DxD: The forgotten mob character, Motohama

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Gild_Rakingh

The story is pretty good, although the idea that the novel becomes Harem over time makes it a bit difficult for me to continue reading, I'm liking the story now.

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shiro_43

it was interesting till like the second the 5th chapter after that it just went downhill. The mc is just annoyingly pathetic so far the plot just so random it just doesn't make any sense. Walking through the street with a bucket of water cause his finger is emitting flame and your telling me no one noticed. Then meeting a random mage cause pLoT.

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asaade

the MC is so stupid and the plot is so forced the MC is so stupid and the plot is so forced the MC is so stupid and the plot is so forced the MC is so stupid and the plot is so forced

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LuciferSatan_6666

Motohama is a character who has alot of potential but is not really used much in canon. Humans are relegated to the sidelines for the most part in dxd

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ViaSky

Very Good. Love the logical thinking in the story so far. [img=recommend]

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CallmeMISTER

Respecting tradition, I will be shameless and score myself with 5 stars. 😂 As for the fate of the story? I have a lot planned and hope to improve my writing skills over time. Another thing, I like to leave clues throughout the story that maybe only the most attentive will notice. That's it, and I left.

LV 4

Lucifer_satan06

Really a great fic so far. Most of the dxd fics are one dimension, always going for devil's and such so it's refreshing to see a human centric fic(atleast so far). MC is logical and is facing some genuine problems so that's also a plus for me. Apart from that this has been written brilliantly and is a joy to read

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LuciferSatan_6666

I love side characters who become main characters it makes a story interesting to see growth in personality and power with time. Highschool dxd is a perfect setting for anyone to get powerful.

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Ur_Mom_Gay

this is such a good story, a breath of fresh air on the DXD fanfic section. I just love how different it is from most of the DXD ffs on this site, instead of following the 'main story' like most DXD ffs does, here the MC have his own plot- that is separate yet still intertwined with the main plot that quite interesting on its own, and the fact that his personality is unique and funny made it so much better

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Mark_Baitinger

I like it. Well the dxd Motohama is kind of stupid, a pervert and looks ugly. Mhm, guys enjoy Motohama struggle without a system and overpowered cheats, well ( appraisal and perverted energy is not that overpowered ).

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Zetsway

I really like the story and, until now, most actions and scenarios have been fairly logical. The English is also pretty good (at least in my opinion). The only 'problem' I have is the weird decision to nerf humans, and by association, the MC in DxD. I mean, aren't humans the weakest already even without the 7 spell limit you put on them? While it's true that I haven't read the latest volumes of DxD, but is there any human mage that can take even Raiser? And I mean without Sacred Gear, only pure magic.

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Lence_Laplace

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Indra_lord

I like the FF.aa bros did author dropped diss or it's just late update

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rayshin

any more fanfics/novel where the characters is like aizen? btw this fanfic is already good tho....at least for the past 27 ch....how the mc act is what grip me to this novel. Ganbatte author

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Darkiling

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Mary_Carvalho

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This was a fun read, I was thinking of doing a story like this on Wattpad but you took it too a whole nother level, can't wait for more chapters.

LV 4

Nova_Apocalypse

I love the concept of making his own system by taking the refrence from modern technology...I hope he will add grafia too in the harem...hope update frequency improves

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Delganeyr

The MC is likeable and very creative. I absolutely love how he utilizes his abilities later on, keikaku doori. I would also recommend this story if you'd like something that doesn't just retread canon.

LV 4

Truck_kun2007

Extremely original and well thought out fic with good grammar and language; to be honest it has immense potential and I hope the author keeps up this level of writing because it is one of the few well written fics out there. Only minor issues I have are personal to me and not prevalent to the story (for example a few decisions that I didn't like, but author's logical execution won me over anyway) so I recommend this as a good read :)