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Ok let go over what I think need to be changed or updated do something else when I read it jack did this jack did that, I won't say it irritating but I would like a different perspective it a fun read though just the Pov fells weird. OK now that out of the way there to many A/N that messes up the flow of the story I'm thinking it apart of the story when it not it can get irritating sometimes. writing quality is good but like I said the Pov, and A/N can sometime irritate you. I like how the character is portrayed. he also using his army knowledge quite nicely which I find refreshing because when the usually have military knowledge the author don't know how to use it. Overall, the story is good when I find some other thing u can fix I will make a new review.
Love the game played and finished both games multiple times the powers are a little weird but not the weirdest hope you upload lots of this
I love it. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I think this is the first dying light Fanfiction I've ever read and so far it is amazing also how many chapters long do you plan on making this?
Ok let go over what I think need to be changed or updated do something else when I read it jack did this jack did that, I won't say it irritating but I would like a different perspective it a fun read though just the Pov fells weird. OK now that out of the way there to many A/N that messes up the flow of the story I'm thinking it apart of the story when it not it can get irritating sometimes. writing quality is good but like I said the Pov, and A/N can sometime irritate you. I like how the character is portrayed. he also using his army knowledge quite nicely which I find refreshing because when the usually have military knowledge the author don't know how to use it. Overall, the story is good when I find some other thing u can fix I will make a new review.
Love the game played and finished both games multiple times the powers are a little weird but not the weirdest hope you upload lots of this
I love it. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I think this is the first dying light Fanfiction I've ever read and so far it is amazing also how many chapters long do you plan on making this?