/ アニメ&漫画 / Dreaming in MHA
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Hi fellas !!!! Welcome to my world !!!!!
This is my first time writing a fanfic so I'm pretty excited !!
I have a lot of ideas to make this story interesting so I hope you will like it !!
Anyway, I don't like wasting a lot of time on formalities so let me present you my take on My Hero Academia in which our MC has the power to literally make dreams a reality !!
Disclaimer :
. There will be a lot of crossovers with other animes, games and fictions in general, but in a specific way. If you are not into it, I don't recommand you the story.
. The picture isn't mine.
. None of the characters in this story are mine except my own original characters.
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Lots of potential and great writing quality, I was thrown off by the MC at the start but as of chap 16 he seems to have changed for the better a lot! Fair warning OP MC is here BUT he has a very interesting ability and his goals are admirable, heroic enough to help when asked or needed but not enough to be foolish (as of now lol) The beginning hooked me and I hope to see many more chapters in the future! I love the side characters as well, REN’s my favourite as of now :)
i Don't know how to write a review talking about the good of a novel because the ones i put most of my effort were the ones talking about the bad, But this novel is good
This is just me stating my new opinion with the author having defended thier fic. I still don't care for some decisions but it's not has bad as my first read made me think and at this point it's mainly just grammer and spelling as well as dialogue I simply don't like.
Your character's personality is quite fun and his interactions with others feel quite natural, his motivations are also quite good (I'm glad you didn't use the typical raving god sasuke, which everyone likes) and he has the mentality to stay strong. Now what would be the problems: the first two chapters are redundant (you can remove them and it wouldn't affect anything) the theme of divinity is redundant, in the world of bnha where the greatest power comes at the country level, take the protagonist to a divine level it's nonsense and the main problem is the ability you gave him (distort reality) the problem with op powers is keeping the balance, he can't be so powerful that there's no conflict and he can't be suppressed to the point that he doesn't have sense to have it
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I read up to chapter 11 The MC acts like a 2 year old and achieves nothing useful. Despite the overpowered sounding ability to make dreams become real, the protagonist has shown that no they cannot do that, they literally fail the first dream which wasn't even that impressive and all they managed to do is hurt all of their friends uselessly. Oh on top of that they act all edgy and then have panic attacks at the first sign of trouble while his friends which are like 5 are fine. To summarize the protagonist has a lame power, acts immature, acts edgy, and only makes things worse. Boring fic.