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It has an interesting premise and it is pretty decent. It has some qualities that I don't exactly enjoy but that is mainly due to my personal preference so all in all it good.
The premise is absolutely interesting. the novel contains potential. the character seems to progressing well too. looking forward to it. the fairy character seems written well too.
firstly I like to say is I absolutely love this novel. The world building also good and the MC is absolutely adorable. Just want to point out is I don't like a repetitive villain in my opinion another than that is all good also thanks you for the work
This is an Awesome, Story It has a good concept (though the concept is nothing new). However, the clunky grammar, bad dialogue, flat characters (this might change in later chapters I'm not sure) really dragged it down for me. Now, I'd have liked to comment about the story (which is bland for me so far, but that's just my opinion), but I will refrain from doing so until I finish all the available chapters. ===The section below is my personal preferences only. Take it with a grain of salt=== The tense... you use present tense. It's not particularly bad, but it just feels weird, considering that a good chunk of stories here are written in past tense. The use of the so-called 'sound effects' really breaks immersion. And the thing where you said about no yuri... yeah no that's a flat-out lie. It's borderline yuri with some of the characters. === Anyways I made an account just to give this a review. Good luck on your future writing, Author.
The story here is good, a guy gets reincarnated as a dragon egg in a cave, later on he transforms into a humanoid form, wich is that of a woman, a lot of people seem to hate this but I honestly like GB in stories so it didnt affect me. now at chapter 50 the story progresses a lot and is doing well for me, the updates can be slow at times but i followed through this story regardless, and it is worth it every chapter, i wont say more for the sake of spoilers. TL/DR: Good but a lot of people hate it becouse of Gender Bender
the book was really good until the male mc was reborn in a woman's body i hate that kind of thing. please know in the tags on it.............................................
everything was preety good but.....from male to female dragon ........too horrible nightmare for me🤮🤮🤮🤮🤯🤯😱😱😱😱 bye good luck .....I'm Outta here
just amazing, here we can see the mixture of Japanese and American writing style which makes it unique, loved it, and will be waiting for upcoming issues, great work!
The premise is absolutely interesting. the novel contains potential. the character seems to progressing well too. looking forward to it. the fairy character seems written well too.
The concept is interesting. A bit early for an extensive review but shows a lot of promise. I will continue to follow it. But good start and all the best to the author.
The story is written fairly well but not enough detail. I love the dragon aspect and the cover looks amazing! Keep up the good work and keep a regular updating schedule!
It has an interesting premise and it is pretty decent. It has some qualities that I don't exactly enjoy but that is mainly due to my personal preference so all in all it good.
The premise is absolutely interesting. the novel contains potential. the character seems to progressing well too. looking forward to it. the fairy character seems written well too.
firstly I like to say is I absolutely love this novel. The world building also good and the MC is absolutely adorable. Just want to point out is I don't like a repetitive villain in my opinion another than that is all good also thanks you for the work
This is an Awesome, Story It has a good concept (though the concept is nothing new). However, the clunky grammar, bad dialogue, flat characters (this might change in later chapters I'm not sure) really dragged it down for me. Now, I'd have liked to comment about the story (which is bland for me so far, but that's just my opinion), but I will refrain from doing so until I finish all the available chapters. ===The section below is my personal preferences only. Take it with a grain of salt=== The tense... you use present tense. It's not particularly bad, but it just feels weird, considering that a good chunk of stories here are written in past tense. The use of the so-called 'sound effects' really breaks immersion. And the thing where you said about no yuri... yeah no that's a flat-out lie. It's borderline yuri with some of the characters. === Anyways I made an account just to give this a review. Good luck on your future writing, Author.
The story here is good, a guy gets reincarnated as a dragon egg in a cave, later on he transforms into a humanoid form, wich is that of a woman, a lot of people seem to hate this but I honestly like GB in stories so it didnt affect me. now at chapter 50 the story progresses a lot and is doing well for me, the updates can be slow at times but i followed through this story regardless, and it is worth it every chapter, i wont say more for the sake of spoilers. TL/DR: Good but a lot of people hate it becouse of Gender Bender
the book was really good until the male mc was reborn in a woman's body i hate that kind of thing. please know in the tags on it.............................................
everything was preety good but.....from male to female dragon ........too horrible nightmare for me🤮🤮🤮🤮🤯🤯😱😱😱😱 bye good luck .....I'm Outta here
just amazing, here we can see the mixture of Japanese and American writing style which makes it unique, loved it, and will be waiting for upcoming issues, great work!
The premise is absolutely interesting. the novel contains potential. the character seems to progressing well too. looking forward to it. the fairy character seems written well too.
The concept is interesting. A bit early for an extensive review but shows a lot of promise. I will continue to follow it. But good start and all the best to the author.
The story is written fairly well but not enough detail. I love the dragon aspect and the cover looks amazing! Keep up the good work and keep a regular updating schedule!
the story is good, if your into a laid back fantasy novel with op characters