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Eternal Mana (Hiatus)

Fantasy 51 Chapters 704.9K Views
Author: Eatcelery

4.58 (38 ratings)

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A young man woke up in another world with a reward system.

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Necroda
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This is a really high quality story thats well built and has alot of worldbuilding no easily discernible grammar/spelling mistakes. Interesting plot and a steady progression of the protagonist. If you like a protagonist who isnt overpowered from the start but gets stronger as the story progresses then you should read this book

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NightCloud

The story has a very good grammar and I am really fond of the author's approach to the magic aspect of their universe. Additionally, the addition of the planting/beast growing aspect is a very big plus for me. Lastly, although the story is tagged to include game elements, the way that the author incorporates the system is the way I like it as - not too overpowering nor does it saturate the story with endless "blue screens". Overall, from the quality that I have read so far, I would definitely recommend this as it is a very interesting read.

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Starcracker

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact cttbx123@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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CultivatorMark17

I like the story but i have some suggestions like make a table like status and missions and fo the mc to be more adventurous and also to widen and make the chap.s longer if it can be thats all but ireally love youre story

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MrZeo
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TFernandes

It started generic and went downhill from there. Why Asian novels lack any character development? Why add characters that are not important? And never used? Interesting slow idea that didn't turn out to be any good.

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Zaphyri
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Low review cause crummy dude reviewing every other day 5 stars, not what its for -------------------------------'----- supercalifragilisticexpaladocius

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Dino1971

Good Story,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Dino1971

enjoyable,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..........................................................................

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Dino1971

Good story ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

5yr
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Dino1971

Interesting,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.................................................................................................................................................................

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Dino1971

Manaroot,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.....................................................................

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Dino1971

jump,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,........................................................................................................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

5yr
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Dino1971

enjoyable,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..................................................................................................................

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BKShrek

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Pavan1234

Till now it is an well written novel. Highlights of this novel are system, premise of story and pace of the story. Mc is above average character (nothing too special but not irritating or naive). Hope author completes this novel.

5yr
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Dino1971

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Dino1971

gogo,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,............................................................................................................................................................................../////////////

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immensely_earnest

Celery! The first chapter is really well written. The description of everything is point and it got engaging the moment you wrote "the stick he proudly called a fishing rod." ๐Ÿ˜‚

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Dino1971

good going..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.........................................................................

5yr
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