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If you want to bad review for illogical reasons...just don't...read the notes before starting and leave if you are so mentally challenged that simple things trigger you..I sincerely hope you find something better to read...I honestly started this so that people don't have to put up with mtl...and just enjoy reading, also i myself this read novel twice from beginning to end, that's why i give out 5 chapters/day
Sangat menarik banget sih baut aku dan cerita ya sangat bagus 😎👍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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Overall: This is a fan fiction you can only quite comprehend how bad it is by reading it, so I do recommend you try it. The writing quality is oftentimes misleading in its diction, and also somehow manages to turn a sentence of content into multiple paragraphs with little regard to brevity, which gets rather exhausting. Other than that, the writing quality is functional, and it conveys the characters thoughts and actions in a understandable, if stiff, way. The syntax is dryer than a desert, which unfortunately, does drive down the rating. (4/5) The Stability of Updates is shockingly good, if inconsistent, with multiple chapters being posted sometimes daily, or sometimes bi-daily (once every other day). (4/5) Story Development is the first big issue, with a tired clash of cliches, forced harems, and a cliche snarky system which has more personality than the main character. It is impressively unimpressive. (1/5) Character Design is undoubtedly the worst among the bunch, with every character being a tired repetition of the authors beliefs. This is the sort of fanfiction that attempts to draw comedy from the characters stupidity, but instead just draws up this vague feeling of disappointment. Followed by the realization that all the characters will be acting this way. (1/5) World Background, is not developed or established, with most of the information about the world coming from the context of the systems long monologues which typically take up about half the chapters length. There isn't a lot to say about this one. (3/5)
Suggest me some good soul land fanfics. But I don't want mc to be a simple atleast rational thinking and ruthless .......................,................... ..................
I know this is a translation but what is the Orginal Novel name?............................................................................................
Очень интересный фанфик. Я натыкался на фанфики с дневником но не мог прочесть после 10-15 глав потому что МС там даже не спрашивали могут ли другие видеть что он пишет. Здесь он хотя бы спрашивает. Сама система тоже написана неплохо на мой вкус и довольно забавно как она выкручивается об изменениях в героинях. Сам герой на мой вкус неплох. Романтика с некоторыми героинями может быть немного притянута за уши но не критично хотя в переводе иногда имена другие, но через пару глав возвращаются обратно.
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Due to the large number of characters, the relationships between the MC and the harem members tend to feel rushed or shallow. The interactions that occur are often brief moments or lack sufficient context, making the relationships feel unrealistic or forced.
author why don't you get the other story by the original author of this FanFiction, the name and 斗罗：系统早来万年，我虐爆唐三 are also very good See if you can translate it, it's already being translated but the author disappeared out of nowhere and it's only trm 17 chapter
im enjoying the book quite a bit but mostly cuz im bored, this book though is kinda boring in some aspects and ridiculous at others. Best part hes fing the whole tang san plot armor somewhat, the bad part hes basically only focused on girls. The power scaling is just wierd, he has as much mental reserves as a lvl 99 limit douluo and can only use perfect susanoo for 3 seconds? (around chapter 400) It just doesnt make sense to me, in naruto standards he is easily a kage lvl with everything he has so hows that possible, madara was capable of having it for a day or 2 while in combat with hashirama and thats while remote piloting, not from inside. Then theres his energy reserves, for his lvl he acts like he cant do much, at times he gets pretty wiped out from only using one technique, then he gains a few lvls and can use that same technique like hes drinking water. IDK, maybe im looking into it to much, ill enjoy what i can but i still dont like how hes so focused on girls when he knows theres a war coming, he should b focusing on getting stronger not who next to bang.
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This is a comedy fic so don't take it seriously, nice fic to kill time and those who likes Tang san better don't read it.
