wide open in surprise.

 

"Hey, Erza." Alfonzo said. "So, is this your trick to get tips from the male customers?"

 

"Oh, Alfonzo, it's you." Erza said, her smile becoming much more sincere after seeing her fiancée. Then, she glanced at Lucy. "And I see you brought Lucy with you. I guess that means today was the day for your date, was it?"

 

"That's right." Alfonzo replied with a nod. "But you really don't have to do all that. I promise the tip will be good, so just act normal, okay?"

 

"Of course." Erza said as she stood up from the table. "Here are your drinks."

 

With that, Erza placed the drinks on the table. Then, she pulled a small notebook from behind her apron.

 

"Have you decided what you'll be having tonight?" Erza asked. "If so, then I'd be happy to take your order."

 

With that, Lucy snapped back to her senses. Then, she and Alfonzo gave Erza their orders.

 

After receiving the two's orders, Erza stayed to chat for a few moments before taking the orders back to the kitchen. And after she left, Alfonzo and Lucy continued to chat.

 

Not much later, the couple's dishes were served. However, instead of Erza, it was Marin who brought out their orders.

 

"Wow, you really all took the same quest?" Lucy asked, surprised to see so many people she knew in the restaurant.

 

"Yup." Marin replied with a smile. "Originally, it was just supposed to be me and Mira. But after Erza saw the uniform, she insisted on coming, too. To be honest, we were really worried about bringing her with us. I mean, she tends to break just about everything she touches."

 

"And how's that been working out?" Alfonzo asked as Marin placed his curry in front of him.

 

"Better than expected." Marin replied with a smile. "Since Yajima knew her… track record… he only lets her take drink orders."

 

"That's probably a good call." Lucy said as Marin placed her salad down in front of her.

 

"Yeah, I can only imagine how many broken dishes and how much wasted food would have happened as a result. Luckily, she's only broken thirteen glasses today. So, our pay shouldn't be docked too much."

 

Hearing that, Alfonzo and Lucy could only smile at Marin with sympathy.

 

"Anyway, I hope you enjoy your meal." Marin said with a small bow and a bright smile. "If you need anything, just call out and one of the waitresses will be happy to help."

 

"Thanks." Alfonzo and Lucy replied with smiles of their own.

 

After receiving their meals, Alfonzo and Lucy spent the next half hour talking, eating, and being teased by their friends on the wait staff. They even ordered dessert, with Lucy ordering a Ruby Parfait and Alfonzo ordering vanilla ice cream smothered in hot raspberries and raspberry sauce.

 

And to their surprise, Yajima himself brought out their desserts. Then, after chatting with them for a few minutes, he waived their bill as thanks for Alfonzo helping him with the recipes. Then, after saying goodbye, Alfonzo and Lucy left the restaurant with satisfaction.

 

"That was really good." Lucy said with a smile while holding Alfonzo's arm as the two left 8-Island. "And Levy was right, it was almost as good as your cooking."

 

"Yeah, Yajima really is a great cook." Alfonzo replied with a smile of his own. "Anyway, now that dinner is over, how about a walk around Hargeon?"

 

"Sure." Lucy replied with a nod. "I haven't really walked around Hargeon since the day I met Natsu."

 

"Hahaha!" Alfonzo laughed after thinking back to that day more than half a year ago. "Natsu destroyed the bell in the clock tower, and I had to clean up his mess."

 

"Yeah, and I was almost tricked into becoming a slave on another continent." Lucy added while hanging her head.

 

"But because that guy… what was his name? Bora, I think… was pretending to be from Fairy Tail, he really pissed Natsu off." Alfonzo said.

 

"Yeah, then with Happy, he came flying to the ship." Lucy said, regaining her smile. "And then, he crashed through the cabin's ceiling and… got motion sickness immediately. Hahaha!"

 

Reaching that point, Lucy could not help but laugh loudly, drawing attention to the couple as they walked through the streets of Hargeon.

 

"Luckily, the distraction he provided was enough for Happy to whisk me off of the ship before he ran out of magic power and we both fell into the sea." Lucy continued after she got her laughter under control. "Then, I found my [Celestial Spirit Keys], which that creep, Bora, had thrown away, and I forced the ship back to the shore with Aquarius."

