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Eclipse Arcana
It is a story that contains five main leads.
The story begins, when Kai arrives in Celestria to save the village with his friend Eiera, his sister Rin, and his Fairy friend Luna.
Later, he has been assigned a task to retrieve an artifact known as Eclipse Arcana and has to take the King's son, Aiden, with him. But he didn't know the Artifact he was sent to find could destroy his realm in the blink of an eye.
Kai also found out that he is not the only one who is seeking Eclipse Arcana. The Dark Realm is also after it. Now, he has to act faster than before and gather all six pieces of Eclipse Arcana before it's too late.
Kai, Eiera, Rin, Luna, and Aiden together they will face many challenges, and fight monsters, Dragons, and much more.
Can Kai and his group Find Eclipse Arcana before it gets into the wrong hands?
A Conversation from Chapter 40
One of the Scorchers spoke to Kai, "SO YOU ARE KAI THE WEILDER OF THE ETERNAL BLADE!"
Kai looked up at the Scorchers, "I don't have time for an introduction." Kai pointed towards the carriage and continued, "I want all three of you to carry that carriage and follow me."
"HOW DARE YOU ASKED US FOR HELP!" The Scorchers got furious after listening to Kai's demand, and all three of them bang on the Eternal Blade's barrier. Scorchers, "LET US OUT! AND WE'LL TELL YOU WHO WE ARE!"
"The thing is, I wasn't asking. I'm ordering all three of you!" Kai said in a commanding tone.
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If you love action then you'll love this. It begins with a load of action. As for the pacing, mostimes it can be fastpaced but it is also slowpaced at some scenes. Honestly an still not sure who the main character is since it wasn't introduced in the synopsis. Am thinking it's either our brave young hero or it's our masked one. somethings seem a bit confusing but am sure our beloved authorsan will explain them soon. And just like he has said he's improving so am expecting great things from this novel.
Honest Review: The Novel is quite engaging and very enjoyable. It has some grammatical mistakes, though, which could be fixed. Overall, it's a great novel, and I feel like as the author writes more and improves, it could indeed reach its potential. I say you should give it a shot.
I just want to tell who ever read it the story writing in the few chapters might not be that good but after chapter eight it has improve a lot and will be keep improving in the future chapters. I'm a non English speaking person so please bare with me for just a few chapters
I'm going to leave an honest review now. I must say, this is a rather interesting story. Although I have a few complaints such as grammatical errors here and there. Then there is also the problem about the spacing. Please don't join your words together. It makes it hard for the readers to read. Make use of paragraphs when a character wants to say something. Apart from that, I think the story is okay. Continue writing this story, Author. And may the story bless you.
Pretty good, just that there are errors you need to fix here and there. Keep up the good work
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I really like this story. The world setting is quite interesting, and the story seems pretty reliable so far. I like this type of story, so i might as well stick to it till the end. The only thing is that the character introduction is a bit lost (tell me if i'm wrong). overall, it's perfect 👌.
Great novel, the start is good and the pacing is just right. Highly recommended.
This book is the one of the best fantasy books I ever read, nice plot and setting, hoping to see more in the future.
The novel's premise doesn't exactly establish a main character from the start. But the overall quality of the writing is solid, which can be improved on with just general spacing and splitting paragraphs and sentences when needed. I still like the progression of the novel and the pacing is just about fine in terms of getting through the scenes, Great work Author!
Good overall story however I feel the Snypsis might be confusing readers. It doesn't really give people a good expectation of what is going to happen or what to expect. I suggest looking at writers like Brandon Sanderson, who has written some amazing Snyps. Are good Grammar errors also, but the story is good, the characters are likable, and the world-building has promise. It's a marathon, not a sprint, so keep it up and always be growing.
The Novel has a promising plot with likable characters. They feel lifelike. someone you could relate with. The use of real-world locations makes imagining the story better. Although it's not perfect but still I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
I must say, this is a rather interesting story. Even if in the early chapters might not be that good but after chapter eight it has improve a lot and will be keep improving in the futurechapters.
As promised rene tokiori here , ill be leaving two reviews with this being the first to read your book, your synopsis sounds promising ill be back after the read
Solid freaking book! There are a few things to patch up here and there, one of them being the fact that it takes over 9 chapters for the actual story to kick in. I'd suggest reading Revenge of the Weakest Hunter for references on how to properly execute a start to a story. This has love which is all readers can hope for✨
I love the story actually i love the writer writing way and his dedication in this AWESOME way of writing the story
Action packed chapters from the start, very interesting world background with several kingdoms. Definitely worth reading for all those wanting to read an adventurous story!
This is one of those stories that a experienced reader can tell the author put their heart into. While the length of the chapters are on the short side i will say that each chapter carries its own personality. There were one or 2 errors I noticed while reading but it's not the big of a deal, I just tend to over edit my own work, so i tend to pay attention to the placement of every punctuation mark etc. etc. I would like to say this story has some potential down the line as it progresses. Keep up the work Author (^_-)b\