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Write a reviewLove this story, wish it would update more. The fight scenes are immaculate.................................................................
To be honest after rereading, I think the pacing is a little slow, but still rather enjoyable. I love the authors dedication with the images in chapter comments as well. Its overall a polished and really good story.
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The novel is very good, I like the idea of ββthe story and I highly recommend it, it is one of the best novels that I have read in this genre. I write to give you my support in this novel, I apologize since I consider that I do not have the criteria to make a point-to-point review, due to many reasons, because I do not have experience and also English is not my native language and I understand little about it. I use the tradition of Google, but I still love the story and I hope you continue it, I have rarely left comments on the stories compared to the number I have read and I only do it when I love what I read. Nothing more for the moment I say goodbye. Atte. RF
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yes I am glad this story does not have a tragedy like your other stories, I have no problem with dark stories but tragedies are a bit unpleasant even though the story is interesting.
honestly it's a good story, and it's rare to find it on the topic of digimon. the main characters are well described, including their personalities, motives and objectives (I liked that they are more mature and that the MC is not dense when it comes to relationships). the scale of power, until now well structured as far as possible. the dynamics of the powers, organizations of the world, seem to promise something good. in the digital world itself, not much has been presented, but what you can imagine from the communities and circles of the digimon will be interesting waiting for her. what I liked, is the environment presented, you see the most frequent interaction and it influences very closely the digital world in the human world, the dynamics of the strength between the tamer and the digimon (not just behind cheering), digital technology advancing the da earth, human communities revolving around technology and also the power of the digimon that are in charge, the interesting addition of mutations that is a perfectly possible case in this type of environment. as everyone knows that there is a digital world, the dynamics of environments and people's views change their daily lives, coming close to a 'real fictional reality' (than in my opinion it would be, if everyone knew about digimon, the world digital, digimon attacks on the earth and also if the digimon were not only contained in the digital world, digimon caused damage with victims, there were 'intelligent' digimon for certain actions). finally, until now it presents a good story and with a lot of potential.
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I am quite surprised to find a good digimon story I hope you can continue the good work and develop more on all the digivolution possible for example dark,armor and X antibody.
this is a very good story. I hate that I can't find any good digimon stories on here that keep going, but this is one I look forward to reading any time there is a new chapter. I highly recommend this to everyone
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uma boa história, que tem um bom potencial. gosto dos personagens cada um com a sua própria personalidade, e um mundo que foi apresentado de uma forma que dar para ser bem explorado sem ter que força o leitor a engolir goela abaixo com coisas que fazem pensar como que aconteceu isso ou da onde sair essa coisas
The author has done a great job mixing in different characters from different sources, although not many of them have been introduced yet but they have been mentioned. Iβm just glad the MC, who is Naruto, isnβt portrayed as a spoiled, annoying, and attention seeking kid but as a mature, calm and collected person. All in all, I canβt wait to read more chapters.
So far so good, loving reading this novel and I'm still in the beginning parts, I'm really curious how you're going to tie in marvel into it π .Keep up the great work
This King is here to enlighten all you lowly mongrels to the master piece that is this story. This story has great writing quality, story development, and world background. Character design is also great but considering that the characters are premade the author captured and molded their personalities well to fit the confines of this story. Updating Stability is another matter. Since the story overall was created between 2-3 weeks ago the amount of chapters we have, especially considering their length is very good. However since the Author has mentioned getting inspiration for writing chapters based on the amount comments, ratings, reviews and such things. The Updating Stability is volatile. Chapter releases can increase or decrease all based on the whims of the Author. If he decides the feedback was good maybe we get a daily chapter maybe even 2 chapters a day once in a while. However if he is disappointed by the feedback we may go a few days without chapters. Who Knows it may even get to a point were its weeks. Or maybe the story even gets dropped. Of course so far this hasnt happend as of yet. Well besides the fact that he is waiting for reviews now that ths first arc is done so we arent getting any new chapters. As such the only reason that Update Stability has a 5/5 is one, because the current story deserves it and two, as a way to encourage the Author. If not the rating may have been a 3 simply because of the volitility of it.
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Honestly top 5 fics I have read on this site. It's the best digimon fan fiction in my opinion, and there is so much detail throughout the story and a good plot to keep me interested dont drop it author!
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Reveal SpoilerLove this story, wish it would update more. The fight scenes are immaculate.................................................................
To be honest after rereading, I think the pacing is a little slow, but still rather enjoyable. I love the authors dedication with the images in chapter comments as well. Its overall a polished and really good story.
MOAR.................................................................. ... .............................................................
MOAR.................................................................................................................... ...................
