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This is a somewhat enjoyable story with OP characters. The AU elements are interesting, but the way the author wrote the MC's mom and her strength make it feel like anything the MC does it controlled by his mother. He feels like a puppet who just follows his mother's every whim. The mother feels more like an MC than the MC unfortunately, and for that reason I'm going to discontinue reading. Thanks for the effort though author!
Tidak ada plot, beberapa ada yang di paksakan,para gadis terlalu cepat jatuh cinta dimana tidak ada perkembangan hubungan,ada beberapa kesalahan kata seperti contoh nama yang salah dan tertukar, percakapan/interaksi karakter yang hambar dan tidak hidup,juga terakhir ada beberapa adegan, kalimat,dan percakapan yang membuat saya cringe,yah ini hanya masalah selera saja,bagi saya fanfic ini kurang cocok untuk saya☕
Love this story it’s very unique and fun. So I really hope it doesn’t get dropped
one of the best fan fics i have seen i really hope the author will continue this for about 1000 chapters then i will be content. please more chapters thank you
FateDevilAce is one of my favorite authors. It's unfortunate that I don't have a PayPal or credit card, or I would definitely join the privileged group. This story and 'Villain: PoD' are both awesome. Thank you for your creative work, author!
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This is definitely one of the better fanfics on here, and I'm pretty sure it's the best ongoing DXD fanfic. I'd recommend giving it a try. Increasing word count below: Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read
I really really love it just hope that the author improves the update of the chapters
Wait, so how will Issei activate his powers if he won’t get any lewd opportunities? Or will Ddraig just be the unfortunate victim of having his host’s powers impossible to use?
Well. The author is amazing and has some good creativity so just read it at will. Some questions on it though that a lot will also probably ask since it's a "Wish Fullfiment + Harem". -> Does Main Character becomes the strongest? -> Will there be any Tragedy or Angst? -> Pandora, Hestia and other Waifus mentioned on the story will be at the Harem? -> OP Main Character?
This fanfic is good, but at the same time it's boring. Why? Because the author made the plot into an AU, I mean it's a type of AU that is still related to DxD, but you put the MC in another adventure like explaining how the MC got his peerage with a character from another anime, but at the same time it's not from that anime. This is where the plot starts to get boring. It would honestly be more enjoyable if the MC didn't waste time with hard AU plots and focused on the canon plot with a little extra AU. I like the MC's interaction with Rias, but from chapter 10 it starts to get boring as it tells the MC's adventures away from the underworld and Kuoh which is the focus of DxD. It became a drama of Rias waiting for the MC's return which was boring. It would be more fun if the MC focused on interacting with the heroines in DxD.
This one is for a fellow issei hater. Issei the eternal virgin is the worst thing that happened to dxd.
I like it so fare............................................................................................................................................................................................................
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It’s a Fate Fanfictiom… so what’s stopping you from diving right in?! Buckle up for the ride like our dear Rias hehe ;) [Will write a proper review when there is more material]
this is going to be another good story with unreliable updates. but i love the authors stories. so...
Well its Fate's fic so five stars from me,well not much can say since its only 1 chapter now but yeah the start was pretty unique and intresting from other dxd fic.Pretty excited to read upcoming chapters and the crossover characters that will appear in the fic.
the main problem is mc mommy being so powerfull. Is like naruto in boruto, if you want the mc to develope you should nerf her or make her utterly stupid. if not then the mc will never face really difficult situations.
This is definitely one of the better fanfics on here[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Reveal Spoiler This is a somewhat enjoyable story with OP characters. The AU elements are interesting, but the way the author wrote the MC's mom and her strength make it feel like anything the MC does it controlled by his mother. He feels like a puppet who just follows his mother's every whim. The mother feels more like an MC than the MC unfortunately, and for that reason I'm going to discontinue reading. Thanks for the effort though author!
Tidak ada plot, beberapa ada yang di paksakan,para gadis terlalu cepat jatuh cinta dimana tidak ada perkembangan hubungan,ada beberapa kesalahan kata seperti contoh nama yang salah dan tertukar, percakapan/interaksi karakter yang hambar dan tidak hidup,juga terakhir ada beberapa adegan, kalimat,dan percakapan yang membuat saya cringe,yah ini hanya masalah selera saja,bagi saya fanfic ini kurang cocok untuk saya☕
Love this story it’s very unique and fun. So I really hope it doesn’t get dropped
one of the best fan fics i have seen i really hope the author will continue this for about 1000 chapters then i will be content. please more chapters thank you
FateDevilAce is one of my favorite authors. It's unfortunate that I don't have a PayPal or credit card, or I would definitely join the privileged group. This story and 'Villain: PoD' are both awesome. Thank you for your creative work, author!
Wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew wew
Reveal Spoiler This is definitely one of the better fanfics on here, and I'm pretty sure it's the best ongoing DXD fanfic. I'd recommend giving it a try. Increasing word count below: Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read Give it a read
I really really love it just hope that the author improves the update of the chapters
Wait, so how will Issei activate his powers if he won’t get any lewd opportunities? Or will Ddraig just be the unfortunate victim of having his host’s powers impossible to use?
Well. The author is amazing and has some good creativity so just read it at will. Some questions on it though that a lot will also probably ask since it's a "Wish Fullfiment + Harem". -> Does Main Character becomes the strongest? -> Will there be any Tragedy or Angst? -> Pandora, Hestia and other Waifus mentioned on the story will be at the Harem? -> OP Main Character?
This fanfic is good, but at the same time it's boring. Why? Because the author made the plot into an AU, I mean it's a type of AU that is still related to DxD, but you put the MC in another adventure like explaining how the MC got his peerage with a character from another anime, but at the same time it's not from that anime. This is where the plot starts to get boring. It would honestly be more enjoyable if the MC didn't waste time with hard AU plots and focused on the canon plot with a little extra AU. I like the MC's interaction with Rias, but from chapter 10 it starts to get boring as it tells the MC's adventures away from the underworld and Kuoh which is the focus of DxD. It became a drama of Rias waiting for the MC's return which was boring. It would be more fun if the MC focused on interacting with the heroines in DxD.
This one is for a fellow issei hater. Issei the eternal virgin is the worst thing that happened to dxd.
I like it so fare............................................................................................................................................................................................................
............................................................................................................................................................................................................
It’s a Fate Fanfictiom… so what’s stopping you from diving right in?! Buckle up for the ride like our dear Rias hehe ;) [Will write a proper review when there is more material]
this is going to be another good story with unreliable updates. but i love the authors stories. so...
Well its Fate's fic so five stars from me,well not much can say since its only 1 chapter now but yeah the start was pretty unique and intresting from other dxd fic.Pretty excited to read upcoming chapters and the crossover characters that will appear in the fic.
the main problem is mc mommy being so powerfull. Is like naruto in boruto, if you want the mc to develope you should nerf her or make her utterly stupid. if not then the mc will never face really difficult situations.