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The story follows character Noah Grey, a terminally ill patient suffering from a certain blood condition. One day, a series of strange events transport him to a different universe.
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Genre: Science fantasy.
Type: Experimental web serial.
Thematic elements: Magic, futuristic tech, gore, action, mystery and adventrue.
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Currently revamping the entire story. I won't be uploading any new chapters until that is done. So if you're a new reader, go back. Read it when I am done.
Really enjoying the story so far. The only problem I have is that(and it's a very personal problem) there is no Japanese surname called as 'Takahasi', the only one close is 'Takahashi' with 'h'. My OCD was going crazy the entire time I read. The story is still in the beginning stages so there isn't much to say about world background and character designs, but as far as the story progression and and writing quality goes, this book is very entertaining. The writing quality, although with a lot of minor inaccuracies, is on the higher end for this platform.
tbh for now this is the best novel i have ever read i litererally the best the world building writing style its perfect and if ur guys are hesitating to read this novel just read it this is hidden gem
The story is very good so far. I am obsessed with Extra / side villian and Academy troupe. it's only 30 chapters so far but very interesting. Suggestions; 1. Change the book cover ( remove the default one) so it can be discoverable for new readers 2. Update Frequently 3. Don't drop it
Alright, I'm going to give a proper review of this novel since I realise not many other comments really say what makes this story good. Firstly, if your enjoy this genre of 'put into my own novel' you will LOVE this. It has all the things that made the other stories in this genre so good whilst also keeping it fresh with new ideas and controlled. By controlled I mean it doesn't feel like everything has been smashed together by someione who's hoping to make everything work.Secondly, the mc doesn't have a saviour complex where he's sees a person in danger and instantly go to save the person like he's known them for years. He ways the pros and cons to come to a rationale conclusion.Each character that is interacted with has a strong personality and have really distinguished personalities. If a character is a simp you'll be able to tell instantly, and if a character is a real homie you'll also straight away.I think this novel is a must try for those who enjoy the 'fell into my own novel' genre enjoyers like myself and for a casual reader it's a give it a go for at least 25 chapters since if it doesn't suit by then, maybe the novel is just not for you.
I really enjoyed the book and the idea of it, pretty good stuff and I think the author should keep working hard to improve since I'm not really a fan of pov changes
This novel pleasantly surprised me with its potential to become a WebNovel sensation. I'm delighted to have discovered it early on. The story kicks off with a unique transmigration concept, introducing refreshing elements as the protagonist enters his own novel. The expansive world-building captivates me, and I anticipate the convergence of paradoxes and events as the narrative unfolds. The author skillfully pieces together the puzzle, providing subtle details that gain significance in later chapters. I've thoroughly enjoyed the first 126 chapters and eagerly await more.
Let's start with the Writing Quality. There might be a few mistakes here and there but it's definitely much better than your average novel's quality. To be honest, when I read the novel's name: "Extra with Nano Machines", I had been a little reluctant to read it. I honestly thought it'd turn out to be quite weird but was quite surprised after giving it a go. The World Background is huge considering all the xxxxxs out there(no spoilers for ya guys but let's just say it's quite big and interesting). The Story Development progresses in a way that always makes you wanna read more. We get to see a lot of different povs that makes it more interesting unlike those novels which monotonously continue on with the mc's pov. The Characters are well fleshed out. Overall, I'd recommend ya all to read this and don't judge it based on the name like me.
even though I haven't read a single syllable of this novel,I might as well shoot my shot and hopefully don't get my expectations backstabbed even though it might[img=Speechless]
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for some reason i always forget to give reviews. this novel takes a pretty different route in the "extra novel" genre that I'm a sucker for and I recommend it it's pretty good written(I'm not good at reviews)
Good novel, Just update the chapters more often and be more consistent Good novel, Just update the chapters more often and be more consistent Good novel, Just update the chapters more often and be more consistent
I have read the novel in both iterations and i have to say they are both wonderful novels. The author has found a true balance between world building and action packed exciting fights. The main character Noah uses his knowledge unlike many novels where the MC just goes "Oh there's magic in this world I'll just use physics and chemistry to make my spells OP"Instead the MC uses his brain to create futuristic weapons with the plan of world domination.I can't wait to read more and maybe even see some slow burning romance between the MC and a character.
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