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i really love this author. super thumbs up.you can write a good novel and as well you can draw the characters nicely.keep it up and more update stories pls.
Repetitive author, it seems like she doesn't know what to write and every time it's THE SAME TALKS AND MORAL LESSONS, how boring. Let's improve this plot.
Everything was going great until the guys started chasing and drooling over her, how boring and personalityless they are... Not to mention that their descriptions are identical, lol. The author only changes the color of their eyes and hair and says how one is prettier than the other. I preferred her with her "monotonous" personality from before than this one now, where she accepts everyone rubbing up against her and kissing her, while at the same time saying she doesn't like or want anyone (it's up to the author, either she wants it or not, then she's like a fool accepting things). Then comes all this exaggeration of wanting to put her on a pedestal, you completely ruined your own story, the way you told it doesn't make it true, it didn't sound natural.
I like this novel very much. I specialy like her personality. the way she treat her beast her optimistic character.
I LOVE ALL the Character!!! except for the βit©h huang bai xing!!!🤬😡 she's soooo unreasonable and close minded.
Writing quality: ⭐⭐ Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Updating stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ World Background: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ .... This is my rating for this novel and I read up to chapter 104 while giving my review. To be fair, I like the plot and I enjoyed reading it despite not being a fan of reverse harem (or harems in general). The only major problem I have with the novel is the writing quality, hence, the 2 star rating. The pacing is okay and I haven't found any inconsistency with how the dialogue was written, so it's good. The problem was on the use of words and the grammar (though I'm one to talk). There are many grammatical errors I found here and the misuse of the nouns in a sentence like instead of using her/him, it was written as she/he. And also the appropriate use of the -ed,-ing, or -es/s at the end of the word, especially the past and present pronouns. Not just this, I also found errors on the use of punctuation marks, which changes the entire meaning of the sentence. For example, when the author wrote (note: not accurate), "Master, I will teach you something." where the person saying this was the Master himself to his disciple, but this sentence, with the comma (,) symbol being misplaced, changed the whole meaning to where the person saying this was addressing someone as Master and wanting to teach them something. The correct sentence should be, "Master will teach you something." or just the "I will teach you something." The example I gave happened many times in the chapters I've read, not just the Master part but when the people addressed themselves in the 3rd pov but with the added comma after that, which changed the whole meaning of the sentence. Not being mean or anything, but I really suggest to author-sama that you find an editor to help your wonderful works, but if you cannot find them, there's some tools that can help you check for errors like Grammarly or chatgpt or something to improve your work.
Are all male leads involved in the female lead's harem? If so, for sure female lead is going to be broke.And writing emotional displayed are unnecessarily long and this is dropping the mood.
So far I read so I want more to read because I want know how she solve the mystery of killer want kill her
though I don't like harem story,but upto chapter 18 I liked it. story is great .in my view if you don't like harem story like me may be you will like it.
Initially I was very excited to read this book. The storyline began very differently from the other novels. But as I read on, the female character, Huang Ying Yue, slowly came across as boring and insipid. I know that the author tried to portray her as a “humble and sincere” person but the description “dull eyes”, and how she kept trying to be so “low-keyed”, etc. adds to the boring and insipid feeling that I get about this character, so much so that I skimmed through the chapters. It’s a pity because this plot is so different and it can be so exciting and interesting.
This story needs some serious editing. I don't know if it's because it's a translation or the authors first language isn't English but it's quite jarring to read. Which is a shame because it sounds so interesting! I'll come back to this one in the future sometime.
I read till 40 chapters and I can tell this is just disappointing. I mean this made me think, how can a strong background become bad by 40, it's not having a flow that can keep me reading anymore.
I didn't expect to have so much fun, the story is interesting and you can see how hard the author tries to involve us in her world.
storyline is very good and interesting, hope yueyue will be seen with other male leads and have more seens in it and everyday waiting for new chapters and overall I enjoyed it ,hope author will introduce us our yueyue life more adventurous ❤
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very lovely story. I like the development of the female character she is gentle but also does not care about much other than her loved ones and family. to the outside world she is calm and strong. good combination
YueYue in white hair Her right eye is purple Her left eye is carmine red The mandala lotus is carmine red and purple color. I don’t know how to edit her eyes’ color T-T Imagine by yourself ღゝ◡╹)ノ♡ Source: Pinterest
i really love this author. super thumbs up.you can write a good novel and as well you can draw the characters nicely.keep it up and more update stories pls.