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I'm not surprised why the translator translated this novel. It's very enjoyable to read. MC solved the ridiculous and unreasonable plot about Tang San by bullying her and writing in a diary, making almost all the female leads know the terrible things that happened to them in the original story. I really like the plot of this story. The humor is not bad. There are scenes of MC showing love for girls all the time. So I recommend everyone to try reading it. Then you will think about how bad the original plot of Douluo Dalu is
Honestly I love this FF. I like the concept, I like the MC, I like how the characters are depicted, and I like the fact that the romance is well paced. Nothing is too fast nor too slow combined with the really fast updates it gives us a perfect combination when you progress in the story regularly and not like some other stories where it's too slow paced and you have only 1 chapter per week. The two downsides that I see are: - Some errors sometimes, like Ah Yin or Xiao Yu who are 100,000 years soul beasts but author (or translator I didn't look) write that they are 10,000 years soul beats. - The use of the diary, at start it was regularly used and present in every chapter, later MC instead do a session from time to time, sometimes with months between two sessions, while for use it's like 2-3 chapters I still think it's dumb to discard potential rewards just because MC didn't write just 1 or 2 lines in his diary.
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La historia es entretenida pero luego la intervención del autor mediante el uso del sistema dejando mensaje innecesarios a mitad del capítulo comenzaron a molestarme, esto se volvió cada vez más frecuente, por otra parte no me importaba que el sistema prohibiera a los personajes ciertas cosas, aunque hubiera preferido que amenazara con quitar todo lo que les dio y borrar de sus mentes el conocimiento que les transmito, pero luego del capítulo 56 perdí mí entusiasmo por leer, en ese punto el sistema amenazó con matar a alguien solo para cumplir el deseo del protagonista, esta intervención fue más allá de lo que creo correcto, si el protagonista tiene que recurrir a amenazas solo para conseguir chicas, no veo el sentido de molestarse con Tang San, no se si fue intencional, pero el autor mostro que su protagonista es un inútil que no puede hacer nada por su cuenta, solo esperar a que se le entregue todo de regalo, sus supuesta indignación con Tang San son solo celos, la verdad es que no me importa mucho si estos es así, pero al menos esperaba que fuera alguien inteligente capaz de usar el engaño para conseguir lo que quiere, pero no hay esfuerzo, es solo el sistema (autor) haciendo todo, en este punto cualquier tipo al azar podría ser el protagonista y no importaría porque no cambiaría nada.
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Vergonzoso! Esos mc chinos si que son desvergonzados, incluso yo no me atrevo a escribir tantas estupideces en mi diario, pero mc llama "esposas" a todas las chicas que conoce de la serie original, sin embargo, la serie es divertida, aunque siento que ya he leído 10 novelas con la mismas tramas, no es culpa de nadie, es bien sabido que todas las novelas chinas son copias de las 10 novelas originales.
Tiene muchos capítulos, tiene buenas reseñas, y no parece una mala historia, Que más puedo pedir, directamente a la biblioteca y ya lo comienzo a leer.
I strongly recommend the novel, even though I'm abandoning it here (chap 67) because the system wasn't to my taste, but in all aspects it's a good story. Maybe I'll come back in the future. Good job translator!
At first I was really excited to find another good fanfic. The translation was good and with 5 chapters released daily I was thrilled! Unfortunately the author messed up right on the second chapter. Such a shame... I really liked the system concept and the rewards it gave the MC too. The MC got a journal where he can write his thoughts and based on the words count he writes he receive a rewards each day. But why did the author need to make it weird and let all the female leads see his journal content??? Right off the bat the MC write he is a reincarnator and continues to give details on the world he is now, how it was a novel in his previous world and its plot - letting all the female lead know their future in a how much of a pervert the MC is and his his deepest secrets... Such a shame!! Except for Writing Quality and Updating Stability which I give five stars, everything else receive only one star.
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Readers should at least give this novel a chance. Good thing I didn't drop this novel in the early chapters. The MC might be a perverted hypocrite, but he is still somewhat a good guy, willing to sacrifice himself for the heroines.