 

"And shortly after that, Lici and I showed up and forced Natsu to apologize for all the damage he caused while he beat up Bora and his goons." Alfonzo said, concluding the story.

 

"Yup." Lucy replied with a smile and a nod. "And that day, even though it started off so badly, was probably the luckiest day of my life. Because of all that stuff, I got to join Fairy Tail… And meet you."

 

Lucy said the last part so quietly that if Alfonzo's body hadn't been strengthened by magic power for more than a decade, he would have missed it. However, instead of responding, Alfonzo simply grabbed Lucy's hand and smiled at her warmly.

 

And with that, the two continued to chat as they visited a few shops. They even stopped at the Taylor Shop to see how things were going. Then after walking around for a couple hours, they returned to 8-Island, where they left Alfonzo's Vanquish, before hopping in the car and starting their trip back to Magnolia.

 

Earth Land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, Magnolia.

 

A little more than two hours later, Alfonzo pulled up outside of Fairy Hills. And during the entire trip back from Hargeon, he chatted happily with Lucy, though they did not really talk about anything too deep. Well, other than magic. That conversation got pretty deep. But as wizards, that was to be expected.

 

"*Sigh* I guess I'm home." Lucy said, sounding a bit reluctant.

 

"Yeah." Alfonzo replied, sounding a bit reluctant as well. "I almost don't wanna let you leave."

 

Hearing that, Lucy wore a small smile. Before she could respond, however, Alfonzo continued.

 

"But, like they say, all good things must come to an end." Alfonzo said as he opened his car door.

 

Then, like he did at 8-Island, Alfonzo walked around the car and opened Lucy's door for her before offering her his hand.

 

"I guess you're right." Lucy said as she took Alfonzo's hand.

 

Then, after closing the door, Alfonzo walked Lucy to the front doors of the women's dormitory.

 

"I had a really good time tonight." Lucy said while twirling a lock of her hair around her finger after she and Alfonzo stopped just outside the doors.

 

"Me too." Alfonzo replied with a smile. "I even got a little something that I thought would look good on you."

 

"Huh? When did you do that?" Lucy asked in a disbelieving tone.

 

"I have my ways." Alfonzo said as he reached into the front pocket of his pants. "I hope you like it."

 

Once Alfonzo pulled his hand out of his pocket, he was holding a small box, though it was much bigger than a ring case, so Lucy did not have any weird misunderstandings. And when Alfonzo eventually opened the box, Lucy's eyes sparkled.

 

Lying in the box was a black butterfly hair clip encrusted with pink gem stones. Something that would match her current outfit perfectly.

 

"It's so pretty." Lucy said as she reached for the hair clip.

 

A moment later, she removed the hair clip she was wearing to fasten her side tail in place and replaced it with the one Alfonzo bought for her.

 

"How does it look?" Lucy asked with a smile.

 

"It looks great." Alfonzo replied with a smile of his own. "I guess spending all that time with a fashion designer made it so I'm not too bad at picking out accessories, huh?"

 

Hearing that, Lucy could not help but giggle.

 

"Thank you, Alfonzo.' Lucy said softly. "I really did have fun tonight."

 

"Then, we'll have to do this again." Alfonzo replied with a smile.

 

Smiling in response, Lucy looked up at Alfonzo. Then, she slowly closed her eyes while slightly puckering her lips.

 

Understanding what Lucy wanted, Alfonzo lowered his head and planted a chased kiss on her soft, pink lips.

 

Separating their lips after a few seconds, Alfonzo smiled at the lost expression on Lucy's face.

 

"Well, it's about time I---" Alfonzo started to say before he was interrupted.

 

Before he could finish speaking, Lucy grabbed the front of Alfonzo's shirt with both hands and pulled him down into another, much more passionate, kiss. Though, she did not insert her tongue.

 

Then, after about a minute, Lucy finally let go of Alfonzo with her face completely red.

 

"Well, it's getting late, so I'm gonna go to bed." Lucy said very quickly. Then, she turned toward the dorm's entrance and pulled the door open. "I really had fun and I hope we can go out again, soon. Okay, good night, bye!"