MOAR............................................. ..eggeg22gg2eeegggeeheheharjtzttsjtstaktwmtsjttstjwtjtwjtwjtwtwjtwmttksstmtkgjstsjtkstkstskyskyksmyyskyksyyeykeyksgkssyjgjs
The novel is very good, I like the idea of ββthe story and I highly recommend it, it is one of the best novels that I have read in this genre. I write to give you my support in this novel, I apologize since I consider that I do not have the criteria to make a point-to-point review, due to many reasons, because I do not have experience and also English is not my native language and I understand little about it. I use the tradition of Google, but I still love the story and I hope you continue it, I have rarely left comments on the stories compared to the number I have read and I only do it when I love what I read. Nothing more for the moment I say goodbye. Atte. RF
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yes I am glad this story does not have a tragedy like your other stories, I have no problem with dark stories but tragedies are a bit unpleasant even though the story is interesting.
honestly it's a good story, and it's rare to find it on the topic of digimon. the main characters are well described, including their personalities, motives and objectives (I liked that they are more mature and that the MC is not dense when it comes to relationships). the scale of power, until now well structured as far as possible. the dynamics of the powers, organizations of the world, seem to promise something good. in the digital world itself, not much has been presented, but what you can imagine from the communities and circles of the digimon will be interesting waiting for her. what I liked, is the environment presented, you see the most frequent interaction and it influences very closely the digital world in the human world, the dynamics of the strength between the tamer and the digimon (not just behind cheering), digital technology advancing the da earth, human communities revolving around technology and also the power of the digimon that are in charge, the interesting addition of mutations that is a perfectly possible case in this type of environment. as everyone knows that there is a digital world, the dynamics of environments and people's views change their daily lives, coming close to a 'real fictional reality' (than in my opinion it would be, if everyone knew about digimon, the world digital, digimon attacks on the earth and also if the digimon were not only contained in the digital world, digimon caused damage with victims, there were 'intelligent' digimon for certain actions). finally, until now it presents a good story and with a lot of potential.
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I am quite surprised to find a good digimon story I hope you can continue the good work and develop more on all the digivolution possible for example dark,armor and X antibody.
this is a very good story. I hate that I can't find any good digimon stories on here that keep going, but this is one I look forward to reading any time there is a new chapter. I highly recommend this to everyone
Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!Best!
Reveal SpoilerI'm just here now cause I'm bored. XD ExpExpExpExpXpExpExpExpExpExpXpExpExpExpExpExpXpExpExpExpExpExpXpExpExpExpExpExpXpExpExpExpExpExpXpExp
uma boa história, que tem um bom potencial. gosto dos personagens cada um com a sua própria personalidade, e um mundo que foi apresentado de uma forma que dar para ser bem explorado sem ter que força o leitor a engolir goela abaixo com coisas que fazem pensar como que aconteceu isso ou da onde sair essa coisas
The author has done a great job mixing in different characters from different sources, although not many of them have been introduced yet but they have been mentioned. Iβm just glad the MC, who is Naruto, isnβt portrayed as a spoiled, annoying, and attention seeking kid but as a mature, calm and collected person. All in all, I canβt wait to read more chapters.
So far so good, loving reading this novel and I'm still in the beginning parts, I'm really curious how you're going to tie in marvel into it π .Keep up the great work
This King is here to enlighten all you lowly mongrels to the master piece that is this story. This story has great writing quality, story development, and world background. Character design is also great but considering that the characters are premade the author captured and molded their personalities well to fit the confines of this story. Updating Stability is another matter. Since the story overall was created between 2-3 weeks ago the amount of chapters we have, especially considering their length is very good. However since the Author has mentioned getting inspiration for writing chapters based on the amount comments, ratings, reviews and such things. The Updating Stability is volatile. Chapter releases can increase or decrease all based on the whims of the Author. If he decides the feedback was good maybe we get a daily chapter maybe even 2 chapters a day once in a while. However if he is disappointed by the feedback we may go a few days without chapters. Who Knows it may even get to a point were its weeks. Or maybe the story even gets dropped. Of course so far this hasnt happend as of yet. Well besides the fact that he is waiting for reviews now that ths first arc is done so we arent getting any new chapters. As such the only reason that Update Stability has a 5/5 is one, because the current story deserves it and two, as a way to encourage the Author. If not the rating may have been a 3 simply because of the volitility of it.
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Honestly top 5 fics I have read on this site. It's the best digimon fan fiction in my opinion, and there is so much detail throughout the story and a good plot to keep me interested dont drop it author!
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it's a excellent read π highly recommend