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It's all about an adventure in an unknown planet with a series of dangerous tests that our profound heroes have to unravel.
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Beautifully written. The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful and the use of words that complement the subject of the story as a whole.
Interesting storyline filled with mystery, Cliffhangers, and danger. The author has done an amazing job showcasing this masterpiece book. I immensely enjoyed reading all seven chapters. The writing style is well written. Definitely recommend for reading. Keep up the good work,author!
This is amazing great imagination, settings and plot are really thought well super natural, terristian creature you bring me in your imagination. Keep on writing. 👍👍😉😊
Wow...what a roller coaster ride this author takes his reader to. its full of suspense and mystery. This is one of those books which keeps you on the edge of your seat. i loved it!! Great job author
The first few lines and I was already trapped by this books. Stop reading it but I have to mention how much I love the writers imaginations. Beautiful piece, a must read.
Wow. It is a nice story. I liked it very much. The plot as well as the characters are interesting. I am quite curious to see where this story ends and how. Keep up the good work. Kudos to the Author!!!
This is a very intriguing book! The protagonist is quite the interesting character and their circumstances is quite the hook. Can't wait to see what more the author has in store for us 😆
this is a nice and flabbergasting novel i must say i am astonished by the plot and storyline i am amazed good job to this author for this wonderful piece it a good one
This story got me. It was great! I want to be in Dormica, too. It was like a ride in the dark; thrilling and unexpected. The first chapter already got my attention. I would definitely recommend this story.
From the story description, to the tests found within the chapters, a lot of mystery and suspense is evident. The authors vivid imagination and other worldly creativity is well depicted in the riddles provided as well as how they are solved. I am looking forward to encountering and solving the " million riddles" in the mysterious land as we progress with our journey.
Wow, this is great! I’m really enjoying this book so far, the author is doing a good job with the story line/ plot of this book can’t wait to see what happens next
What a beautiful story filled worth suspense, danger and mystery, this book is a must read, congrats to the author on creating such a masterpiece I highly recommend it
The suspense is awesome. The plot is superb. I like the way you keep us(the readers) in the dark along side the characters. Your writing style is marvelous
I am absolutely adoring the element of suspense in this. The plot is superb, and the way you write enhances that all the more. Awesome job, I cant wait for you to update
I have to say that tbis story is not what I expected. It is a lot more darker and intriguing than a lot of fantasy that is out there. The lore is what you would expect.
A solid 4.8 for me. The writing quality is actually really good, the only thing is the grammatical mistakes that occur every once in a while. The way the ideas are conveyed through the sentences is actually very effective. It's intriguing, the characters are interesting (MC), and the world background along with the main plot and development are both great. I just hope that the author won't give up and keep posting!
solving riddles is not so easy and not that difficult either. the problem is one needs the kind of knowledge to be able to work out the answer. the reader sometimes seems to guess the answer far sooner than the characters themselves and it creates a sense of expectation that makes the reader go through the story. good job by the author.