Descending Of The Lost Star

LV 10

ThyUnknownSaint

It’s a really cute story. I’m in awe with the potential it has. MC is like a Kuudere and Tsundere. Has bad communication skills but is nice. Luru is a pure intelligent girl whose working hard to catch up to MC. Not only that but out of everyone she can see his intentions. But it’s also a very messy story. It seriously needs to be rewritten and polishing. You don’t show but just tell. The Cultivation/Magic System is so confusing. It might need to be rewritten. Why not keep it ******? Cultivator from a galactic era goes into a magic world? The System will sooner or later become one big spider web. This story can be one very deep story. The characters are great with their own background. MC often times remembers his sister. But it all needs to be rewritten better. Take it a bit slow. I think it’s silly for the MC to have his power sealed, isn’t it a bit too late for that? It should had been Katerina to be his teacher instead. And selling the Item box was too much, i was fine with the other things but item box was like advanced technology. I really fell in love with this story and grew attach to the characters. Father treats MC like a princess and he gets mad. None of the family pried on MC but treated him like family.

LV 5

RajaUragon

Thank goodness!~ After checking a lot of original novels, I found something worth putting my power stones on! OP is ok. Lot of us still love that. But the MC here is not too OP. There's still higher levels that he can try to reach. (That's what I understand after reading that MC doesn't know Mana training) But what I really like about the novel is the technology of the MC and how the author explains it. After reading a few chapters you'll notice that the author did not mention the full details of the MC's past right away or the power systems which is good. Readers will be excited to read more and find out the details. Author can give hints from time to time so we can collect pieces of info and build the puzzle to unveil the mystery of the MC and the world. There are times that it confuses me who says who so I hope the author can do something about that. I really wish that this original novel will not be drop like others. If the author can release chapters in a stable manner like maybe 7 - 10 chapters a week, you can count on me for a power stone everyday and a 5 star rating on every chapter!! Cheers!! 😀😀

LV 15

j_hopefull

So far the story is cute (up to chapter 39). It has a lot of potential and am looking forward to where it ends up. There are issues though. This is coming from someone who HATES to write (because I have to keep in mind grammar, punctuation, etc.) but LOVES to read 😅: Some grammar and an annoyingly amount of misspelling that kind of BREAKS the flow of the story (it appears to be repeated words like “felt” that should be “fell” instead, etc.) I mean, I’ve encountered A LOT worse in other translations, so this is still not too bad. But it would, in my opinion, make the story flow better to the point I could read right through bad grammar? The cultivation levels are also confusing. Especially since the beasts, humans and the MC use different types/names to inform the type of strength they possess? That’s all that I can think of at the moment. I would like to continue to read this story with the hopes that the storyline will be as good as it potentially shows! 😁

LV 10

Allend_Reaper

The story is Mix between magic, cultivation, and Technology. as far as i read Technology is MC base to overcome obstacle and in no rush to find an energy to replenish that have been lost in some circumtance. story line is good handling with carefull delivery. MC is certainly OP as long as he have Energy. i have not reach deep but i guess this is worth time to read and this story are indeed in my taste. keep it up Author and Good job.. 👍👍👍

LV 4

BeeNy

It was an easy read and well developed story so far, thus I'm looking forward to see even more changes and developments in the story. It's still in the early stage, I'd like to see if the style will change into his own niche or they'll gradually adapt into a typical wuxia.

LV 14

Tantastolk

A really awesome novel, I can’t stop myself from getting addicted, I only wish the author makes a stable release of chapters😭. I hardly make a review but I got to say this got me hooked. Trust me when I say I get bored easily when reading novels because it’s easy to predict it’s end, but this my “friends” is a masterpiece.👍🏼

LV 6

Darkend

Dear author from now on please try to add whose p.o.v you are describing because it is really confusing me on following the story. I like this novel very much but recently you are introducing new characters abruptly thus I am getting confused without p.o.v changes and the changes in plot thus try to add whose p.o.v you are going to use. This is a one of the best novels i'v read so pls keep up the good work.

LV 5

Randomguy791

Could have been better. premise is great and shows potential. However, the story is very messy. The power system of qi cultivation, magic, and other stuff is very confusing and is hard to follow.

LV 4

PurpleLeaf

I will be double releasing starting on monday morning , thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy!!!!!!! But it will only last for three days!

LV 2

SilencedSNow

This story is exceptional it creates a realistic character and development and although the MC is very overbearing and arrogant he has his ups and downs.

LV 2

Huy_Jaime

Easy to read, very intense, action-packed, great humor, its well-seasoned and finally one of a kind. has good potential , with mc background i assume he will travel through many different planets.

LV 1

soulla

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LV 4

himlal9653

PLEASE GET SOMEONE TO HELP YOU WITH ENGLISH! Story has great potential (concept wise) but problematic to read and understand. Just try to maintain functional English and please correct the previous chapters.

LV 4

Mello_Lockheart

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LV 12

Kerail

Easy read like somone here wrote already. MC is Nodus if you have looked Japanese animes then yes exactly like that op Nodus. Now here the Nodus lands in magic/cultivation planet with his op strenght and technology. Its easy fun read and I plan to follow this one.

LV 14

Monarchblood

I just love novels with op mc at the start It's a different from where mcs' start from scratch or weak level Pls don't drop this novel It's so frustrating when novels get dropped during it's peak😡😢😭

LV 13

RoiRed

Very good, I look forward to the continuation. character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 14