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Yeah......I'm sorry...this downright the worst novel you've written so far....if this was seen by the creator I can assure you.....these would have copyright problems......also I don't even know why this is in my recommended.........and I've just check your other novels.......apparently you haven't had a single novel that has reached 50 chapters............not just that....you have some books rotting in back saying "THIS BOOK WILL NOT BE DROPPED"........even though its last updated status was 5 MONTHS ago......like bruh.....if you ain't doin it drop it don't add to the library of webnovel.......not just that.....if your gonna write something at least show you have interest in what your writing.........I mean yourHOTD fanfic well.....was kinda bad but the R-18 scenes made it good other than that....no concept no background changes nothing.....it's like the draft of a Doujinshi? Like come on bruh.....at least hit a damn. Milestone(100chapters)............
I don't have any problem if the story follows the original if there is interesting sex scenes ... it's like reading the uncensored version of the original
Really...I read all the chapters with the expectation that some things would change but even now all I can see the novel is downright following each and every segment of the actual work with just a little bit change like addition of one more god in the fray but I don't get the point cuz even if you add cool effects but the ending is still the same which is following the original script... Fan fiction is basically written with established characters and settings of an original creator as a basis for their writing not downright copying it and on the way just add few events which is of least importance with how the story progresses.... I utterly disappointed with the development π
bro what is the point? You just copy the anime here.... If you want the write a story plz don't just copy the main plot ligne by ligne is so nul... ........................ ........................... .................. .................. .................
This story is very well written so far, i look forward to reading more of this in the future. I don't really have any complaints about it so far, and length wise the chapter's are fine as well. As for adding Hades? I think in the long run it should be a good addition to the story, although i do hope that bell does not turn evil, i don't typically like stories where the mc is bad but that is just me.
Yeah......I'm sorry...this downright the worst novel you've written so far....if this was seen by the creator I can assure you.....these would have copyright problems......also I don't even know why this is in my recommended.........and I've just check your other novels.......apparently you haven't had a single novel that has reached 50 chapters............not just that....you have some books rotting in back saying "THIS BOOK WILL NOT BE DROPPED"........even though its last updated status was 5 MONTHS ago......like bruh.....if you ain't doin it drop it don't add to the library of webnovel.......not just that.....if your gonna write something at least show you have interest in what your writing.........I mean yourHOTD fanfic well.....was kinda bad but the R-18 scenes made it good other than that....no concept no background changes nothing.....it's like the draft of a Doujinshi? Like come on bruh.....at least hit a damn. Milestone(100chapters)............
I don't have any problem if the story follows the original if there is interesting sex scenes ... it's like reading the uncensored version of the original
Really...I read all the chapters with the expectation that some things would change but even now all I can see the novel is downright following each and every segment of the actual work with just a little bit change like addition of one more god in the fray but I don't get the point cuz even if you add cool effects but the ending is still the same which is following the original script... Fan fiction is basically written with established characters and settings of an original creator as a basis for their writing not downright copying it and on the way just add few events which is of least importance with how the story progresses.... I utterly disappointed with the development π
bro what is the point? You just copy the anime here.... If you want the write a story plz don't just copy the main plot ligne by ligne is so nul... ........................ ........................... .................. .................. .................
This story is very well written so far, i look forward to reading more of this in the future. I don't really have any complaints about it so far, and length wise the chapter's are fine as well. As for adding Hades? I think in the long run it should be a good addition to the story, although i do hope that bell does not turn evil, i don't typically like stories where the mc is bad but that is just me.