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This book is amazing. i love reading this type of book. i hope the author can make it to the end. i love it, really... The character developments in the book are wonderful and well-described. This was what would happen, even if his striving to be a loyal and good person evetually came to an end.😳
Eline emeğine sağlık Orkun'cuğum. Çeviri için teşekkürler, zevkle okudum. Takipteyim.✨ Çeviri bittikten sonraki planın ne bu arada merak ettim.
An absolute hidden gem! The plot is real interesting but it's the backstory and the world development that really pulled me in. The MC also goes through a lot of character development. If I really had to nit-pick and point-out a downside, that would just be the writing quality at the beginning chapters. However, the author took care of it too after a few chapters. Higly recommend this masterpiece and truly hope the author sees this novel to the end.
Her seferinde ayıla bayıla okuyoruz Orkun'cuğum, bu da bizim iflâh olmaz Nirvana enayiliğimiz işte. Eline emeğine sağlık balım. Takipteyim.
Great story....has a lot of potential... the author has the ability to make emotions appear via words...............................Don't stop writing this novel
I think it's a good story. I think everyone wants to give. You won't regret it. Even if there are shortcomings, do not pass without reading [img=coins][img=coins]
If you are familiar with and love the genre, don't miss it. I am sure you will read all the chapters published in one breath. You ignore my giving full marks as I am a writer from the same country :)
Beautiful prose, interesting plot, and a great character list. For all you new readers, do not miss such an engaging story, and don't worry, chapters will keep flowing in!
It's one of the most enjoyable books I've ever read. It's an immersive and intriguing story, and I hope there'll be more. I wish the author all the best.
It's great I mean it is literally awesome. One of the best novel I have read also I have read only few so from my pov it is great. Keep up the great work
The story started out interesting. I think it will become more interesting as it progresses. The descriptions are not long and exaggerated as we are used to in other series. For now, I think it's a promising series worth reading.
The story seems promising and It really has potential. One thing I would suggest is you could use 'he' instead of Asil in all the lines. Otherwise, it's totally fine and I look forward to reading new chapters and storyline...[img=update][img=recommend]
I am also a first-time novelist and I must commend the way the action started in the novel without needless narration. Your writing style is unique. I'm still reading so I can't say much for now. I hope it continues to wow me
I have no words to appreciate your content. How beautifully you join different concepts under one novel! So many things to enjoy and learn. Highly recommended!
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This is your first work, right? If I'm not mistaken. So I humbly leaving an honest review. The story is interesting from the start and the characters are fine. Hmm the only problem is the book cover, and the other few mistakes about grammar.
For writing for the first time, of course, there are some occasions that have grammatical errors and the usage of punctuations are not executed correctly but that is okay. They say; 'practice makes perfect'. Just a little editing would do. As for the plot, as I have read many cultivation novels before, I can say that this one has a potential. Not your usual cultivation novel that we know and I hope that the author can update more chapters! ^_^ Keep up the work! ^_^
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Nicely written story! The plot, just from the beginning, is intriguing! Great work! You set the bar very high, I hope that the rest of your story will be on a similar level.
I must say I was surprised with how the beginning chapters do a great job at world-building! Descriptive fights are always a pain to write, but I enjoyed reading what was described! The way the author describes characters makes them more distinguished since that always helps! Honestly a great read!
This is a very fresh and exciting read. I hope the writer will continue for this book. MC and his father's relationship is very entertaining. Go and read guys! [img=update]
The author's grammar was splendid. The first-person narration was so immersive that made me have a deep dive into the story. This is action packed! Literally every chapter bringing up a creature and our characters fighting them, and I have to say that these sequences are pretty well written. I could see the things happening as I was reading it. The world building in this novel is really good. Dialogues are also well written and also funny in places making it very much entertaining. All in all, A splendid job of a novel. I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
Beautifully written, well-developed and toned, this book is one for breathing in as you chew its plot. Every character brings forth new mystery and summons questions to be asked. I can’t wait to uncover all the nooks and craneys of this novel!
Interesting and engaging novel! Would love to get more and more. Best of luck to you for upcoming chapters. If updating stability and story creation will be keep on elevating, it'll be the one of the best novels in the future..