Repetitive author, it seems like she doesn't know what to write and every time it's THE SAME TALKS AND MORAL LESSONS, how boring. Let's improve this plot.
Everything was going great until the guys started chasing and drooling over her, how boring and personalityless they are... Not to mention that their descriptions are identical, lol. The author only changes the color of their eyes and hair and says how one is prettier than the other. I preferred her with her "monotonous" personality from before than this one now, where she accepts everyone rubbing up against her and kissing her, while at the same time saying she doesn't like or want anyone (it's up to the author, either she wants it or not, then she's like a fool accepting things). Then comes all this exaggeration of wanting to put her on a pedestal, you completely ruined your own story, the way you told it doesn't make it true, it didn't sound natural.
I like this novel very much. I specialy like her personality. the way she treat her beast her optimistic character.
I LOVE ALL the Character!!! except for the βit©h huang bai xing!!!🤬😡 she's soooo unreasonable and close minded.
Writing quality: ⭐⭐ Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Updating stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ World Background: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ .... This is my rating for this novel and I read up to chapter 104 while giving my review. To be fair, I like the plot and I enjoyed reading it despite not being a fan of reverse harem (or harems in general). The only major problem I have with the novel is the writing quality, hence, the 2 star rating. The pacing is okay and I haven't found any inconsistency with how the dialogue was written, so it's good. The problem was on the use of words and the grammar (though I'm one to talk). There are many grammatical errors I found here and the misuse of the nouns in a sentence like instead of using her/him, it was written as she/he. And also the appropriate use of the -ed,-ing, or -es/s at the end of the word, especially the past and present pronouns. Not just this, I also found errors on the use of punctuation marks, which changes the entire meaning of the sentence. For example, when the author wrote (note: not accurate), "Master, I will teach you something." where the person saying this was the Master himself to his disciple, but this sentence, with the comma (,) symbol being misplaced, changed the whole meaning to where the person saying this was addressing someone as Master and wanting to teach them something. The correct sentence should be, "Master will teach you something." or just the "I will teach you something." The example I gave happened many times in the chapters I've read, not just the Master part but when the people addressed themselves in the 3rd pov but with the added comma after that, which changed the whole meaning of the sentence. Not being mean or anything, but I really suggest to author-sama that you find an editor to help your wonderful works, but if you cannot find them, there's some tools that can help you check for errors like Grammarly or chatgpt or something to improve your work.
Are all male leads involved in the female lead's harem? If so, for sure female lead is going to be broke.And writing emotional displayed are unnecessarily long and this is dropping the mood.
So far I read so I want more to read because I want know how she solve the mystery of killer want kill her
though I don't like harem story,but upto chapter 18 I liked it. story is great .in my view if you don't like harem story like me may be you will like it.
Initially I was very excited to read this book. The storyline began very differently from the other novels. But as I read on, the female character, Huang Ying Yue, slowly came across as boring and insipid. I know that the author tried to portray her as a “humble and sincere” person but the description “dull eyes”, and how she kept trying to be so “low-keyed”, etc. adds to the boring and insipid feeling that I get about this character, so much so that I skimmed through the chapters. It’s a pity because this plot is so different and it can be so exciting and interesting.
This story needs some serious editing. I don't know if it's because it's a translation or the authors first language isn't English but it's quite jarring to read. Which is a shame because it sounds so interesting! I'll come back to this one in the future sometime.
I read till 40 chapters and I can tell this is just disappointing. I mean this made me think, how can a strong background become bad by 40, it's not having a flow that can keep me reading anymore.
I didn't expect to have so much fun, the story is interesting and you can see how hard the author tries to involve us in her world.
storyline is very good and interesting, hope yueyue will be seen with other male leads and have more seens in it and everyday waiting for new chapters and overall I enjoyed it ,hope author will introduce us our yueyue life more adventurous ❤
Reveal Spoiler very lovely story. I like the development of the female character she is gentle but also does not care about much other than her loved ones and family. to the outside world she is calm and strong. good combination
YueYue in white hair Her right eye is purple Her left eye is carmine red The mandala lotus is carmine red and purple color. I don’t know how to edit her eyes’ color T-T Imagine by yourself ღゝ◡╹)ノ♡ Source: Pinterest