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Samantha_Byrnes

I love this book ๐Ÿ“– and can not wait for more chapters to be released.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Tammy_Cooksey

I'm just at the beginning, so far this kid is incredibly nervy and precocious. He possibly needs a keeper ti straighten him out.The leading lady is seriously in need if a backbone. I'm liking it sofar and can't wait to read more. like I said I'm at the beginning so I'm really excited to see what happens next.

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Samantha_Byrnes

This is a very addicting book. I can not wait for more chapters to read. I am hooked on the story line. The attraction between them will blossom beautifully.

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Kkyang0333

I hope this book gets pick. LovinG it, and funny too. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Bunnicula97

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Samantha_Byrnes

I find that this book has some hidden secrets that I can not wait to figure out. what is the little boy plotting to have happen. I would recommend this book.

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Muse_
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Short Title:DDOMHA Alternate Title:่Œๅฎๅฟซ้€’่ฏท็ญพๆ”ถ Status: Completed ( 5892 ) Author:Dark Cloud No Rain Genre:Drama,ย Romance,ย Urban Life This book is good , just too long for me . The ml and fl are both good . Here is a copy pasted spoiler - Mc meet first male lead An ZhengRong who was on the same plane of mc in few chapters. While mc was drunk and was drug or scheming by her two faced half sister. She did it with first male lead and left. She though it was because of drunk, she sleep with him and vow to not drunk again. Poor male lead wake up and found she left. He was angry about her run away by not responsible him. He search her identity and find her in his academy. He falls for mc when he was with mc. Family Spoiler Mc is indifferent, independent and overprotective of her family especially half sister and grandpa. She and her father relationship is like strange. She hate him for remarry and abandoned her. But later she realize how scheming and two faced bitch her half sister was. She was hurt by it. Why mc was overprotective to her was when mc was little, she falls and drown in lake, half sister save her despite she make trouble for half sister for getting father love. They become closer, mc vow to protected half sister when half sister was sick when saving her. She never though half sister did scheming and calculated her. She feel how naive she was for not believed male leads warning . Later she was kicked out, become a homeless, got beaten up badly, rape and abuse by her lover who trying to killed mc for her. Its look like he only help her because he wanted sleep her. He got tired of her, throw her, She was killed, her corpse was throw out. mc is like independent and free who don't wanted marry or have responsibility. She is killer and also daughter of wealthy noble. She become CEO president. Itโ€™s my fav novel plus itโ€™s polyandry modern novel that are hardly to find. Male leads identity and they were virgins. CEO president- mc's fiance, possessived and overbearing. He is in love with mc. Mc trying possible to annulled engagement. Wealthy young master- known as play boy but is virgin. He is mc first time. He chase or pursue mc and want mc to responsible. Leader of underworld/ Gangs/mafia- mc meet him when he was wounded. Mc and him are both killer. He is mc first boyfriend whom mc dating and first time fall for him but broke up with him because of misunderstanding that cause by her adopted brother. Adopted Brother- He love mc and get jealous lots. He hid his love for mc. He get rid guys or male leads who pursue mc. He trying to make mc not to falls for male leads except him. He is pitiful one and sometimes hateful. Doctor/ mc's childhood friend- he love mc when they were young and trying to hid his feeling and afraid mc will reject him. Wealthy Business/ best friend of wealthy young master- he is shy and innocent. His best friend trying to make him join with him to win mc. Twins- cold and iceberg foreign noble Male lead- mc meet him when she went aboard . I love their interact and how mc boldly kiss him and tease him. Tsundere and Cute/Shy male lead- Mc mistake him as cold iceberg noble male lead that she previously meet him in foreign, she kiss him. She didn't know they were twins brother. She think that he had amnesia because of his personality is complete different from cold icebergs noble male lead. He get jealous and is tsundere because he thought mc think him as his twin brother.

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konekochan

I'm honestly kinda disappointed... Thought this would be a kinda cute story but couldn't really get past the kid drugging his parents in the first few chapters. Like what the ****? This is a kid that's barely in primary school. Even if they're a genius, I can't comprehend how or why he did it, and in the few chapters I've read, the kid has threatened his so-called mother quite a few times, and I know 10 odd chapters isn't enough to judge a novel but if it's an indication of how the novel is going to progress, then I would rather not read it. If the novel gets approved, maybe I will go back and try this novel again...

