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Beautiful !! I was extremely happy knowing that this is free since I'm a poor lad
the book is fun and enjoyable while it lasts, the ending isn't the most satisfying though in my opinion.
I like this kind of stories to some extent, especially if there is a system and also thanks to the writer for his mastery of the plot [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Reading from cordelia’s point of view has been amazing, I have loved the overall progression of this world, and would love to see more from all of these characters!!
As you can tell by my rating, I love this novel. From beginning to end it is a masterpiece. The ending is perfect in my opinion making me want more afterwards. And it has 200+ free chapters, what’s more to love? Also the author said that once they get done with their other novel they will make a part two.
Just by being free book with a good grammar and a story that I like you merit 5 stars. A good book atleast for me, even if I jumped some chapters at the beginning because I was bored,but I kept reading anyway because it was still good and it got more interesting the far I was in the story
I really enjoyed reading this, the characters are fun and the mc’s naivety is has brought a smile to my face on a few occasions, the grammar and punctuation could use a few touch ups but its ten times better then a lot of stuff on here, overall its great☺️
this is a great book but the current ending is kinda lackluster but I know later no we will see more of these great characters later on maybe within a eternal fantasy
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This story is very good and well built the only thing I could say is that I wish it was a little longer but other than that the story is great.
Everything was ok, but then MC(psycho murderer with trust issues) suddenly decided to establish soul link(the one where both will die if one of them is dead) with girl she knows for a couple of years. dropped right after this.
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well this is getting interesting well wishe you luck and updates are good to keep it up and love this please don drop this gud luck òoooooooooo
To be honest, this novel is a lot of fun to read and it's well wrote(even with some occasional mistakes). But a little warning, if you are here so some fantasy novel with YURI, then you are wasting your time. The only yuri there is, are in the ch ~60ish and that's all. After that, till at least the ch 200(where i stoped), it almost disappear completely (beside the very, veryyyyyyyyyy occasional subtexts there is...). It's still a great read if you are not in search of some yuri~
I loved the way the author built up the characters, and did not just give them powers instantly. the bit where the main character has no sense of direction and has terrible luck was hilarious.
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A great read and looking forward to the next novel eternal universe online; And I hope there is a sequel to evolution of the god slayer. I am looking forward for the shenanigans that Astur will get up to.
Original, with a fascinating world and characters. The interactions between characters and humor in general is absolutely brilliant! Can’t wait to see how the story continues to unfold! Give it a shot, its more than worth the time 😁
The story is very good the worldbuilding also the characters. What is bad about the book is some spelling and grammer mistakes and sometimes some chances on where the main character want to go like how she wants to level up.
Aslong as you ignored the big skips in stat numbers and how they work only in certain cases it's an interesting read at start, with MC being a serial killer in previous life and reincarnating as a snake evolving. However at ch74 when MC willingly entered a soul contract with a dragonoid(basically a human with dragon ancestors) where if one died, the other would die aswel I lost all interest. TL;DR It started out great but went downhill during the transformation of MC with sociopathic personality -> doormat that willingly gives life away
I wanna be a dragon tamer as well sooooooooooooooooooooooooo bad.. Wait I suddenly remembered a tamed dragon after just one kiss at the near end of the season.. Anyways, love the story and everything
The only thing I can say that is truly good about the book is the worldbuilding and the world itself. It feels fleshed out and fantastic. The story is okay, updates are frequent and quality is good enough. What this story fails at though, is the characters. First, the protagonist. Alright, how did she go from a sociopath to some doormat? It's unrealistic, VERY unrealistic as sociopath tends to feel little to no emotions. Then there's the other characters, most of which are tolerable at best. The yuri feels forced and I don't feel what I enjoy most from reading it here, at all. It feels as though it doesn't belong and in my opinion it'd be better without. TLDR; it's good for the most part but too much unnecessary stuff and characters are tolerable at best. Would not recommend.
Decent, but the focus of the characters at later chapters gets worse because it starts to focus a bit too much on other characters and not developing on the main couple.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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i i’m really liking the story so far but it’s weird that it isnt more popular . .
Very interesting, i love history in general. I'm in chap 102 now but i just hope she will stop victimizing herself by the gods who send her into this world. Keep it up ! :) (english is not my main language)
I love it this story is great ive been reading for a while now i thought i already reviewed but apparently not but its great (yuri is the superior romance).
It has a nice story.I like this kind of stories but there is one problem.The problem is the paragraph.It is such a huge paragrah.You need to break the paragraph into small paragraph abou 3-5 lines.Thank you
This book is very good, Even if the story isn’t planned in advanced, it moves smoothly. The publication is regular and the writting quality is good, the world is very well developed with a good mythology. The only negative point I see is that the mc has become too nice compared to the start. She is completly controlled by Aurelia and is no longer a real evil bandit (a bit like Milla, she is a false bandit) ** : sorry for the mistakes english is not my original language
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Great book great dragon and great yuri. the trinity of success. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Author here. I won't shamelessly be giving 5 stars all around since this work does not deserve it. As far as the writing quality and consistency of updates are, it's pretty decent, but nothing special as errors pop up here and there. The story is a little inconsistent and silly, especially early on. In my opinion, it gets better later, but that's debatable. The character design and development is also inconsistent. The protagonist does massive shifts in personality halfway through for questionable reasons at best. The Only thing I can say I have any real confidence in is the World Background. As I have been refining that for ages, albeit in my head. Most inconsistencies come from the way I chose to write this novel. Basically I just wing it every day and write what comes to mind. I good way to ensure consistent updates, which was what I was originally aiming for when I started. But it leads to poor story and character development.
