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A man gets reborn in Young Justice with 3 wishes, see how he soars through the multiverse while having fun and growing more powerful.
The story will follow the show at first so the changes will be minimal and later everything will be different. the Mc is op from the beginning and there will be some Multiversal travel but i'm thinking about letting it be Dc only.
the Mc is a chill laid back guy but very smart and careful. He only wants to have fun and be powerful enough so no one will cause him problems. He only wish for happy and peaceful life.
He is not a Hero nor a Villain so he won't be going around saving everyone but he's not heartless or cold blooded killer either. This is a light hearted story where the Mc enjoy his life doing what he wants, there are some #sliceoflife, #romance, don't know about the #Harem but most probably. There will be fights, action, techs and magic, it won't be slow but not fast either.
i obviously don't own anything beside the Mc.
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Chapters will be 1-2 times a week it depends how long the chapter and quality is, which I'm trying to focus on but I'm new so be patient with me.
I'm trying to write at least 2.5k a chapter but i want more so don't be suprised if you have a 5k words in one chapter. It's up to my creativity.
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You have started out pretty good to be honest, But the narrative is all over the place makes me feel like mc is a chaotic neutral being. But the rest is pretty much fine can't wait for more updates
The story is good, but the forced plots that the author does are starting to irritate me a little, which disappoints me, so I will give a slightly low rating this time, but will not remove the 5 star from another review
What the f, man. Why this book has so many bad reviews. It's not the best there is, writing needs huge improvements - Character & story can be developed a bit more perfectly - BUT Still it's good. I don't even know how people in this platform thinks🤷♀️🤷♀️
The grammar is pretty dreadful along with having nonsensical plot points which makes it a pretty ruff read.
A good story where MC explores the world and doesn't turn into a superhero or idiotic edge lord. In fact, it's almost unique in the sense that dude simply says that he has more important things to do and just making a profit while having fun along the way.
really like! completely different from others and gives variety! Usually everyone is a hero/vigilante/villain, but this one is just neutral! Also strong and smart! This is how an MC should be! The wishes are chosen very cleverly and without “inexplicable” protection, which should not be there! the pedigree of Doomsday and the Martian is simply Imba and why has no one written about it? traveling through the worlds is just the icing on the cake!
I liked the story and mc as well as his choice of wishes, the grammar is not super good but not super bad either, overall I liked everything but not the romance, it feels kind of forced and I don't think romance is appropriate for this story
don't know why few idiots have given it low rating and all that for just some stupid reason well if I were to rate it I will give 4.2-4.6 rating
was really good till the end. Nothing mattered in the end he just left EVERYONE and went to a new universe like its nothing. AGAIN i say it all the time op characters have to have meaningful relationships to keep them apart of the world. u did good for awhile with the team and roquette but once u started traveling to other worlds it all started to unravel. and now u have to start over in a new universe. Cause no more ideas. Slice of life is what is needed. But im not really seeing hw a different world will fix this fanfic.
pretty good I have read this a few times and other than how short this is it is one of the good fanfics on this platform. Keep it up author
Everything about this fan-fiction is superb but updating of this fan-fiction is too slow . So please look into this matter kindly .
This novel is good ,I don't know why others are rating low also hope u don't stop writing ..
Grammar falls apart when the MC tries to hate on heroing, the justice league, or when trying to throw shade at anyone. has a very distorted perspective of them (JL) as a whole, not comic accurate but from fanfics with authors who hate their own lives. Hes OP but plays at being some random clone under the nose of the JL. not my thing. not in this manner. ill try and keep reading and change this review if it gets better.
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Sorry but this novel has too low of a rating for this level of writing. It's not that bad to be a 3 star. Seriously. I've read worse. Maybe not 5 star, but definitely not 3. Yes at the early chapters the writing seems a little bit confusing, but the later chapters were smooth to read. Was a little put off that MC actually was getting too close with the kids, but he did later say that it won't let him impede what he's going to do in the future. Also those saying he's being too biased and hating the League too much is the one being weird. MC doesn't really hate the League members too much; he even says that he looked up to them when he was a kid, but now that he's actually living in that world, you can kinda see where it gets a little bit hypocritical and understand MC's views. Was also getting kinda nervous when he was getting close to the doctor, but thankfully he didn't fully commit and the relationship is still okay. So again, for those who are turned off by the review and rating, give this novel a chance, since it's not that as bad as people are claiming. Those people are exaggerating.