Reveal Spoiler If you want to read advanced chapters, go to my patreon, patreon(.)co(m)/Shadow_D_X, just ignore the brackets, i will be done translating this series by this month in patreon. 10 chapter/day
If you want to bad review for illogical reasons...just don't...read the notes before starting and leave if you are so mentally challenged that simple things trigger you..I sincerely hope you find something better to read...I honestly started this so that people don't have to put up with mtl...and just enjoy reading, also i myself this read novel twice from beginning to end, that's why i give out 5 chapters/day
Sangat menarik banget sih baut aku dan cerita ya sangat bagus 😎👍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Reveal Spoiler Overall: This is a fan fiction you can only quite comprehend how bad it is by reading it, so I do recommend you try it. The writing quality is oftentimes misleading in its diction, and also somehow manages to turn a sentence of content into multiple paragraphs with little regard to brevity, which gets rather exhausting. Other than that, the writing quality is functional, and it conveys the characters thoughts and actions in a understandable, if stiff, way. The syntax is dryer than a desert, which unfortunately, does drive down the rating. (4/5) The Stability of Updates is shockingly good, if inconsistent, with multiple chapters being posted sometimes daily, or sometimes bi-daily (once every other day). (4/5) Story Development is the first big issue, with a tired clash of cliches, forced harems, and a cliche snarky system which has more personality than the main character. It is impressively unimpressive. (1/5) Character Design is undoubtedly the worst among the bunch, with every character being a tired repetition of the authors beliefs. This is the sort of fanfiction that attempts to draw comedy from the characters stupidity, but instead just draws up this vague feeling of disappointment. Followed by the realization that all the characters will be acting this way. (1/5) World Background, is not developed or established, with most of the information about the world coming from the context of the systems long monologues which typically take up about half the chapters length. There isn't a lot to say about this one. (3/5)
Suggest me some good soul land fanfics. But I don't want mc to be a simple atleast rational thinking and ruthless .......................,................... ..................
I know this is a translation but what is the Orginal Novel name?............................................................................................
Очень интересный фанфик. Я натыкался на фанфики с дневником но не мог прочесть после 10-15 глав потому что МС там даже не спрашивали могут ли другие видеть что он пишет. Здесь он хотя бы спрашивает. Сама система тоже написана неплохо на мой вкус и довольно забавно как она выкручивается об изменениях в героинях. Сам герой на мой вкус неплох. Романтика с некоторыми героинями может быть немного притянута за уши но не критично хотя в переводе иногда имена другие, но через пару глав возвращаются обратно.
Reveal Spoiler Due to the large number of characters, the relationships between the MC and the harem members tend to feel rushed or shallow. The interactions that occur are often brief moments or lack sufficient context, making the relationships feel unrealistic or forced.
author why don't you get the other story by the original author of this FanFiction, the name and 斗罗：系统早来万年，我虐爆唐三 are also very good See if you can translate it, it's already being translated but the author disappeared out of nowhere and it's only trm 17 chapter
im enjoying the book quite a bit but mostly cuz im bored, this book though is kinda boring in some aspects and ridiculous at others. Best part hes fing the whole tang san plot armor somewhat, the bad part hes basically only focused on girls. The power scaling is just wierd, he has as much mental reserves as a lvl 99 limit douluo and can only use perfect susanoo for 3 seconds? (around chapter 400) It just doesnt make sense to me, in naruto standards he is easily a kage lvl with everything he has so hows that possible, madara was capable of having it for a day or 2 while in combat with hashirama and thats while remote piloting, not from inside. Then theres his energy reserves, for his lvl he acts like he cant do much, at times he gets pretty wiped out from only using one technique, then he gains a few lvls and can use that same technique like hes drinking water. IDK, maybe im looking into it to much, ill enjoy what i can but i still dont like how hes so focused on girls when he knows theres a war coming, he should b focusing on getting stronger not who next to bang.
Reveal Spoiler This is a comedy fic so don't take it seriously, nice fic to kill time and those who likes Tang san better don't read it.
Reveal Spoiler I'm not surprised why the translator translated this novel. It's very enjoyable to read. MC solved the ridiculous and unreasonable plot about Tang San by bullying her and writing in a diary, making almost all the female leads know the terrible things that happened to them in the original story. I really like the plot of this story. The humor is not bad. There are scenes of MC showing love for girls all the time. So I recommend everyone to try reading it. Then you will think about how bad the original plot of Douluo Dalu is
Honestly I love this FF. I like the concept, I like the MC, I like how the characters are depicted, and I like the fact that the romance is well paced. Nothing is too fast nor too slow combined with the really fast updates it gives us a perfect combination when you progress in the story regularly and not like some other stories where it's too slow paced and you have only 1 chapter per week. The two downsides that I see are: - Some errors sometimes, like Ah Yin or Xiao Yu who are 100,000 years soul beasts but author (or translator I didn't look) write that they are 10,000 years soul beats. - The use of the diary, at start it was regularly used and present in every chapter, later MC instead do a session from time to time, sometimes with months between two sessions, while for use it's like 2-3 chapters I still think it's dumb to discard potential rewards just because MC didn't write just 1 or 2 lines in his diary.