The story has a really good premise and I like how the world building is done over time. There are a few mistakes, but I don't think anyone wants people to critique their first work too seriously. Good job author and keep up the updates!
This book is genuinelly a good one... i have read many cultivation stories but this one is certainly very different than others... please upload the next chapters soon.. i am done with 7 already!!! will be waiting eagerly😁
This novel has the potential be a known among everyone. As there are only few chapters out there isn't lot I can say about the novel in whole as it will be too early to judge. But with limited chapters, novel does a great job of keeping the reader glued. The backstory of the MC is pretty well written and the relationship between him and his father really shines. There are some mistakes but well, who doesn't make mistakes. But the story is well written and I am looking forward to upcoming chapters :)
In a simple words, it's outstanding novel, you did a great job here ☺️, actually it have all the factors for the grear novel, keep it up, and waiting the next chapters 👌
Really a good book, I really liked the way how the author has described each and every scene and character minutely, it absorbs you in to its world, keep it up author.
You can tell there is a great attempt at trying to build up a deep story in here. There is a lot of focus on lore and the backstory of the characters to make them all seem more real and establish a connection with the reader. The big problem, is that the way the story is being told needs a lot more polishment. There is a lot of repeated words such as "the man opened the door, then he walked through the door, then proceeded to close the door..." over the chapters, when saying things like "the door was opened and he proceeded to walk through it" would have had the same effect. The dialogue also needs some work with everyone talking with too many info dumps to address who they are, where they come from, how they feel, and why they do what they do. It's simply too much information transmitted in a very unnatural way. People will say things like "I know why you think this way, you think this way because this happened and this happened, causing you to do this and that". It's just so weird hearing someone explain to them why they are the way they are. Narration also suffers from that, with any time a new character is introduced we receive more exposition and more info dumps about their backstory before we even get to know them. The story seems fine overall, but the writing quality needs a bit of work. I'm sure more practice and study will help make the author's passion be delivered in the best way possible in the future.
This book is amazing. i love reading this type of book. i hope the author can make it to the end. i love it, really... The character developments in the book are wonderful and well-described. This was what would happen, even if his striving to be a loyal and good person evetually came to an end.😳
Eline emeğine sağlık Orkun'cuğum. Çeviri için teşekkürler, zevkle okudum. Takipteyim.✨ Çeviri bittikten sonraki planın ne bu arada merak ettim.
An absolute hidden gem! The plot is real interesting but it's the backstory and the world development that really pulled me in. The MC also goes through a lot of character development. If I really had to nit-pick and point-out a downside, that would just be the writing quality at the beginning chapters. However, the author took care of it too after a few chapters. Higly recommend this masterpiece and truly hope the author sees this novel to the end.
Her seferinde ayıla bayıla okuyoruz Orkun'cuğum, bu da bizim iflâh olmaz Nirvana enayiliğimiz işte. Eline emeğine sağlık balım. Takipteyim.
Great story....has a lot of potential... the author has the ability to make emotions appear via words...............................Don't stop writing this novel
I think it's a good story. I think everyone wants to give. You won't regret it. Even if there are shortcomings, do not pass without reading [img=coins][img=coins]
If you are familiar with and love the genre, don't miss it. I am sure you will read all the chapters published in one breath. You ignore my giving full marks as I am a writer from the same country :)
Beautiful prose, interesting plot, and a great character list. For all you new readers, do not miss such an engaging story, and don't worry, chapters will keep flowing in!
It's one of the most enjoyable books I've ever read. It's an immersive and intriguing story, and I hope there'll be more. I wish the author all the best.
It's great I mean it is literally awesome. One of the best novel I have read also I have read only few so from my pov it is great. Keep up the great work
The story started out interesting. I think it will become more interesting as it progresses. The descriptions are not long and exaggerated as we are used to in other series. For now, I think it's a promising series worth reading.
