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an anime comic and game fun dies because of truck-kun and a god wants entertainment so follow him and his Adventures to become the strongest and to get all the girls
I got this idea from a story called DC: PROTOTYPE
I don't own DC Marvel or any other anime the credit goes to their respective authors
DC: PROTOTYPE /so check out the story and props to the author thanks for the idea
and if you have a better name for the fic please suggest one
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I haven't read your story but just theBlacklight virus being used in a story is something I've been waiting for, for a while. I'll wright real reviews in the comments So please just keep writing.
Decent idea, horrible delivery, writing style needs work. Constant jumping from scene to scene with little description or detail to inform the reader on the what/ when/how of the situation. Constant 4th wall breaks are irritating to say the least. The needs a rewrite and an editor. Do not recommend reading as is.
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I know you tried but cultivation Chinese sht is pure cancer for me . The words, the sentences, the way of thinking that " cultivation is the way of being the most OP" . It just makes me want to puke... It started with a good idea but then it started with those disgusting words and I wasn't able to continue for the sake of my mental health,