One of the interesting stories, the description is good. Keep updating, Thank you [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
La historia es entretenida pero luego la intervención del autor mediante el uso del sistema dejando mensaje innecesarios a mitad del capítulo comenzaron a molestarme, esto se volvió cada vez más frecuente, por otra parte no me importaba que el sistema prohibiera a los personajes ciertas cosas, aunque hubiera preferido que amenazara con quitar todo lo que les dio y borrar de sus mentes el conocimiento que les transmito, pero luego del capítulo 56 perdí mí entusiasmo por leer, en ese punto el sistema amenazó con matar a alguien solo para cumplir el deseo del protagonista, esta intervención fue más allá de lo que creo correcto, si el protagonista tiene que recurrir a amenazas solo para conseguir chicas, no veo el sentido de molestarse con Tang San, no se si fue intencional, pero el autor mostro que su protagonista es un inútil que no puede hacer nada por su cuenta, solo esperar a que se le entregue todo de regalo, sus supuesta indignación con Tang San son solo celos, la verdad es que no me importa mucho si estos es así, pero al menos esperaba que fuera alguien inteligente capaz de usar el engaño para conseguir lo que quiere, pero no hay esfuerzo, es solo el sistema (autor) haciendo todo, en este punto cualquier tipo al azar podría ser el protagonista y no importaría porque no cambiaría nada.
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Vergonzoso! Esos mc chinos si que son desvergonzados, incluso yo no me atrevo a escribir tantas estupideces en mi diario, pero mc llama "esposas" a todas las chicas que conoce de la serie original, sin embargo, la serie es divertida, aunque siento que ya he leído 10 novelas con la mismas tramas, no es culpa de nadie, es bien sabido que todas las novelas chinas son copias de las 10 novelas originales.
Tiene muchos capítulos, tiene buenas reseñas, y no parece una mala historia, Que más puedo pedir, directamente a la biblioteca y ya lo comienzo a leer.
I strongly recommend the novel, even though I'm abandoning it here (chap 67) because the system wasn't to my taste, but in all aspects it's a good story. Maybe I'll come back in the future. Good job translator!
At first I was really excited to find another good fanfic. The translation was good and with 5 chapters released daily I was thrilled! Unfortunately the author messed up right on the second chapter. Such a shame... I really liked the system concept and the rewards it gave the MC too. The MC got a journal where he can write his thoughts and based on the words count he writes he receive a rewards each day. But why did the author need to make it weird and let all the female leads see his journal content??? Right off the bat the MC write he is a reincarnator and continues to give details on the world he is now, how it was a novel in his previous world and its plot - letting all the female lead know their future in a how much of a pervert the MC is and his his deepest secrets... Such a shame!! Except for Writing Quality and Updating Stability which I give five stars, everything else receive only one star.
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A tradução está muito boa, espero que o autor não desista da tradução. 👍🙏👍🙏✍️👍👏🙏✍️👍👏🙏✍️👍👏🙏✍️👍👏🙏✍️🙏👏👍✍️🙏👏👍👊👏🙏🙏🙏👏👍👏🙏✍️✍️🙏✍️🙏🙏🙏🙏👍✍️👍👍✍️👍👍👍👍✍️👍✍️🙏✍️🙏✍️✍️🙏✍️🙏
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Readers should at least give this novel a chance. Good thing I didn't drop this novel in the early chapters. The MC might be a perverted hypocrite, but he is still somewhat a good guy, willing to sacrifice himself for the heroines.
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If you want to read advanced chapters, go to my patreon, patreon(.)co(m)/Shadow_D_X, just ignore the brackets, i will be done translating this series by this month in patreon. 10 chapter/day