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Started reading this after catching up on Dragon Master. It’s another banger with lots of potential and I like how Mc isn’t throwing in girls just because like other novels
Trash Novel written by a Trash author, honestly I expect nothing less, Mc has omniscient and omnipotent, and I get he won't use these things for the sake of plot but that doesn't justify being dumb and childish, atleast use some of that omniscient to be wise or intelligent atleast instead of being so stupid. Another garbage Mc with a brain of 5 year old with unlimited power
mc nerfs himself around chapter 45-50 which I didn’t like but other than that the story is great
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bro u really got a way to make people tempt reading ur novel. Anyway this better be a wholesome harem, don't ignore old for new. be fair to all... real love emotion is a must for me. Also don't buff/ favor MC too much. I've read 100s of harem novel, most authors buff and favor their MC too much that its'stoo easy to get girls for him, no challenge. Like MC talks,touches and girls falls. Bro I hope it's not like that.. he should be quite carefree and maintain his attitude as their Master and their support.
I like the story but I also don't like some of it. most part of the story is something that I really like. but there something that killing me. it is misunderstanding. the author said it is just small plot, but it is really not my cup of tea. I don't really like something that long term misunderstanding, something like his understanding about his power and that his people just like use imagination to make thing to big with something not supposed to do. I don't say that it is bad and I try to read it till it change, also I can recommend it. it just I don't really great with something like that. (for ex. eminence in shadow, overlord or, nageki borei.) it's good, but yeah..
Hey author can you please post the discord link. The one you posted is expired.
There are frequent albeit minor grammatical mistakes. It's a very nice book to just chill with.
well.... i don't know about other ,but so far i loved loved this story... i just wish it will be like 1500+ chapters and auther doesn't go hiatus or drops the story... and i also like the mc's personality .. overall so far its's a superb story and i hope author will not make it like some other no els where they starts great but after some time they just go down the drain....
you don't tell cultivation realm perfectly after reading so many chapter i still don't understand which come after which
Good novel and has huge potential. Will the mc take a long time before he learns more of the world he is in and the common sense most cultivators have in the world. Will he know which realm he is in and how to teach others how to cultivate. As someone who is powerful, I would like to know the power structure a cultivator in each realm can do.
Where can find yuri in the male mc harem or can someone recommend me some novels just like this one
i started off loving this novel. it's a decent spin on a harem novel where the MC starts OP and navigates his way through Xanxia. The grammar is the Achilles heel for this novel as with most webnovels. I read through the first 50 chapters and while i liked what each character brought to the story, the grammar derails the build up of scenes while you mentally replace what the word should have been. having said that, author you have an Amazon worthy book if you can find a decent editor.
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It starts off great, author incorporates some interesting themes that you don’t normally see in novels these days. MC doesn’t automatically just get a new life and forgets all his past trauma, he actually recognizes he’s still fragile despite having a system now. Where I will comment is that the pace is pretty slow, 3-4 chapters of side character story just so we can know why the MC made a move 5 chapters ago is a bit much especially with a novel that doesn’t have a 100 chaps and barely any real interest has been generated for MC and his main harem for us to care about side characters . Other things would need some work too, such as actual character descriptions , better explanation with MC skills and at least even seein the system more in action since that is what supposedly is helping him with all this power. All in all needs work and I should of waited further down before unlocking 😅
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Well,I have read it. Its pretty good. Just the type I want.The only problem is you should release more chp a day.Beside that I think its pretty good.
this novel is good if you want to waste your time, the MC is so childish, and he clearly has the power to destroy the world but he let that one villain young master live the moment he tries to antagonize him, he can just kill him and destroy everything related to that young master and be done with it. and he has all the power but why don't he just use that, at one point he can just wish to know everything that world has to offer and not just be a stupid country bumpkin that is confused every time.
Reccomended if you like to read xianxia or fantasy. It also filled with humor and romance with intersting character and world building. Definitely must read!
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So, I'm writing this review after writing around 80 chapters. I'll make a few things clear and then you can ask your question in comment section. MC will be like a normal human and not some egoistic edgy mc so you can drop if you want that. Like kills everything he finds, takes any women just because she's hot and like that. You won't that in this novel. About the misunderstanding part. It's actually a small part of plot and not something major like mc is completely unaware of what his disciples doing and all. Now his women. So, he will take every women in his harem whom he sees have a good character, even if he doesn't love her, yet. After all, love can be bloomed later and character is the most important. He will kill man and women, all, for his sect and disciples. But there won't be situation where he kills only make disciples of a sect and takes all female. No, because Mc wants to build a family in his sect. Now, there will be yu.ri in the harem. What means that here? It doesn't mean romantic relationship between female leads but sexual interaction while MC is present and they're doing the deed. It's hot for me so I'm writing that. Now, will all of women be virgins? No. Most will but you have to understand that mc will take his women based on character so that's not a requirement tbh. However, he wouldn't take someone who's like Aphrodite and well you know what I mean. He'll take married women due to many reasons and honestly, that's okay since the character of the women would be good. (Sleeping around obviously isn't lol) Hehe, well this is mostly for a situation where mc will have mother daughter pair and I ain't writing that mother is virgin despite being a mother. It's completely illogical. So these are the points I wanted to make and if you feel like you don't like these, then please drop the novel. This isn't for you.
