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Dragon Ball A new Beginning
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A man got killed by a girl after she found out he cheated. He was reincarnated in the world of dragon ball and now he vows that he is doing to make a harem so that it would be fine even if he sleep with other girls.
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I'll leave you a decent review but overall I didn't enjoy it. Although I know you not an author, I've also just began writing myself. Every book has it's own writing style but unfortunately yours is more a lack of effort rather than a style. I do hope you edit your chapters so it could reach more people, if you want to know my specific issue with the writing check chapter two, it's a good example that sums everything up pretty decently.
fu*k you bro just so annoying, stop with this arrogant thing you re retard?
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