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sheilac2021

๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜โค๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜

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DaoistZS7JeR

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KekeSenpai

Dear Oh Mighty Editors at Webnovel PLEASE PICK UP THIS BOOK๐Ÿ˜ญ The synopsis does not do this book justice. This story is HILIARIOUS! With the exception of a few scenes so far I love it! The FL is navie but she is not like others. She can hold her own for the most part and all of her ML intervention is after the fact. She shrugs it off and keep moving. The son is so adorable and scheming. Please I need more๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ

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Daoistbg7gol

Love,love this story line so far!! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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Mojee123

Love It !!!!!!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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Dezzy_Ratliff

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ekho
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This is an unexpected read. Loved it and now I want more. Looking forward to this book. Pretty common story line but an intersting read. Adorable kid, sarcastic and doting ML, a quick witted FL, everthing just so great. Bring it on!!!!๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿพ

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Kim_Park_Jimin

Soo amazing please pick this Novel please please let It be picked ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ

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Iris_21

I need more of this. I need my white lotus kid. I hope they pick this up next. I really want to know what happen next. And, how will the relationship of ML and MC unfold? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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runman7012

I must admit, I at first wasnโ€™t interested, not sure why. Now Iโ€™m glad I read it. Itโ€™s pretty good. So far there is no scheming stepmother or step/half-sister, and no father becomes a stepfather scenario. There is a scheming little bun trying to get his parents together to prevent his father from marrying a white lotus, which makes this a fun read.

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Rusticwendy

Great story loved it good chemistry god good stuff ff lived oy good amazing. Loved it good loved it good loved it tttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttahgshdhdjdididhssbhdhddjdbejidhdvee

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Vicki_Manges

I like the story line! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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blossomflower

๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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DaoistlOYHik

There were a few typos but overall a really good storyline. Definitely not what I expected it to be, was actually better than I thought it was going to be.

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AnimalLover95

Please continue this book. I'm hooked and can't wait for what's next. It should be illegal to have cliff hangers like this. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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tune_brittany

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! I really hope that this story will continue in the future. I love the twists, the comedy, and the adorable characters. Please continue this story.

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brandy_belanger

๐Ÿ˜Š this book is very interesting to read! and really makes you want to read more to see what is going to happen next. it also makes you wonder how it will end!

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QueenMinako

Omg in loVe with this book [img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp] ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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Turpz
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You will be amazed with the kid! Like a super boy! Doing all those extreme manipulations including deugging both the FL and ML. He just really wanted to have a Mommy and a complete family. The romance part is cute having the ML doting on the FL. Who would not feel protected when you have 2 men, the Dad and the son, who both ooze with power.

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Marena
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WOW! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] great story and funny.

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Takevia_Johnson

Great!! ๐Ÿฅฐ[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Samantha_Byrnes

I love this book ๐Ÿ“– and can not wait for more chapters to be released.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Tammy_Cooksey

I'm just at the beginning, so far this kid is incredibly nervy and precocious. He possibly needs a keeper ti straighten him out.The leading lady is seriously in need if a backbone. I'm liking it sofar and can't wait to read more. like I said I'm at the beginning so I'm really excited to see what happens next.

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Samantha_Byrnes

This is a very addicting book. I can not wait for more chapters to read. I am hooked on the story line. The attraction between them will blossom beautifully.

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Kkyang0333

I hope this book gets pick. LovinG it, and funny too. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Bunnicula97

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Samantha_Byrnes

I find that this book has some hidden secrets that I can not wait to figure out. what is the little boy plotting to have happen. I would recommend this book.

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Muse_
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Short Title:DDOMHA Alternate Title:่Œๅฎๅฟซ้€’่ฏท็ญพๆ”ถ Status: Completed ( 5892 ) Author:Dark Cloud No Rain Genre:Drama,ย Romance,ย Urban Life This book is good , just too long for me . The ml and fl are both good . Here is a copy pasted spoiler - Mc meet first male lead An ZhengRong who was on the same plane of mc in few chapters. While mc was drunk and was drug or scheming by her two faced half sister. She did it with first male lead and left. She though it was because of drunk, she sleep with him and vow to not drunk again. Poor male lead wake up and found she left. He was angry about her run away by not responsible him. He search her identity and find her in his academy. He falls for mc when he was with mc. Family Spoiler Mc is indifferent, independent and overprotective of her family especially half sister and grandpa. She and her father relationship is like strange. She hate him for remarry and abandoned her. But later she realize how scheming and two faced bitch her half sister was. She was hurt by it. Why mc was overprotective to her was when mc was little, she falls and drown in lake, half sister save her despite she make trouble for half sister for getting father love. They become closer, mc vow to protected half sister when half sister was sick when saving her. She never though half sister did scheming and calculated her. She feel how naive she was for not believed male leads warning . Later she was kicked out, become a homeless, got beaten up badly, rape and abuse by her lover who trying to killed mc for her. Its look like he only help her because he wanted sleep her. He got tired of her, throw her, She was killed, her corpse was throw out. mc is like independent and free who don't wanted marry or have responsibility. She is killer and also daughter of wealthy noble. She become CEO president. Itโ€™s my fav novel plus itโ€™s polyandry modern novel that are hardly to find. Male leads identity and they were virgins. CEO president- mc's fiance, possessived and overbearing. He is in love with mc. Mc trying possible to annulled engagement. Wealthy young master- known as play boy but is virgin. He is mc first time. He chase or pursue mc and want mc to responsible. Leader of underworld/ Gangs/mafia- mc meet him when he was wounded. Mc and him are both killer. He is mc first boyfriend whom mc dating and first time fall for him but broke up with him because of misunderstanding that cause by her adopted brother. Adopted Brother- He love mc and get jealous lots. He hid his love for mc. He get rid guys or male leads who pursue mc. He trying to make mc not to falls for male leads except him. He is pitiful one and sometimes hateful. Doctor/ mc's childhood friend- he love mc when they were young and trying to hid his feeling and afraid mc will reject him. Wealthy Business/ best friend of wealthy young master- he is shy and innocent. His best friend trying to make him join with him to win mc. Twins- cold and iceberg foreign noble Male lead- mc meet him when she went aboard . I love their interact and how mc boldly kiss him and tease him. Tsundere and Cute/Shy male lead- Mc mistake him as cold iceberg noble male lead that she previously meet him in foreign, she kiss him. She didn't know they were twins brother. She think that he had amnesia because of his personality is complete different from cold icebergs noble male lead. He get jealous and is tsundere because he thought mc think him as his twin brother.

