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Annoying main character, very short chapters - Like all of the chapters so far are like two -three full chapters, grammar is ok so far, gonna wait for ~100 chapters or so to do another review if this is gonna be the length all the time, cannot recommend at the moment.
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I like the beginning, my only problem is that you are adding to many other world and some orignal elements that is making the plot confusing, in between I almost started to skim due to headaches. Please just focus on dxd at least for now. Overall, it has a lot of potential.
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I don't know it's a tradition to review your book, so Here I am..... I'm just here to give myself a 5 star... nothing see here, just your not so friendly author.
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keep writing bro, your writing is pretty good, improve it againkeep writing bro, your writing is pretty good, improve it again..keep writing bro, your writing is pretty good, improve it again.
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story starts off good but takes a hard turn down hill around chapter 8. didn't decide to push through and find out if it gets any better as the main character became boring and ruthless suddenly, not sure if it was some writing tactic to surprise us later but didn't care to find out.
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I really really tried to get into this story but after the first world jump, The writing took a major nose dive in quality. Lots of grammar mistakes and its become unbearable to read. I made it to chapter 20/29 btw author
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The beginning is good, but I advise you to set the system, namely HP MP DP to numeric values, since with percentages you will fall, for example the skill [flaming Wings] requires 1 percent /minute, meaning it can only fly for 100 minutes, not counting regeneration? because, according to the description,it is. and this is bad for example, he will become a high-class devil and with his high-class reserves will only be able to fly for 100 minutes, this is stupid so go to the numeric values and change the skill settings