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Hami: noun[c]. Mage. Protector. The title given to those who are able to control their Riaf, the core of all living things, and use it to move the elements at their disposal. Khaled Ben Sakir is a 'restricted' with a bad temper. He's not good enough to be a Hami but too dangerous to leave without a Riaf education. He yearns to prove himself, but hard work might not be enough.
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A great novel so far, with interesting world being built, still no clear view of whats to come and the magical concept is to be refined, but i really like the writing style and find it an interesting read. Hope the quality stays the same, and the updates become more frequent.
The world building is very detailed and rich! I looking forward to see how this evolves and to learn more about the mysterious Kassim
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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I see that the most recent update is three weeks ago, and the only schedule I was able to find said three chapters per week... I suggest listing a new schedule or keeping to your schedule. Also, another suggestion, the custom words that you use should only be described in the first or first two chapters they are used in, the reader will be able to keep understanding when the word is used again. Positive Feedback: I see that you definitely put a good amount of time and effort into this story, and I would readily say, it was not a waste, there will be many that will enjoy such a novel.;,;. Personal Feedback: I will not be continuing this novel, it seems like a good story, but it's just not my cup of tea.;,;.
Hello Author here. Thank you for reading this novel of mine.I hope you enjoy reading and please review! Feedback and Constructive criticism is always welcome! ^_^
This is an interesting novel, it has a great background and potential but I will wait for more chapters to give a more complete I like the concept of the story and the way thevauthor portrayed it, like the way he portrayed khaleeds dread. I like how tye world is in ruins and that they hadvto use a forbidden ritual to try and save it, I dont know how this will unfold but as I said I tjink it has a great potential.