Demon Slayer: One With Ice (Remake)

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TheKindlyGentleman

There are few things I hate more than fanfiction writers disrespecting the source material. If you are going to borrow another person's work as the setting for your story, and the story is not an AU, respect the setting and do your due diligence. If you are going to borrow a character someone else has created, do your due diligence. The setting, the characters, the timeline, the way the world operates and the rules that govern it, all of these things should be accurate representations of the original work. It doesn't take much research to ensure you are doing right by the source material as well as by its fans. This story is not an AU so it can't use "creative liberties" as an excuse. It has gotten a number of things wrong, from the abilities and capabilities of Demon Slayers, to those of the demons. What's more the MC isn't fleshed out as a character, he's got no personality at all. Lastly the author seems committed to checkmark every single fanfiction stereotype off of the proverbial list. The death of the parents to demons, the "completely unexpected" death of his caretaker and fellow orphans to a demon, followed by the revenge arch ... really? Also the system is not at all fleshed out. The author should try to be more original with their writing, not conform to every possible stereotype, and research the original work a little before and as they are writing. The only saving grace of this story is that at least this author has proper grammar, or knows how to use a spellchecker.

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EternalKings

Author here with a shameless review, thanks for reading my novel[img=faceslap][img=coins][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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Atom_Guy

Looking forward to different ice forms to be unlocked. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Reincarnation_God

a very good demon slay fanfic its hard to find these so thank you very much I look foward to reading future chapters and ill definitely reccomd this if I find someone looking for a good demon slayer fanfic

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Daoist_Asura75

looking forward for more chapters and cool ice techniques.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 4

ChildishSin

It's a standard edgy MC fanfic put into a world he thinks is just an animation and not a world he's living in. You know the usual. Average for the most part nothing really noteworthy

LV 4

Sorria

The history is... average, predictable even, the characterization of cannon Characters is, well I wouldn't say outright horrible but I'd say that the author does not seem to know the difference in how a Teenager from 2010 and an old man from JAPAN in the 1900s would speak.

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Dragon_forever

More chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Nine11P2

Okay an Author always wants a review (Honest one)so here it is First thing 1:-Writing quality-- there are some flaws that can be fixed if u can use grammarly (no sponsor) or you could just ignore this is no professionalism. 2:- story has been great so far this is about 20th ch so future readers don't mind me it only is above starting let's see.Also make this one AS realistic as possible (plz no harem) only a shonen enjoyer can understand that. 3:- character design has no flaws for me idk about the others and if u can don't make him foolish make him smart atleast.Cuz sometimes his words are just plain.(advice only) 4:- and here we are at the worst one I respect the author but just tell us a stable timetable you will post a ch and how long if u can make it 4ch per week and 2000-3000words or 1000-2000 one ch per week i am no writer if you get writer block then i am sry 😔 this can clear some questions 5:- working background i didn't understand this one so correct me if i am wrong but your writing manner is not gud take the exams of (HP- A magical journey) that world be best but as I say (this is no patryon or professionali only author choice ). That's it if u can read this thing I just wrote it in 4 min without much thinking so don't accuse me if you disagree. goodbye 👋

LV 15

CasualReaderOnly

Nice story. Nice Job. Hope for more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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badbyotch

It's great! Good update time, story development, character design, world background, all that stuff. However, a problem I feel lies with many popular writers on the platform; the writing level is far lower and less advanced, giving the impression that the work was rushed out. I get it, it's difficult to regard writing quality in a place of high priority when you are focusing on the characters and the time of updates, however, it is something professional writers will notice when they read through pieces like this.

LV 10

adeadlegend

Начальные главы в кой-то мере плохи, но это начало, а я не какое-то быдло, чтобы не понимать подобного. Поэтому просто советую автору это редактировать(Изменить некоторые моменты, раскрыть более персонажа и имена с большой буквы писать). А так, хорошо пока что. [Сhapter 14]

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_DEKIM_

Meh😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

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JT_Books

Muito bom queria continuação, não sei o que aconteceu com autor que decidiu parar de escrever, é a vida. 😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞

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Isaac_Chuks_0370

best demon slayer fanfic I have read, author-san should really continue pleaseeee

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Savitar_12

hope you continue ........................

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The_Dao

get back here now please come back I want more

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JusABaaka

I was re-reading this and i realised i haven't give it ratings, im sorry! This is my favourite demon slayer fan-fic! fast paced but makes sense!

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Lyagushka0

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Duncan_Bartlett

a great book, superb plot, great characters and many more great things, sadly, it has gone off grid for a month so it cannot attain legendary tears of 5 star[img=coins]