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They said that God created the world to serve a purpose.
To make life and experience it with others.
To become beautiful and share it with others.
And to create horrors that scared others.
This vital purpose serves humankind like a cycle that is not permanent in the world of change until someone defies it—created by the horrors to eat the beauty while mimicking the experience of others.
Experience and Beauty did something better they created something no one can replicate. This is what they called ‘Life.’
With this vital element present in the space of time and realms of God. It exploded and created a world full of life. A world that is full of living being experiencing the beauty and horrors created by God and serving their purpose unknowingly.
Until another element appeared, not knowing who and what It does.
But they only knew that they defied their purpose and created Chaos.
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your writing is good and you have a with the words, it is just I will give you the advice I give most new authors that is try to divide the paragraphs in small paragraph if they can be, because it increases the readability experience.
Book is very nice! I am in love with the writing, the way you describe the world setting is interesting . I will say that you should try and break up some of the long paragraphs. Other than that it is a solid story :)
Interesting Premise. The writing quality is good, the story dev is decent and the character design is good as well. Recommended. [img=recommend]
A brilliant novel with great writing quality. This might be a personal preference but i feel like the paragraphs could be a little short but other that, nothing i could complain about.
Keep uploading more chapters. The concepts and ideas you introduced in your story are really meaningful. I hope this novel of yours will get more attention from the readers. Keep working on it, Author.
The starting words were quite impactful! those lines appear to be a philosophical exploration of the purpose and essence of life, creation, and chaos. It seems to suggest that the divine purpose of life is to experience and share beauty, but also to confront and endure the horrors that arise. Although I only read few starting chapters, I can say this is good! Readers will enjoy it!
I only read 3 chapters but I would like to say that this is a powerful novel. The author unfolds the narrative in a way that lingers in your mind long after you've finished reading. A must-read for those who enjoy literary fiction with depth. Keep up the good work!
The story is engaging and also makes readers wonder what will happen next. I thought the story was a little past faced from chapter 3-5 but it was just right since the main character needs to grow. Also, I've been wondering from the start but how young exactly is the main character from the beginning and after the time lapse. Since it was described that Avianna's hair turned white from gold, I thought the timelapse was really long. Thus, I think it will really help if the author adds a few more descriptions that can help us identify the main character's age like how tall is he when compared to others, or how big his hand was when compared to the books his reading something like that. Overall the story has a new concept that was told in a creative and well written matter. Nice job, looking forward to the continuation of your novel.[img=recommend]