 

With that, Lucy ran inside and slammed the door behind her, leaving Alfonzo standing there thoroughly confused. Still, after a few seconds, Alfonzo smiled as he turned away from Fairy Hills and got returned home.

 

Lucy, on the other hand, had made it to her room in record time. And she was currently sitting on the floor of her room with her back against the door while banging her fists on the sides of her head.

 

"Stupid! Stupid! Stupid!" Lucy shouted at herself. "After doing all that, I ran away and forgot to ask him to be my boyfriend. Ooh! I'm so stupid!"


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Chapter 319: Two Letters

Earth Land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, Magnolia.

 

February, x785.

 

"Ooh~~~~~! Lu, you're so bold!" Levy squealed excitedly while Lucy told her about her date with Alfonzo the day before.

 

"Levy~~~! Keep it down.' Lucy said while covering Levy's mouth with her hands. "I'm telling you, not the whole guild."

 

"Okay, okay, I'm sorry." Levy said with a smile after peeling Lucy's hands away from her mouth. "Anyway, did you invite him inside?"

 

"Of course not." Lucy replied while shaking her head. "*Sigh* I ran away..."

 

Levy could only look at Lucy in dumbfounded amazement.

 

"... Even worse, I didn't even ask him to be my boyfriend." Lucy said while covering her face with her hands.

 

With that, the small table where the two girls sat fell silent.

 

"*Sigh* What am I gonna do with you, Lu?" Levy asked while smiling wryly.

 

"Hey, Lucy!" Natsu shouted as he approached the table where Levy and Lucy were sitting. "Erza, Happy, the streaker and I are gonna take a quest. You wanna come with us?"

 

"*Sigh* Fine..." Lucy said while uncovering her face. "It will at least help me take my mind off my major screw up last night."

 

"Don't worry about it so much, Lu." Levy said with a conciliatory smile. "I'm sure things aren't as bad as you think."

 

"I hope so." Lucy said as she walked away from the table. "I'll see you later, Levy.'

 

"Bye, Lu." Levy replied with a wave.

 

Meanwhile, at a table on the other side of the guild hall, Alfonzo, Elicia, Mirajane, Marin, and Sun watched Lucy join Erza, Gray, Natsu, and Happy for their quest.

 

"You know, Fonzie." Elicia said with a wry smile on her face. "If I hadn't heard the story from you last night, I would have thought that your date with Lucy went absolutely horribly."

 

"I know, right." Marin said in a cheerful tone. "But still, seeing her freak out like this is kinda... No, really cute, isn't it?"

 

While Elicia and Mirajane agreed with Marin, sun watched Lucy leave with a concerned expression on her face. Then, once Team Natsu had left the guild hall, she turned to Alfonzo.

 

"I think you should talk to her about this, Alfonzo." Sun said in a caring tone.

 

"*Chuckle* Do you really think I haven't tried, Sun?" Alfonzo asked while shaking his head. "In fact, I tried this morning before training started. But she ran away as soon as I got close. Though, seeing her face that red was pretty cute."

 

"Anyway, Lucy's just embarrassed." Mirajane said with a pleasant smile on her face. "I'm sure she'll get over it soon. Then, she'll be back to normal again."

 

"Mira's right." Alfonzo replied with a shrug. "Anyway, does anyone know where Cana went? She was with us until we finished training. But I haven't' seen her since we split up to take a shower."

 

"Oh, she'll probably be gone for the next few days." Marin said. "Her dad ambushed her outside the locker room. Said something about taking her out on her first S-Class quest."

 

"I guess I should have seen that coming." Alfonzo replied while smiling wryly. "Anyway, what do you ladies plan to do for the rest of the day?"

 

Before Elicia, Mirajane, Marin, or sun could respond, the guild's doors slid open, drawing their attention in that direction.

 

"Finally, we're back." Ultear said as she walked through the open guild doors.

 

"I never wanna take a quest like that ever again." Meredy said, sounding like she might pass out at any moment.

 

"Tear and Meredy are back!" Elicia shouted happily.

