Reviews of Delusion: The Outlander by Ayato_Suzuki - Webnovel

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Kulas_Pelimco

Gotta say it's Soo sweet and amazing to read but I gotta say my opinion on . I'm kinda against the part when you make other character relationship other then the mc but it's your fanfic. (chapter 1 to chap 27 )(I saw the comments)(but I'll continue and give it the benefit of my doubt)but all in all the interaction of relationship of the mc are soo good and kinda makes you jealous. I'm sad that female venti is a no and lumine too.

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KazukiNightwalker

. . . πŸ˜† .,πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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King4422

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Itto_Shura_0557

Soy el exp de mi RevisiΓ³n de las Sagradas Escrituras. Webnovel es mi cuerpo, exp es mi sangre. Desconocido para dormir, ni conocido por la realidad Soy el exp de mi RevisiΓ³n de las Sagradas Escrituras πŸ­πŸ­πŸ­πŸ­πŸπŸπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ˜ΊοΈπŸ€“πŸ€“

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LordFangYuan

I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review

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LordFangYuan4

I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review

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LordFangYuan5

I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review

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SalsitaHabanera2k

a pretty good fanfic, either the interaction of the characters or the harem, I'm enjoying it as you have no idea, keep it up author 😁😁 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Kamijou_kaito

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King4422

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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LyxDominates

currently latest chapter is 32 the story so far is nice it has a slice of life feel to it that I quite like also the author focuses with the interaction between the characters which is also nice. I hope the Author continues the story cause I really like it

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Lucifer515

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WrongNote_255

Interesting concept. Good writing. It is just at the pace that I want. Really good waifu. I really hope that the author won't drop this. Ganbare.

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Ayato_Suzuki

A shameful 5 star review. Hi everyone. I wasn't really expecting people to like this fan-fic of mine. I really hope all of you will continue to support me!

3yr
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Kulas_Pelimco

Gotta say it's Soo sweet and amazing to read but I gotta say my opinion on . I'm kinda against the part when you make other character relationship other then the mc but it's your fanfic. (chapter 1 to chap 27 )(I saw the comments)(but I'll continue and give it the benefit of my doubt)but all in all the interaction of relationship of the mc are soo good and kinda makes you jealous. I'm sad that female venti is a no and lumine too.

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KazukiNightwalker

. . . πŸ˜† .,πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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King4422

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Itto_Shura_0557

Soy el exp de mi RevisiΓ³n de las Sagradas Escrituras. Webnovel es mi cuerpo, exp es mi sangre. Desconocido para dormir, ni conocido por la realidad Soy el exp de mi RevisiΓ³n de las Sagradas Escrituras πŸ­πŸ­πŸ­πŸ­πŸπŸπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ˜ΊοΈπŸ€“πŸ€“

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LordFangYuan

I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review

3yr
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LordFangYuan4

I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review

3yr
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LordFangYuan5

I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review

3yr
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SalsitaHabanera2k

a pretty good fanfic, either the interaction of the characters or the harem, I'm enjoying it as you have no idea, keep it up author 😁😁 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Kamijou_kaito

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King4422

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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LyxDominates

currently latest chapter is 32 the story so far is nice it has a slice of life feel to it that I quite like also the author focuses with the interaction between the characters which is also nice. I hope the Author continues the story cause I really like it

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Lucifer515

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WrongNote_255

Interesting concept. Good writing. It is just at the pace that I want. Really good waifu. I really hope that the author won't drop this. Ganbare.

3yr
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Ayato_Suzuki

A shameful 5 star review. Hi everyone. I wasn't really expecting people to like this fan-fic of mine. I really hope all of you will continue to support me!

3yr
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