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nice novel you should more chapter this is good!!!!!!...... and you should do something like showing more about the outer space so it will be more fun to read
There is no comma so it's hard to read, because I read it with a translation so it's hard.yrheijebrhjfieiejheheheiwoowhehehwiwiejrbheiwowowkjre
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Nice novel keep on working and I wait for the nEw chapter thanks keep it up Yoj soupd add more things thaNsk for the great worK And you should not rush the chapters
Nice Novel it should be a fafFic but keep on working and upload more chapter thAnks i would you to add more infromation about the future Of the novel on some chapters
Hey guys be taking a break and relax and try wright later be taking some days a break (: So would like to add some reviews and comment about my mistakes and focus on them thank you This a fanfic i know but i cannot change to fanfic ,it but there will be more than a fanfic there will and original content.....
THe novel has a nice idea if you coLd epxlain a bit more than you will make it look better in the start goi started a bit but but after is gEtting better keep the chapters Up
This an intresting novel with naruto being the fisRt world to cultivation like tranforming to a realm of cultivating that the goal of the sTory in ther start looking forward to more chapters so we can understand better
Nice chapters juSt keep uploading and read more novel so You can improve Your writing And you can make a nice webnovel your idea is very intresting kepp working
Hey guys I am new at writing and not know to much how you get power stones or like the likes cause you have to right over 100k words or something because got in writing because I like it ,Btw this novel has multi universe, domains, of other novel in one cosmos but with multiple cosmos or places with no cultivation realm this novel is bout Ling tian reborn to Naruto world and transforming Naruto world to a realm with cultivation and dominating other domains or plunder then for resources this like fanfic with original content but I can not change to fanfcic and the main cultivation realms will be from the Infinity cosmos wait for more of chapter and will be explained , but basically got a bit lost how the power stones work or you get enabled something like
Thanks for the chapters Well guys this novel is all about cultivation and it starts from Naruto is interesting story is about transforming the Naruto world to a cultivation realm but that the start
Reveal Spoiler Hey i have guys working to post more stuff i am working on my writing and a lot of thinks cause i have a lot of ides some time i am being lazy to wright i am going to check this chapter again cause it uploaded very fast
Nice chapter keep up the working hard KkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkooooooooookkkkkkkkkkklllllllLlllLlllllllppppppppppppppppppphhggggggghhuuuuuOlHbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbhhhhhbhhhhhhh
Guys you should comment things you would like me to add or more thinks you will to about my mistakes i have mad some mistakes i know i a working on them so you don't have to worry thanks !!!
Keep on going that is going to be an interesting fanfic juts keep on posting Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmkkkjjhhgfffffffffffffffffffffffffg
Hey guys just add some comments so it can help me thanks a lot post things that you wold like me to wright like any special novel you like there many realms and I liked writing this novel my first time gonea bit bad in the start
Change the chapters and the whole thing soon the will be new chapters with new definition and better but there will not start from Naruto realms but from its own star i will be working and on my own grammar well right me the Anime/Novels that would like me to put in like DXD Naruto one piece martial peak and many more i know so you can add
¿Autor seguirás la novela?🤷♂️¿Autor seguirás la novela?🤷♂️¿Autor seguirás la novela?🤷♂️¿Autor seguirás la novela?🤷♂️¿Autor seguirás la novela?🤷♂️¿Autor seguirás la novela?🤷♂️
You should upload more chapters !!! 33rn kfjhrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrmdkerjjfuturfijdoekswieju4rhuy5u4iej3owkedhrfuyhdiesmdjnhfbcnjmdxks,zxdmcjfnhubtgyhrfijdeiokskwuedrfhhfrncmdxks,kjdxncfbvfhncjdmxkszxmdjcnfhbcundixmszkmxdnjcfvbyfncdmxsz,xmdcnfuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
nice novel you should more chapter this is good!!!!!!...... and you should do something like showing more about the outer space so it will be more fun to read
There is no comma so it's hard to read, because I read it with a translation so it's hard.yrheijebrhjfieiejheheheiwoowhehehwiwiejrbheiwowowkjre
NID MOR BRO I NEED MOREE THIS IS GUD NEED MORE[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nice novel keep on working and I wait for the nEw chapter thanks keep it up Yoj soupd add more things thaNsk for the great worK And you should not rush the chapters
Nice Novel it should be a fafFic but keep on working and upload more chapter thAnks i would you to add more infromation about the future Of the novel on some chapters
Hey guys be taking a break and relax and try wright later be taking some days a break (: So would like to add some reviews and comment about my mistakes and focus on them thank you This a fanfic i know but i cannot change to fanfic ,it but there will be more than a fanfic there will and original content.....
THe novel has a nice idea if you coLd epxlain a bit more than you will make it look better in the start goi started a bit but but after is gEtting better keep the chapters Up
This an intresting novel with naruto being the fisRt world to cultivation like tranforming to a realm of cultivating that the goal of the sTory in ther start looking forward to more chapters so we can understand better
Nice chapters juSt keep uploading and read more novel so You can improve Your writing And you can make a nice webnovel your idea is very intresting kepp working
Hey guys I am new at writing and not know to much how you get power stones or like the likes cause you have to right over 100k words or something because got in writing because I like it ,Btw this novel has multi universe, domains, of other novel in one cosmos but with multiple cosmos or places with no cultivation realm this novel is bout Ling tian reborn to Naruto world and transforming Naruto world to a realm with cultivation and dominating other domains or plunder then for resources this like fanfic with original content but I can not change to fanfcic and the main cultivation realms will be from the Infinity cosmos wait for more of chapter and will be explained , but basically got a bit lost how the power stones work or you get enabled something like
Thanks for the chapters Well guys this novel is all about cultivation and it starts from Naruto is interesting story is about transforming the Naruto world to a cultivation realm but that the start
Reveal Spoiler Hey i have guys working to post more stuff i am working on my writing and a lot of thinks cause i have a lot of ides some time i am being lazy to wright i am going to check this chapter again cause it uploaded very fast
Nice chapter keep up the working hard KkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkooooooooookkkkkkkkkkklllllllLlllLlllllllppppppppppppppppppphhggggggghhuuuuuOlHbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbhhhhhbhhhhhhh
Guys you should comment things you would like me to add or more thinks you will to about my mistakes i have mad some mistakes i know i a working on them so you don't have to worry thanks !!!
Keep on going that is going to be an interesting fanfic juts keep on posting Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmkkkjjhhgfffffffffffffffffffffffffg
Hey guys just add some comments so it can help me thanks a lot post things that you wold like me to wright like any special novel you like there many realms and I liked writing this novel my first time gonea bit bad in the start
Change the chapters and the whole thing soon the will be new chapters with new definition and better but there will not start from Naruto realms but from its own star i will be working and on my own grammar well right me the Anime/Novels that would like me to put in like DXD Naruto one piece martial peak and many more i know so you can add