 

Hearing Elicia's exclamation, Ultear and Meredy's attention was drawn in her direction immediately. Then, after seeing her waving at them energetically, they both could not help but smile.

 

"Hey, guys." Ultear said with a smile. "We'll be right back, we have to report to Mom on our quest. Then, we'll come back down and tell you all about it."

 

"See you later!" Meredy said with a wave of her own as she and Ultear made their way to the elevator to give their report in Ur's office.

 

"What quest did they take, anyway?" Sun asked curiously. "I mean, they look exhausted."

 

"I'm not sure." Marin replied. But I remember when they left, they thought it would be pretty easy."

 

"We'll just have to wait until they come back, I guess." Alfonzo said while resting his right elbow on the table and using his palm to support his cheek.

 

Nodding at Alfonzo's assessment, the girls continued to chat happily. Then, after about half an hour, the elevator doors opened, through which, Ultear and Meredy re-entered the main hall.

 

"So, what quest did you take?" Mirajane asked curiously when Ultear and Meredy neared the table.

 

"*Sigh* We had to investigate a pub and its inhabitants in a small town in the south called Dublith." Ultear replied as she plopped down in a seat at the table. "It seemed like a simple B-Class quest at first. But we found and saw some stuff that would definitely raise the rank to S-Class if we knew about it beforehand."

 

Hearing that, Mirajane, Marin, and Sun leaned forward with interest. Meanwhile, Alfonzo and Elicia exchanged concerned glances."

 

"Oh, before I get too into the story…" Ultear muttered as she turned her attention to Alfonzo. "Mom told me to have you go up to her office, Alfonzo. I ran into the mail man on my way back, and two of the letters had something to do with you."

 

"*Sigh* Fine." Alfonzo said as he picked himself up from the table. "You'll just have to tell me the story when I get back."

 

"Of course." Meredy replied with a smile. "And when you hear it, I bet it will blow your socks off."

 

"Damn… Now I really wanna hear it." Alfonzo muttered as he walked away from the table. "Maybe I should just go see Ur after the story is over."

 

"Do you really wanna talk to a grumpy Ur?" Elicia asked with a wry smile. "Just go. It's not like you can't hear the story later, right?"

 

"Yeah, yeah, I know." Alfonzo said as he walked away. "See ya later."

 

"Anyway, what was so weird about that pub?" Marin asked curiously. "Were they hiding some kind of monster that made their drinks addictive or something?"

 

"If that had been it, we wouldn't have had so much to worry about." Ultear replied.

 

"Then, what was the big deal?" Sun asked, her curiosity peaking as well.

 

"Have you ever heard of the term, homunculus?" Ultear asked. "Or maybe, Chimera?"

 

At that point, the elevator doors closed, separating Alfonzo from the sounds in the guild's main hall.

 

"Dublith… Homunculus… Chimera…" Alfonzo muttered to himself while the elevator rose to the top floor. "So, they probably ran into Greed. I wonder if the Elrics were there, too. But if they were, then they probably ran into Bradley, as well. Or maybe they just ran into Izumi Curtis and her swoll ass husband, Sig. Then again, since we're in a different world, the whole timeline could be different, too."

 

Before he could think any further, however, the elevator doors opened once again, and Alfonzo was pulled back to the present.

 

"Good, you're here." Ur said from behind her desk." Come, have a seat. There are a few things we need to discuss."

 

Curious about the letters that made Ur call him up to her office, Alfonzo stepped out of the elevator and made his way over to Ur's desk before taking a seat.

 

"Ultear said there were two letters that came in, and had something to do with me." Alfonzo said after making himself comfortable. "So, what's up? I'm pretty sure I didn't break anything on my last quest."

 

"We both know that's not why I called you up here, Kid." Ur said with a wry smile. "It's actually for a much bigger deal than that."

 

As she spoke, Ur slid the first of two letters lying on her desk towards Alfonzo.

 

Picking up the letter, Alfonzo read it quickly before raising an eyebrow.

 

"So, a group from Mermaid Heel is coming to visit?" Alfonzo asked as he put the letter back on the desk. "I guess they really were interested in our training facilities after I met up with Yoruichi for that quest, huh? But their guild master is coming with them, too? You know, now that I think about it, I don't even know who she is."