Started reading this after catching up on Dragon Master. It’s another banger with lots of potential and I like how Mc isn’t throwing in girls just because like other novels
Trash Novel written by a Trash author, honestly I expect nothing less, Mc has omniscient and omnipotent, and I get he won't use these things for the sake of plot but that doesn't justify being dumb and childish, atleast use some of that omniscient to be wise or intelligent atleast instead of being so stupid. Another garbage Mc with a brain of 5 year old with unlimited power
mc nerfs himself around chapter 45-50 which I didn’t like but other than that the story is great
Reveal Spoiler bro u really got a way to make people tempt reading ur novel. Anyway this better be a wholesome harem, don't ignore old for new. be fair to all... real love emotion is a must for me. Also don't buff/ favor MC too much. I've read 100s of harem novel, most authors buff and favor their MC too much that its'stoo easy to get girls for him, no challenge. Like MC talks,touches and girls falls. Bro I hope it's not like that.. he should be quite carefree and maintain his attitude as their Master and their support.
I like the story but I also don't like some of it. most part of the story is something that I really like. but there something that killing me. it is misunderstanding. the author said it is just small plot, but it is really not my cup of tea. I don't really like something that long term misunderstanding, something like his understanding about his power and that his people just like use imagination to make thing to big with something not supposed to do. I don't say that it is bad and I try to read it till it change, also I can recommend it. it just I don't really great with something like that. (for ex. eminence in shadow, overlord or, nageki borei.) it's good, but yeah..
Hey author can you please post the discord link. The one you posted is expired.
There are frequent albeit minor grammatical mistakes. It's a very nice book to just chill with.
well.... i don't know about other ,but so far i loved loved this story... i just wish it will be like 1500+ chapters and auther doesn't go hiatus or drops the story... and i also like the mc's personality .. overall so far its's a superb story and i hope author will not make it like some other no els where they starts great but after some time they just go down the drain....
you don't tell cultivation realm perfectly after reading so many chapter i still don't understand which come after which
Good novel and has huge potential. Will the mc take a long time before he learns more of the world he is in and the common sense most cultivators have in the world. Will he know which realm he is in and how to teach others how to cultivate. As someone who is powerful, I would like to know the power structure a cultivator in each realm can do.
Where can find yuri in the male mc harem or can someone recommend me some novels just like this one
i started off loving this novel. it's a decent spin on a harem novel where the MC starts OP and navigates his way through Xanxia. The grammar is the Achilles heel for this novel as with most webnovels. I read through the first 50 chapters and while i liked what each character brought to the story, the grammar derails the build up of scenes while you mentally replace what the word should have been. having said that, author you have an Amazon worthy book if you can find a decent editor.
Reveal Spoiler It starts off great, author incorporates some interesting themes that you don’t normally see in novels these days. MC doesn’t automatically just get a new life and forgets all his past trauma, he actually recognizes he’s still fragile despite having a system now. Where I will comment is that the pace is pretty slow, 3-4 chapters of side character story just so we can know why the MC made a move 5 chapters ago is a bit much especially with a novel that doesn’t have a 100 chaps and barely any real interest has been generated for MC and his main harem for us to care about side characters . Other things would need some work too, such as actual character descriptions , better explanation with MC skills and at least even seein the system more in action since that is what supposedly is helping him with all this power. All in all needs work and I should of waited further down before unlocking 😅
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Reveal Spoiler Well,I have read it. Its pretty good. Just the type I want.The only problem is you should release more chp a day.Beside that I think its pretty good.
this novel is good if you want to waste your time, the MC is so childish, and he clearly has the power to destroy the world but he let that one villain young master live the moment he tries to antagonize him, he can just kill him and destroy everything related to that young master and be done with it. and he has all the power but why don't he just use that, at one point he can just wish to know everything that world has to offer and not just be a stupid country bumpkin that is confused every time.
Reccomended if you like to read xianxia or fantasy. It also filled with humor and romance with intersting character and world building. Definitely must read!
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So, I'm writing this review after writing around 80 chapters. I'll make a few things clear and then you can ask your question in comment section. MC will be like a normal human and not some egoistic edgy mc so you can drop if you want that. Like kills everything he finds, takes any women just because she's hot and like that. You won't that in this novel. About the misunderstanding part. It's actually a small part of plot and not something major like mc is completely unaware of what his disciples doing and all. Now his women. So, he will take every women in his harem whom he sees have a good character, even if he doesn't love her, yet. After all, love can be bloomed later and character is the most important. He will kill man and women, all, for his sect and disciples. But there won't be situation where he kills only make disciples of a sect and takes all female. No, because Mc wants to build a family in his sect. Now, there will be yu.ri in the harem. What means that here? It doesn't mean romantic relationship between female leads but sexual interaction while MC is present and they're doing the deed. It's hot for me so I'm writing that. Now, will all of women be virgins? No. Most will but you have to understand that mc will take his women based on character so that's not a requirement tbh. However, he wouldn't take someone who's like Aphrodite and well you know what I mean. He'll take married women due to many reasons and honestly, that's okay since the character of the women would be good. (Sleeping around obviously isn't lol) Hehe, well this is mostly for a situation where mc will have mother daughter pair and I ain't writing that mother is virgin despite being a mother. It's completely illogical. So these are the points I wanted to make and if you feel like you don't like these, then please drop the novel. This isn't for you.