/ Teen / Everything Hurts
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Months ago, Rebecca was just as happy, as chipper, and as genuine as her boyfriend. She thought about what she was feeling and after eight months of self-evaluation, everything changed.
She fell out of love.
It took her a lot of overthinking and self-evaluation, wondering why did it hit her just now; when her boyfriend is asking her to marry him, will she say yes or no?
Everything seems a little off the hook, but she knows what they have needs to stop. Her reasons of falling out of love?
THE TRUTH.
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the female lead is quite frustrated with normal routine life and wants a break.. you succeeded in making us understand what female lead going through author.. I think Bryan is a nice guy and he was accused falsely.. Looking forward how the story goes from now on
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I like the plot and I like how the characters are fleshed out. I find myself wanting to know what will happen next and nervously biting my nails when I have a clue with what's going on. The only problem I have are the grammatical errors here and there. Besides that though, this story is great and I'm adding it to my library.
The story is very well written with exquisite descriptions, the characters are fleshed out and there feelings conveyed in very adequately. All in all a very good read.
This is a lot darker than what I'm usually used to reading, haha. So far, pretty good. Quality is quite good, though there were a few spots that had some grammatical errors, but those can be fixed with a quick edit. The author conveys a lot of emotion through the different character POVs, so good job author. Keep writing!
So far so good. I see a lot of potential in Rebecca but I want to see more of the the "world" of Everything Hurts but I'm sure we're gonna get there eventually. I'm very excited to see where this leads.
I must say I really enjoyed reading this, especially from chapter one. I really love how I got to know fragments of your character's personality in a detailed manner. Besides the fact that it was interesting, I also could feel myself relating to the situation. So far, this is all I have to say. Keep going, author!
There's a lot of emotion here with excellent characters which are established quickly. The author is really good at getting across how much the characters are hurting, through descriptions and the first person perspective used.
So far so good! Please carry on updating! 11 chapters are just too short! I can't wait to read more of it
I am very happy that you are so far liking this story. I am having a hard time updating it due to some personal matters but, at least we're here somewhere. Thank you for the support I truly appreciate it. :)
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So we got a good story here with great charecters, good development overall everything here his done pretty well, hard to pin point any faults as i can't see any! So keep on going Author you got something good here!