The story seems promising and It really has potential. One thing I would suggest is you could use 'he' instead of Asil in all the lines. Otherwise, it's totally fine and I look forward to reading new chapters and storyline...[img=update][img=recommend]
I am also a first-time novelist and I must commend the way the action started in the novel without needless narration. Your writing style is unique. I'm still reading so I can't say much for now. I hope it continues to wow me
I have no words to appreciate your content. How beautifully you join different concepts under one novel! So many things to enjoy and learn. Highly recommended!
Reveal Spoiler This is your first work, right? If I'm not mistaken. So I humbly leaving an honest review. The story is interesting from the start and the characters are fine. Hmm the only problem is the book cover, and the other few mistakes about grammar.
For writing for the first time, of course, there are some occasions that have grammatical errors and the usage of punctuations are not executed correctly but that is okay. They say; 'practice makes perfect'. Just a little editing would do. As for the plot, as I have read many cultivation novels before, I can say that this one has a potential. Not your usual cultivation novel that we know and I hope that the author can update more chapters! ^_^ Keep up the work! ^_^
Reveal Spoiler Nicely written story! The plot, just from the beginning, is intriguing! Great work! You set the bar very high, I hope that the rest of your story will be on a similar level.
I must say I was surprised with how the beginning chapters do a great job at world-building! Descriptive fights are always a pain to write, but I enjoyed reading what was described! The way the author describes characters makes them more distinguished since that always helps! Honestly a great read!
This is a very fresh and exciting read. I hope the writer will continue for this book. MC and his father's relationship is very entertaining. Go and read guys! [img=update]
The author's grammar was splendid. The first-person narration was so immersive that made me have a deep dive into the story. This is action packed! Literally every chapter bringing up a creature and our characters fighting them, and I have to say that these sequences are pretty well written. I could see the things happening as I was reading it. The world building in this novel is really good. Dialogues are also well written and also funny in places making it very much entertaining. All in all, A splendid job of a novel. I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
Beautifully written, well-developed and toned, this book is one for breathing in as you chew its plot. Every character brings forth new mystery and summons questions to be asked. I can’t wait to uncover all the nooks and craneys of this novel!
Interesting and engaging novel! Would love to get more and more. Best of luck to you for upcoming chapters. If updating stability and story creation will be keep on elevating, it'll be the one of the best novels in the future..
The story has a really good premise and I like how the world building is done over time. There are a few mistakes, but I don't think anyone wants people to critique their first work too seriously. Good job author and keep up the updates!
This book is genuinelly a good one... i have read many cultivation stories but this one is certainly very different than others... please upload the next chapters soon.. i am done with 7 already!!! will be waiting eagerly😁
This novel has the potential be a known among everyone. As there are only few chapters out there isn't lot I can say about the novel in whole as it will be too early to judge. But with limited chapters, novel does a great job of keeping the reader glued. The backstory of the MC is pretty well written and the relationship between him and his father really shines. There are some mistakes but well, who doesn't make mistakes. But the story is well written and I am looking forward to upcoming chapters :)
In a simple words, it's outstanding novel, you did a great job here ☺️, actually it have all the factors for the grear novel, keep it up, and waiting the next chapters 👌
Really a good book, I really liked the way how the author has described each and every scene and character minutely, it absorbs you in to its world, keep it up author.
You can tell there is a great attempt at trying to build up a deep story in here. There is a lot of focus on lore and the backstory of the characters to make them all seem more real and establish a connection with the reader. The big problem, is that the way the story is being told needs a lot more polishment. There is a lot of repeated words such as "the man opened the door, then he walked through the door, then proceeded to close the door..." over the chapters, when saying things like "the door was opened and he proceeded to walk through it" would have had the same effect. The dialogue also needs some work with everyone talking with too many info dumps to address who they are, where they come from, how they feel, and why they do what they do. It's simply too much information transmitted in a very unnatural way. People will say things like "I know why you think this way, you think this way because this happened and this happened, causing you to do this and that". It's just so weird hearing someone explain to them why they are the way they are. Narration also suffers from that, with any time a new character is introduced we receive more exposition and more info dumps about their backstory before we even get to know them. The story seems fine overall, but the writing quality needs a bit of work. I'm sure more practice and study will help make the author's passion be delivered in the best way possible in the future.
Why did you stop uploading the story was good />