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Story development is good in this novel. It has alpha which is a charcter i like .It is a good story. But grammer and spelling mistake is the main problem here.You should read minimum one time before publishing the new chapters .You can catch the errors on that time...
My very first alpha werewolf novel, it is interesting as far as I have read. Grammatical errors are present but I like the plot and the build up in starting chapters.
giving this a fifve star because, it's really interesting and intriguing, except for a few mistakes here and there, it got me real hooked, added it to my library.
Okay, so tbh I avoid alpha books at any cost because of its toxicity and I thought I’ll see something new but guess not. Only new thing is that we are reading from alpha’s pov. The writing style could be better. I found many errors in the chapters. You mostly used commas instead of fullstop. And you need to start the sentence with capital letter. You mostly used smaller one. You should re read the chapter and edit it little bit. You can use grammarly app for it if you want. Overall, your story does have potential. All the best author. I tried to be honest as possible.
Great one with slight unclear writing. Good werewolf genre work with fascinating and immersed background and there is no slow pace. Awaiting for further updates.
I like this so far. I wanted to keep reading more and more. I’m very interested in what will happen next. I'll keep reading after going through the books in my library. Keep it up.
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Story development is good in this novel. It has alpha which is a charcter i like .It is a good story. But grammer and spelling mistake is the main problem here.You should read minimum one time before publishing the new chapters .You can catch the errors on that time...
My very first alpha werewolf novel, it is interesting as far as I have read. Grammatical errors are present but I like the plot and the build up in starting chapters.
giving this a fifve star because, it's really interesting and intriguing, except for a few mistakes here and there, it got me real hooked, added it to my library.
Okay, so tbh I avoid alpha books at any cost because of its toxicity and I thought I’ll see something new but guess not. Only new thing is that we are reading from alpha’s pov. The writing style could be better. I found many errors in the chapters. You mostly used commas instead of fullstop. And you need to start the sentence with capital letter. You mostly used smaller one. You should re read the chapter and edit it little bit. You can use grammarly app for it if you want. Overall, your story does have potential. All the best author. I tried to be honest as possible.
Great one with slight unclear writing. Good werewolf genre work with fascinating and immersed background and there is no slow pace. Awaiting for further updates.
I like this so far. I wanted to keep reading more and more. I’m very interested in what will happen next. I'll keep reading after going through the books in my library. Keep it up.