I didnt watch the anime if this is a fanfict but the writing felt rushed but also casual its not a good write but its not unbearable its i feel as your not giving many details on whats going on
all in all author its your book nobody knows it better than u we are here as outside eyes
good luck ill be reading more🙂
well first of all the grammar well there was problems with it but at least they made sense, the story was kinda fast paced and the most important thing MC is a simp and a beta
ahhhhhhhhhhhh im dead
tho i still gave it 3 stars cuz i just like douluo dalu ff
I didnt watch the anime if this is a fanfict but the writing felt rushed but also casual its not a good write but its not unbearable its i feel as your not giving many details on whats going on all in all author its your book nobody knows it better than u we are here as outside eyes good luck ill be reading more🙂