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Great fic! might be the best sport fic I have ever read! would definitely recommend
This is probably the best sports fic I've read. The translation is so good that I didn't even know that it was a translation for, like, 30 chapters. Even then, I only found out because of the author complaining about all the typical Chinese stereotypes, racism and glazing that he's had to remove. To sum up: the author is a hero, the fic is good
Can someone give me a link to the original work? I want to read the Chinese chapters)) ——————————————— ——————————————— ——————————————— ——————————————— ———————————————
I really like this novel, it is very entertaining. I don't know what the original novel is like, but the author did a wonderful job considering the review he made of the original Chinese work.
this is absolutely amaizing keep up the good work, this is my first football fanfic and u made it amaizing good work
At least a website, please tell me where you can read this fanfiction, and others as well.................................................................................................................
What is the name of the original novel?...............,..................................................................................................................
Thank you for translating this work from Chinese. It is quite difficult to read something about football of above average quality, so I hope you will continue writing this book. I also hope that you will not be afraid to improvise with this translation and continue to adapt it.
A great story. all thanks to the author's translation. at this point, it won't even feel like translation, and taking the story into your own hands is much better. I am looking forward to the upcoming updates
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I have over 1,000 hours on Webnovel, and this is hands down the best novel I’ve read on here—no joke. Yes, it’s a Chinese translation, but the author puts a lot, and I mean A LOT, of effort into refining the story. They meticulously remove unnecessary filler, rewrite sections for better clarity, and even add whole new paragraphs to enhance the experience. On top of that, they actually do research to fix any mistakes the original author made, ensuring the story stays top-tier. Absolute fire. Keep it up, bro—I’m loving every chapter!
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I came for the story stayed for the author notes at the end of each chapter 😂 Anyways I think it’s good and it’ll probably get better as it goes from translated to rewritten.
Great story. I really like the changes you are doing to the translation. Never thought i would enjoy so much a football novel. Keep up the good work
Great work so far. I've read the original, and I can say that the quality of your translation, as well as the adjustments you've made, have worked out really well. Looking at the MC, I appreciated the lack of Beckham glazing in comparison to the original. Let's be honest. Besides those important moments in Beckham's career, there have to be so many great and historical midfielders to choose from. I'm not gonna lie. I skipped a lot of the glazing. In response to one of your earlier chapter comments on the female lead, I would suggest something along the lines of hitting it off due to mutual interest from both and interactions over some time from things like messages and work together before leading into a relationship(seems the natural thing). TBH, anything you come up with would be better than the original nonexistent relationship timeline. The original was ridiculous as you didn't see her for what felt like 20 or 30 chapters between each interaction. Anyway, keep up the good work by far one of my favorite sports translations, and with the work you've put in, I would say that it's not far from #1.
thank you for the quick updates, I'm really enjoying the story so far and you're doing a great with the translation and making the novel your own.
Love the work the author put into this story it’s one of the best football fanfics I’ve read
About the writing quality, the author had worked hard to make this whole novel readable from a Chinese filled nonsense. He made it that most of us can't read the Beckham glazing that went for a ton of the chapters, which is amazing since some of the translated MTL in this website sucks. I want to add more but for those who are interested, just read it.
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yooo man i really like this novel most Chinese novels are too fanatical and that's disgusting because they do it excessively i really agree if you develop it into your own novel
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Great fic! might be the best sport fic I have ever read! would definitely recommend
This is probably the best sports fic I've read. The translation is so good that I didn't even know that it was a translation for, like, 30 chapters. Even then, I only found out because of the author complaining about all the typical Chinese stereotypes, racism and glazing that he's had to remove. To sum up: the author is a hero, the fic is good
Can someone give me a link to the original work? I want to read the Chinese chapters)) ——————————————— ——————————————— ——————————————— ——————————————— ———————————————
I really like this novel, it is very entertaining. I don't know what the original novel is like, but the author did a wonderful job considering the review he made of the original Chinese work.
this is absolutely amaizing keep up the good work, this is my first football fanfic and u made it amaizing good work
At least a website, please tell me where you can read this fanfiction, and others as well.................................................................................................................
What is the name of the original novel?...............,..................................................................................................................
Thank you for translating this work from Chinese. It is quite difficult to read something about football of above average quality, so I hope you will continue writing this book. I also hope that you will not be afraid to improvise with this translation and continue to adapt it.
A great story. all thanks to the author's translation. at this point, it won't even feel like translation, and taking the story into your own hands is much better. I am looking forward to the upcoming updates
Pour red bull into your coffee powder. then add chunks of brown sugar, mayonnaise and honey. After this add in some spoiled milk along with a half eaten banana. Now enjoy your diarrhea
I have over 1,000 hours on Webnovel, and this is hands down the best novel I’ve read on here—no joke. Yes, it’s a Chinese translation, but the author puts a lot, and I mean A LOT, of effort into refining the story. They meticulously remove unnecessary filler, rewrite sections for better clarity, and even add whole new paragraphs to enhance the experience. On top of that, they actually do research to fix any mistakes the original author made, ensuring the story stays top-tier. Absolute fire. Keep it up, bro—I’m loving every chapter!
bro thanks for sacrificing and making me read the better version HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I came for the story stayed for the author notes at the end of each chapter 😂 Anyways I think it’s good and it’ll probably get better as it goes from translated to rewritten.
Great story. I really like the changes you are doing to the translation. Never thought i would enjoy so much a football novel. Keep up the good work
Great work so far. I've read the original, and I can say that the quality of your translation, as well as the adjustments you've made, have worked out really well. Looking at the MC, I appreciated the lack of Beckham glazing in comparison to the original. Let's be honest. Besides those important moments in Beckham's career, there have to be so many great and historical midfielders to choose from. I'm not gonna lie. I skipped a lot of the glazing. In response to one of your earlier chapter comments on the female lead, I would suggest something along the lines of hitting it off due to mutual interest from both and interactions over some time from things like messages and work together before leading into a relationship(seems the natural thing). TBH, anything you come up with would be better than the original nonexistent relationship timeline. The original was ridiculous as you didn't see her for what felt like 20 or 30 chapters between each interaction. Anyway, keep up the good work by far one of my favorite sports translations, and with the work you've put in, I would say that it's not far from #1.
thank you for the quick updates, I'm really enjoying the story so far and you're doing a great with the translation and making the novel your own.
Love the work the author put into this story it’s one of the best football fanfics I’ve read
About the writing quality, the author had worked hard to make this whole novel readable from a Chinese filled nonsense. He made it that most of us can't read the Beckham glazing that went for a ton of the chapters, which is amazing since some of the translated MTL in this website sucks. I want to add more but for those who are interested, just read it.
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yooo man i really like this novel most Chinese novels are too fanatical and that's disgusting because they do it excessively i really agree if you develop it into your own novel
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