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Not technically a review but does anyone have the pirated link going past chapter 47 of this fic? I would be very happy if someone were to send the link thank you very much🙏
good story. I hope for more chapters. End of complete review with points to meet the number of characters...................................
The translation is simply amazing it feels like a totally different one from the original I feel so happy to know that a story like this exist but how long does the original author take to publicise the rest of the chapters it it weekly and are you just gonna buy the rest of the chapters or wait for it to get publicized
More. I need mooore. Shirou is one of my Favorite characters and i love any story about him. This is going in a very good deriction man. Moooore
a very good story, of the ones I have read it is one of the danmanchi fanfics that I liked the most, I hope it doesn't decline..................................................................................................................
Good Translation. I already read the raw up to chapter 44, I couldn't stand it, but it won't let me read the rest because they are paid :/ we have to wait for you to upload
It's okay I guess? Not bad, not great, just average. There are still some spelling and grammar errors but I can forgive that since it's a translation. One thing I'm not really liking is the Shirou here, specifically Miyuverse. He doesn't feel like him. Maybe I'm a bit biased since I've seen better characterization on another fanfic. I'm not exactly saying he's completely bad but UBW Shirou would've been a better pick
This is a translation fic of Chinese. But don't hate it, it really good and belong to a sour novel know as Ciweimao. Which is famous for it good story, even with MC that have system they are almost all "weak to strong " or " mid to strong ". One that OP from the start is more a Comedy Fic. This fic is alredy over 100c raw and still continue
Love the story. Fate is one of my favorite series and to me danmachi has a lot of unexplored potential. Keep up the good work[img=update][img=update]
the translation is readable and the story is pretty enjoyable. i just hope translator can increases the chapter's update or just keep the updates consistentcy
A CN translation fic where the translator actually puts in the effort to make it readable... color me surprised, 5 Stars just for that alone
More more more more more More more more more more More more more more more More more more more more More more more more more PLEASEEEEEE!!!!!!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Espero continúes con este trabajo autor-san 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Not technically a review but does anyone have the pirated link going past chapter 47 of this fic? I would be very happy if someone were to send the link thank you very much🙏
good story. I hope for more chapters. End of complete review with points to meet the number of characters...................................
The translation is simply amazing it feels like a totally different one from the original I feel so happy to know that a story like this exist but how long does the original author take to publicise the rest of the chapters it it weekly and are you just gonna buy the rest of the chapters or wait for it to get publicized
More. I need mooore. Shirou is one of my Favorite characters and i love any story about him. This is going in a very good deriction man. Moooore
a very good story, of the ones I have read it is one of the danmanchi fanfics that I liked the most, I hope it doesn't decline..................................................................................................................
Good Translation. I already read the raw up to chapter 44, I couldn't stand it, but it won't let me read the rest because they are paid :/ we have to wait for you to upload
It's okay I guess? Not bad, not great, just average. There are still some spelling and grammar errors but I can forgive that since it's a translation. One thing I'm not really liking is the Shirou here, specifically Miyuverse. He doesn't feel like him. Maybe I'm a bit biased since I've seen better characterization on another fanfic. I'm not exactly saying he's completely bad but UBW Shirou would've been a better pick
This is a translation fic of Chinese. But don't hate it, it really good and belong to a sour novel know as Ciweimao. Which is famous for it good story, even with MC that have system they are almost all "weak to strong " or " mid to strong ". One that OP from the start is more a Comedy Fic. This fic is alredy over 100c raw and still continue
Love the story. Fate is one of my favorite series and to me danmachi has a lot of unexplored potential. Keep up the good work[img=update][img=update]
the translation is readable and the story is pretty enjoyable. i just hope translator can increases the chapter's update or just keep the updates consistentcy
A CN translation fic where the translator actually puts in the effort to make it readable... color me surprised, 5 Stars just for that alone
More more more more more More more more more more More more more more more More more more more more More more more more more PLEASEEEEEE!!!!!!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Espero continúes con este trabajo autor-san 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Great story, I've been focusing on danmachi stories recently but it was hard to find any interesting ones. Your translation is also wonderful, I don't know anything about Fate, but your notes already help a lot. Great work