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5 stars because I want to know what happens next!!!? Where's my chapters????!!!! ๐ค๐ค๐ค.
Hello author are you continuing this or dropping?๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ
Mc at 6 years is already stronger than a satan, unless he finds a way to add character development this novel will become a generic dxd skirt chasing harem cliche
Hello is this still going on?๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ
chapters . please?. ...............................................................................................................................................
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Just another dxd fanfic with a generic and overused plotline. The most common being the saving two kittens part and saving akeno and shuri. There's nothing that turns me away from dxd fanfics more than that
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more chapter . please?. ..........................................................................................................................................................
espero que tomes a todas esa milf que solo estan de adornos , todas de los 72 pilares. ..................................................................
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r18. "venelana". secta milf. ...............................................................................................................................................................
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Hello there DarylArradaza. I love to give 5 stars for your novel because. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and donโt drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
I found it interesting that you use music as your power, I will wait for you to publish more chapters. ----------------------- consider as possible candidates of his harem: - grayfia. - "Ravel" Phoenix. - serafall. - yasaka. - Kuroka.
PLEASE UPDATE THIS THIS HAS SO MICH POTENTIAL AND IS ALREADY VERY GOOD. Why does everything good just stop so annoying.....................
5 stars because I want to know what happens next!!!? Where's my chapters????!!!! ๐ค๐ค๐ค.
Hello author are you continuing this or dropping?๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ
Mc at 6 years is already stronger than a satan, unless he finds a way to add character development this novel will become a generic dxd skirt chasing harem cliche
Hello is this still going on?๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ
chapters . please?. ...............................................................................................................................................
๐๐ค๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐
Just another dxd fanfic with a generic and overused plotline. The most common being the saving two kittens part and saving akeno and shuri. There's nothing that turns me away from dxd fanfics more than that
Reveal Spoiler GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
more chapter . please?. ..........................................................................................................................................................
espero que tomes a todas esa milf que solo estan de adornos , todas de los 72 pilares. ..................................................................
Reveal Spoiler more more more more more more more more more more v more moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremorev
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Hello there DarylArradaza. I love to give 5 stars for your novel because. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and donโt drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
I found it interesting that you use music as your power, I will wait for you to publish more chapters. ----------------------- consider as possible candidates of his harem: - grayfia. - "Ravel" Phoenix. - serafall. - yasaka. - Kuroka.
PLEASE UPDATE THIS THIS HAS SO MICH POTENTIAL AND IS ALREADY VERY GOOD. Why does everything good just stop so annoying.....................