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konekochan

I'm honestly kinda disappointed... Thought this would be a kinda cute story but couldn't really get past the kid drugging his parents in the first few chapters. Like what the ****? This is a kid that's barely in primary school. Even if they're a genius, I can't comprehend how or why he did it, and in the few chapters I've read, the kid has threatened his so-called mother quite a few times, and I know 10 odd chapters isn't enough to judge a novel but if it's an indication of how the novel is going to progress, then I would rather not read it. If the novel gets approved, maybe I will go back and try this novel again...

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sheilac2021

๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜โค๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜

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DaoistZS7JeR

โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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KekeSenpai

Dear Oh Mighty Editors at Webnovel PLEASE PICK UP THIS BOOK๐Ÿ˜ญ The synopsis does not do this book justice. This story is HILIARIOUS! With the exception of a few scenes so far I love it! The FL is navie but she is not like others. She can hold her own for the most part and all of her ML intervention is after the fact. She shrugs it off and keep moving. The son is so adorable and scheming. Please I need more๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ

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Daoistbg7gol

Love,love this story line so far!! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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Mojee123

Love It !!!!!!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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Dezzy_Ratliff

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ekho
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This is an unexpected read. Loved it and now I want more. Looking forward to this book. Pretty common story line but an intersting read. Adorable kid, sarcastic and doting ML, a quick witted FL, everthing just so great. Bring it on!!!!๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿพ

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Kim_Park_Jimin

Soo amazing please pick this Novel please please let It be picked ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ

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Iris_21

I need more of this. I need my white lotus kid. I hope they pick this up next. I really want to know what happen next. And, how will the relationship of ML and MC unfold? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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runman7012

I must admit, I at first wasnโ€™t interested, not sure why. Now Iโ€™m glad I read it. Itโ€™s pretty good. So far there is no scheming stepmother or step/half-sister, and no father becomes a stepfather scenario. There is a scheming little bun trying to get his parents together to prevent his father from marrying a white lotus, which makes this a fun read.

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Rusticwendy

Great story loved it good chemistry god good stuff ff lived oy good amazing. Loved it good loved it good loved it tttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttahgshdhdjdididhssbhdhddjdbejidhdvee

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jlee_art

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Vicki_Manges

I like the story line! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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blossomflower

๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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DaoistlOYHik

There were a few typos but overall a really good storyline. Definitely not what I expected it to be, was actually better than I thought it was going to be.

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AnimalLover95

Please continue this book. I'm hooked and can't wait for what's next. It should be illegal to have cliff hangers like this. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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tune_brittany

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! I really hope that this story will continue in the future. I love the twists, the comedy, and the adorable characters. Please continue this story.

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brandy_belanger

๐Ÿ˜Š this book is very interesting to read! and really makes you want to read more to see what is going to happen next. it also makes you wonder how it will end!

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QueenMinako

Omg in loVe with this book [img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp] ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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Turpz
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You will be amazed with the kid! Like a super boy! Doing all those extreme manipulations including deugging both the FL and ML. He just really wanted to have a Mommy and a complete family. The romance part is cute having the ML doting on the FL. Who would not feel protected when you have 2 men, the Dad and the son, who both ooze with power.

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Marena
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WOW! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] great story and funny.

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Takevia_Johnson

Great!! ๐Ÿฅฐ[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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