 

"I've actually never met her, either." Ur said while lightly shaking her head. "But according to the rumors, she might be the best swordsman on all of Ishgar."

 

'I wonder if she's another crossover that shouldn't even be in this world.' Alfonzo thought to himself. 'Still, I'm really curious to know who she is. I mean, even in the Fairy Tail canon, I don't think Mermaid Heel's guild master was ever mentioned.'

 

"Seriously?" Alfonzo asked with interest. "Then, we probably shouldn't let Erza meet her. You know how gung ho she can get about sparring with strong swordsman."

 

"Yeah…" Ur said while rubbing her temples. "I just hope things don't get out of hand if they meet. Anyway, I want you to be present for negotiations. Like you said, I'm sure they want you to build training rooms for them."

 

"And I assume the guild wants a cut, correct?" Alfonzo said while lacing his fingers together under his chin and resting his elbows on Ur's desk.

 

"I don't' even know why you asked." Ur replied while rolling her eyes. "You already know when it comes to matters between guilds like this, the guild gets a cut. But you don't' have to worry, we'll only be taking fifteen percent. So, I hope you fleece them for as much as you can."

 

By the end, Ur was grinning devilishly.

 

'*Sigh* The position of guild master has turned Ur into a dirty capitalist.' Alfonzo thought to himself while putting on a similar grin. 'And I like it.'

 

"Sure, I'll do what I can, within reason." Alfonzo replied. "But if I'm gonna be negotiating with a guild master, I'm sure they'll have a few tricks up their sleeves."

 

"I know." Ur replied. "But since you're the only one who can build training chambers like ours, for now, we'll still have the advantage in negotiations."

 

Nodding in response, Alfonzo let his gaze fall on the second letter that was lying on Ur's desk.

 

"So, what's the other reason you called me up here?" Alfonzo asked.

 

"*Sigh* It's something I'd rather not have to deal with at all." Ur replied, her mood souring visibly. Then, she slid the second letter to Alfonzo and leaned back in her chair. "Here, take a look for yourself."

 

Picking up the letter, Alfonzo read it quickly. Immediately upon seeing the contents of the letter, his face split into a vicious smile. And that smile only widened the mor he read.

 

"So, the Magic Council wants to settle, huh?" Alfonzo said calmly while putting the letter down. "They want to let us punish Org, who was the one that ordered that Mest… or Doranbolt… or whatever he's going by to infiltrate our guild and try to kidnap Wendy. Oh, he's also the one that ordered the naval fleet to just watch us fight with Grimoire Heart, too. And they think that will be enough to drop the fact that they fired the fucking Etherion on us? Yeah, fuck that."

 

"*Sigh* I can already see where this is going." Ur muttered while rubbing her temples again. And I can already feel the headache that will come along with it. But I'll admit, we can't let them off so easy."

 

"Yeah, that Magic Council needs to be completely rebuilt." Alfonzo said with a grin. "And if my plan works, you'll be able to wipe that smug smile off of Gramps face, too. And according to this letter, we've got about two months to prepare"

 

Hearing that, Ur perked up immediately.

 

"Ooh… Tell me more." Ur said, her devilish grin reappearing on her face.

 

Like that, Alfonzo and Ur discussed, in detail, the plans for the trial of Fairy Tail Vs. the Magic Council. Meanwhile, in a large house on the shore of Lake Sciliora, a short old man, Makarov, sneezed several times in a row while sitting at a small table holding a chess board.

 

"What's wrong, Gramps?" Laxus asked while moving a piece on the board. "You catching a cold?"

 

"No, I don't think so." Makarov replied while wiping his nose with a handkerchief. "There are probably some beautiful ladies talking about me, that's all. By the way, did I ever tell you about how popular I was when I was your age, Laxus? You know, I had more girls interested in me than Alfonzo does…"

 

'*Sigh* Here we go again.' Laxus thought as he contemplated his next move. 'Grandpa really has gotten delusional in his old age. But at least he's not making me wait for him to make his move while he tells his clearly fictional story of the popularity he had in his youth.'


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