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Guy gets killed by truck-kun.
Could travel between fictional worlds.
And all the possible cliches are here.
P.S: Cover not mine. It is scene from anime HunterxHunter
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Write a reviewThe MC is an idiot (seriously, I can't understand some of the choices he made no matter how hard I try). He's also very pathetically weak. I was looking forward to reading this but for it to be ruined by an idiotic, weak, completely average and boring MC with no redeeming qualities is very unfortunate :(
There are a lot of interesting ideas, but there are many more problems, from incoherence and plot holes to a flat MC and more, I just read the first 15 chapters but there were too many problems to continue. It’s a pity, because I think it’s a story with some potential, but it should be rewritten from the first chapter. I know that this is the author first novel, so I hope that he will takes this novel as valuable experience and try to rewrite it completely or write something new when he feels ready.
The creation of this character has been one of the worst that I have had the misfortune of reading it is a shame that the author thought this was acceptable and I'm not being rude here but author I think you should go research asthma
Reveal SpoilerThis is a bad book gotta say there is like zero story to it so plot sucks then the mc just does nothing 90% of the time and waits for certain events.
Dropped by me at least, each chapter is just a massive filler without altering story timeline too much until the end...(in other words retelling with an OC in it).
too many weak things from first chapters 1>his idiotic choices 2>his use of lifespan for irrelevant or weak techniques 3>his emotions are haywire 4>if he goes to another world he can't use his powers 5>he can use powers stated in status but are weak ass 6>sometimes the author just makes opponents weak (like assasins org lol while it's stated they can use nen in very 1st/2nd chap) 7>authors ability to describe is bad or hmmm for the lack of word inconsistent or bland
Reveal Spoilerchapter 3 Author wrote a really stupid chapter so I am giving a really stupid review. Unless author can make for his mistake more will be coming and if he/she does i will give out better reviews
Reveal SpoilerStory was okay till he changed bodies , he got extremly power hungry for no reason at all he's obsessed with a "perfect" body (could understand looks/health reasons) wich somehow only include monster genetics and evolution like really plenty of human anime character who are unreasonable strong. then izuku got killed and then got a test from "god" for 100 years and a chance for revenge HOW!!? his second wish was to never meet a world traveller and he leaves the world right after killing him making his second wish useless... gonna drop the story right here.
Reveal SpoilerThis is a hidden gem. Though its a Fanfic the author still explains everything that should be , explanation is part of world building... MCs wish is well considered if u want to travel diff "Reality" in peace... And im expecting that he will become the Ant King and to not kill her mother to not born prematurely which the original did and it was a foolish action which result in his imperfection... Im hoping for the birth of Ant Empire or kingdom if that happens... If u update for at least 2 chapters a day then all my accounts SS will be yours author...
Read the first 10 chapters Not much more to say than the author has made a story with a lot if potential. Can I even say he made it since this exact story start has been seen tons of times. But anyway, from what I read the Main Character is insufferable and the author clearly hasn't planned any of this out. I hope in the future he can take more time, possible slow his update rate to carefully plan out the future of his novel and spend more time on each chapter as it seems rushed and could be improved upon massively.
Now I never really make a review. I gave the low rate due to my own personal opinion. Your doing wonderful with writing and the story. I'm just not a big fan of how the character is. I like villain characters. Pretty obvious he's a bad guy. But still don't like it. Hope you continue writing but I'm gonna stop reading.
Amazing story. Hope to have longer chapters and that it will not be droped. ............................................................................... And hope he gets the body of Meruem
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started good but is now **** ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Looking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? 😀 love it 😍
I like the idea and am excited on seeing where the author is planning on going with the story. There are a few details that could be ironed out but they do not detract from the story overall. I hope the author keeps on writing and improving on the story.
This novel is so bad Obtaining the body of mereum just to get Nerf in next world?? So what's the point of all that bulls hit in arc 1? Haixt waste of time piece of ****
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