Douluo Dalu: Ōtsutsuki?

LV 12

Universe_Supreme

Didn't finish the first chapter just thought I should let others know that the main character is a man that was reborn as a girl not sure why since there are male otsutsuki, but to each there own. Author didn't put that in the synopsis so I am giving a warning here.

LV 2

Emerging

I think its good for my first book, but that might jut be because I a the author. Comment and review to tell me your opinion on it. If you have any ideas for my book, do tell. I will consider it. As for the question, Harem or Not? I come up with stuff as I right (I am an amateur) so I can't tell you that in advance. However, I don't see myself writing a harem, or even romance regarding the protagonist. But who knows?

LV 15

AkiraLight

The story is nice and well written. The only thing I can’t seem to understand or get past is the main characters gender. I mean he still thinks and acts like a man but is a girl?. It’s okay if there was a reason for the gender change being explained, such as due to his bloodline being stronger for females instead of males or what not but there’s nothing. Most readers are male and we tend to project ourselfs onto the characters we read. I have no issue with female leads and novels centred around females but that’s under the premise they identify as female. I’m kinda rambling soz, I like the fanfic just keep getting confused by the pronoun change when I know the mc should be a man but is not.

LV 14

Aeternabilis

Very jarring to read. Swaps he’s and she’s pronoun every other sentence it feels like. Throws your mind for a loop and makes it very hard to immerse yourself in the story as you can picture it well with the constant changing. I didn’t get very far so I may be wrong on this front. But it seems like the mc is gonna just follow Tang San. Something I find a bit boring, would be nice for he/she to have some independence

LV 14

WanderingWeeb

Read to C34 and can say its one of my favorite Doulou fanfics out there, the only reason people complain about the mixed up pronouns is because they cant connect two and two together. One of my favorite MC personally because she isnt a mary sue like a lot out there, she has her flaws and is a bit crazy that makes her more genuine and human. Another good note is that the story is forging its own storyline instead of sticking to the original canon, where it easily gets predictable and boring fast. Everyone reading a Doulou fanfic has read the story, don't make me read it again yk :/

LV 3

EphemeralShadow

Not bad, fairly interesting concept and a new take on transmigrating. Personally not my cup of tea but the writing is alright. Just a side note, Wong isn't a traditional Mandarin Chinese last name. It's the Cantonese romanization of the last name Huang or Wang. Since most fanfics are written in Mandarin or based in a Mandarin Chinese backstory, it really stands out.

LV 1

aadi_raj

First of it's kind, honestly it is good as the gems. One thing though the story can be a bit disorienting but it has its own charms. I like the protagonist and her actions (mostly) and the story progression not always going forward but also not forever stuck.

LV 13

Estelem_Shelym

Por favor que não seja Yuri . _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

LV 4

Lucifer_Anima

Non ho voglia di scrivere in inglese per cui potete anche leggervi un po' di italiano, la storia è bella, emozionate e coinvolgente e ora ho finito di scrivere tutti i caratteri necessari per fare una recensione