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Devil's Luck[Arc 5: Worlds Apart]

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Author: FroztDouluo

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Zenkichi Hitoyoshi is a young man, destined to be chained by fate in the early story of canon. He was a man without ambition, drive, will and talent to become something great. Well, that'll soon change. For better, or for worse.

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AN: Alright, let's do this one last time, probably. Here's another Medaka Box fanfic that I hope it'll get to a hundred chapters before I drop it, or not? It depends on life really.

And positive comments and reviews, I don't really care much of power stones(tho, that doesn't mean you can't...) but positive feedback on my work really inspires me more to write.

Want to check out my pa-treon and be ahead of your fellow WN kin? Well here's the link: pa–treon.com/FroztDouluo

*Just get rid of the dash.

Edit: I just changed it to Gilgamesh because... Zenkichi basically almost resembles him at this point(I didn't planned for this happen)

Schedule and the amount of chapters I'd be popping out? Tuesday and Thursday(UTC +8), 2–3 chapters a week(it's usually just 2 chapters because I'm slow at making anime related stories).

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CartoonSensei

Zenkichi Hitoyoshi x naze youka || Zenkichi Hitoyoshi x naze youka || Zenkichi Hitoyoshi x naze youka || Zenkichi Hitoyoshi x naze youka...

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1yr
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Gishi_4187

okay well, it was great until the merger of another anime world that destroyed the flow of the story, and from there onwards, the story and plot went downhill. Anyway, I'm most likely gonna drop this fic from my library because I can't see this fic getting better.

1yr
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LeafPanda

This story isn't that interesting, especially when the characters aren't really acting as they should be. But I guess people have different interest

9mth
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Matheus_Pascheto

it started great but after the chapters 15 the story only went down Hill , i read only till chapters 63 and couldnt continue.inglish is not my primary leanguage.

1yr
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Phaze_MorningStar2

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1yr
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LunaKindred

MC is a doll, that's all. You read jjk? You know itadori yuji? Yes, this MC's fics is like him, protagonist but feels like npc. Don't waste your time to read this... Trust me, even the tier 3 harem fics will have a better story plot

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7mth
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spectra_phantom

Why did the first medaka box fanfic fall, it was going really well, both the episode length was good and the comments were good, I fully trust you. medaka <3

1yr
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FroztDouluo

Nothing to see here, just an author shamelessly submitting a five star review of his own work because he felt like it😗

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1yr
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MonkeReviewer

End of the first volume: Everything was going great untill the addition of other systems and anime, manhwas, etc.. Pro: 1. Writing is clear and understandable 2. System mechanics are very logicical and I can understand your thoughts behind it 3. Very interesting first chapter with a great hook Cons: 1. Spreads it self too far Explanation; it was going really well until you decided to add more animes/manhwas because you just kept adding them too fast and didn’t give us enough time for us to take in or enjoy them especially when you decided to randomly put in dangaropa into the picture after we’ve just see you include in record of ragnarok, iruma-kun, lookism, etc.. but, not only that you then decided to put the mc through a percarious event without any build up which again is going really fast and felt forced to me. 2. The system has too many mechanics Explanation; again like the last con your spreading yourself too much and just adding more work for yourself with the Chat system. And, I can try to guess and say that you did it so you can have more adventures for the mc but you already have soo much to work on so it feels very rushed. 3. The story feels rushed Explanation: you were doing pretty good for the first few chapters but it felt very rushed after you decided to add other animes. And, it seems like you were just adding things to make the story interesting but it just comes out as very rushed. Conclusion: Solid intro and story but please try not to spread yourself thin and rush yourself because you have potential and I don’t want to see you get burnt out on writing. Also, maybe take more time when thinking about your story and try not to worry too much about updates. Overall, I give this a 3.9/5

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12mth
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Phaze_MorningStar2

I liked it at first but it got more and more unbearable The mc feels more like a side characterAnd the world background feels a bit rushed

7mth
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RandomFateFan

First of all,It's a good fic, while it does have it's ups and down(looking at you arc 2), it is overall pretty good. Arc 5 is really good for now(atlest the second part of it), anyway i like the Mc and the characthers they are really fun. Not much more to say, i am not the best with reviews.

2mth
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Khons
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I tried to bear with the story but couldn’t so I dropped it. It became to clique and unreadable. This is sad because no one writes about Medaka Box.

7mth
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dankoku

realized I never reviewed this, anyway, really good fanfic, characters are well done, MC is pretty decently OP, nothing to complain about.

1yr
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Outer_God_Azathoth

ONE OF MY FAVORITE FANFIC!!

11mth
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lord_of_cinder

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LifelessMan

Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work

1yr
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fakeDarkestknight2

wkwkwkw bruh your cover Made zenkichi look like Riser with milking ai stuff

7mth
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Kinen_Rockmore

don't know what to say so I will just type gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggGGGGGGGGGGGggggggggggggggggggggggg

10mth
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Curios_Theories

Read it, is a good fic ....….................................….................................….................................….............................

10mth
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Mea_Cu1pa

"No hay fuerza en la carne, solo debilidad". "No hay constancia en la carne, solo decadencia". "No hay certeza en la carne sino en la muerte"

11mth
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