Beautiful !! I was extremely happy knowing that this is free since I'm a poor lad
the book is fun and enjoyable while it lasts, the ending isn't the most satisfying though in my opinion.
I like this kind of stories to some extent, especially if there is a system and also thanks to the writer for his mastery of the plot [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Reading from cordelia’s point of view has been amazing, I have loved the overall progression of this world, and would love to see more from all of these characters!!
As you can tell by my rating, I love this novel. From beginning to end it is a masterpiece. The ending is perfect in my opinion making me want more afterwards. And it has 200+ free chapters, what’s more to love? Also the author said that once they get done with their other novel they will make a part two.
Just by being free book with a good grammar and a story that I like you merit 5 stars. A good book atleast for me, even if I jumped some chapters at the beginning because I was bored,but I kept reading anyway because it was still good and it got more interesting the far I was in the story
I really enjoyed reading this, the characters are fun and the mc’s naivety is has brought a smile to my face on a few occasions, the grammar and punctuation could use a few touch ups but its ten times better then a lot of stuff on here, overall its great☺️
this is a great book but the current ending is kinda lackluster but I know later no we will see more of these great characters later on maybe within a eternal fantasy
woman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mcwoman mc
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This story is very good and well built the only thing I could say is that I wish it was a little longer but other than that the story is great.
Everything was ok, but then MC(psycho murderer with trust issues) suddenly decided to establish soul link(the one where both will die if one of them is dead) with girl she knows for a couple of years. dropped right after this.
Reveal Spoiler well this is getting interesting well wishe you luck and updates are good to keep it up and love this please don drop this gud luck òoooooooooo
To be honest, this novel is a lot of fun to read and it's well wrote(even with some occasional mistakes). But a little warning, if you are here so some fantasy novel with YURI, then you are wasting your time. The only yuri there is, are in the ch ~60ish and that's all. After that, till at least the ch 200(where i stoped), it almost disappear completely (beside the very, veryyyyyyyyyy occasional subtexts there is...). It's still a great read if you are not in search of some yuri~
I loved the way the author built up the characters, and did not just give them powers instantly. the bit where the main character has no sense of direction and has terrible luck was hilarious.
Reveal Spoiler A great read and looking forward to the next novel eternal universe online; And I hope there is a sequel to evolution of the god slayer. I am looking forward for the shenanigans that Astur will get up to.
Original, with a fascinating world and characters. The interactions between characters and humor in general is absolutely brilliant! Can’t wait to see how the story continues to unfold! Give it a shot, its more than worth the time 😁
The story is very good the worldbuilding also the characters. What is bad about the book is some spelling and grammer mistakes and sometimes some chances on where the main character want to go like how she wants to level up.
Aslong as you ignored the big skips in stat numbers and how they work only in certain cases it's an interesting read at start, with MC being a serial killer in previous life and reincarnating as a snake evolving. However at ch74 when MC willingly entered a soul contract with a dragonoid(basically a human with dragon ancestors) where if one died, the other would die aswel I lost all interest. TL;DR It started out great but went downhill during the transformation of MC with sociopathic personality -> doormat that willingly gives life away
I wanna be a dragon tamer as well sooooooooooooooooooooooooo bad.. Wait I suddenly remembered a tamed dragon after just one kiss at the near end of the season.. Anyways, love the story and everything
The only thing I can say that is truly good about the book is the worldbuilding and the world itself. It feels fleshed out and fantastic. The story is okay, updates are frequent and quality is good enough. What this story fails at though, is the characters. First, the protagonist. Alright, how did she go from a sociopath to some doormat? It's unrealistic, VERY unrealistic as sociopath tends to feel little to no emotions. Then there's the other characters, most of which are tolerable at best. The yuri feels forced and I don't feel what I enjoy most from reading it here, at all. It feels as though it doesn't belong and in my opinion it'd be better without. TLDR; it's good for the most part but too much unnecessary stuff and characters are tolerable at best. Would not recommend.
Decent, but the focus of the characters at later chapters gets worse because it starts to focus a bit too much on other characters and not developing on the main couple.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Reveal Spoiler i i’m really liking the story so far but it’s weird that it isnt more popular . .
Very interesting, i love history in general. I'm in chap 102 now but i just hope she will stop victimizing herself by the gods who send her into this world. Keep it up ! :) (english is not my main language)
I love it this story is great ive been reading for a while now i thought i already reviewed but apparently not but its great (yuri is the superior romance).
It has a nice story.I like this kind of stories but there is one problem.The problem is the paragraph.It is such a huge paragrah.You need to break the paragraph into small paragraph abou 3-5 lines.Thank you
This book is very good, Even if the story isn’t planned in advanced, it moves smoothly. The publication is regular and the writting quality is good, the world is very well developed with a good mythology. The only negative point I see is that the mc has become too nice compared to the start. She is completly controlled by Aurelia and is no longer a real evil bandit (a bit like Milla, she is a false bandit) ** : sorry for the mistakes english is not my original language
Reveal Spoiler Great book great dragon and great yuri. the trinity of success. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Author here. I won't shamelessly be giving 5 stars all around since this work does not deserve it. As far as the writing quality and consistency of updates are, it's pretty decent, but nothing special as errors pop up here and there. The story is a little inconsistent and silly, especially early on. In my opinion, it gets better later, but that's debatable. The character design and development is also inconsistent. The protagonist does massive shifts in personality halfway through for questionable reasons at best. The Only thing I can say I have any real confidence in is the World Background. As I have been refining that for ages, albeit in my head. Most inconsistencies come from the way I chose to write this novel. Basically I just wing it every day and write what comes to mind. I good way to ensure consistent updates, which was what I was originally aiming for when I started. But it leads to poor story and character development.