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Not good. The pacing and story start off strong but rapidly slows and drags on chapter by chapter.Also, the grammar and editing are progressively getting worse, somehow.
I'm upgrade my review or downgrade it when I read you story author but you got me with a outer god and the Thanos thing
I understand others reviews and why they don't like this, but i (who don't use much of my brain to read) really liked reading this. Yes, it has many logical problems with story and characters but if you want just read about reactions to the fact that Lovecraft mythos exists in the world (at least they think that), this fanfic is good to read when you have nothing to do
*maybe a spoiler* This could be a nice concept, but the writing/translation quality is pretty annoying, furthermore I feel like I've read the same sentences explaining how cool his powers are and about the projection statue thingy more than 3 times by chapter 7... I still don't know what this projection he keeps talking about even is (maybe some kind of enhancement). all in all I would say that due to the low writing quality it is not enjoyable even though the concept is intriguing
It is interesting and a idea that I would like to see succeed but the writing is not great and the power levels are confusing and have no referenc to scale off of. Also the author writes it so ambiguous and as someone else also wrote it is too Chinese for my liking. Also the MC is trying to hard to pretend to be all mysterious but it is failing hard.
Good potencial but execution is bad. Not to be racist Mostly because its too much chinese. Like, nick fury is introduced as one Eyed dragon with a Black egg head. And he somehow spits blood. Not even going talk about how mc tries to act all misterious like its the template system in marvel. Mc explaining things are Just "licking his own boot" to the extreme. And the researchers and scientists are referred as scholars... Like cmon... There is a difference
the story seems interesting but the writing is so vague that you just want to give up on it it felt like I am reading some encrypted message that I need to decipher now and then, it is so tiring to read, I hope that the author proof read the chapters its so tiring to read.
Great theme though, terrible execution, the writing seems to be in anagram of so confusing............................................................
If I remeber it only has around chapter 120 will you add some of your ideas? Also can you give me the mtl name or link please ?
could someone please translate this, it seems really good but i cant understand it
Not good. The pacing and story start off strong but rapidly slows and drags on chapter by chapter.Also, the grammar and editing are progressively getting worse, somehow.
I'm upgrade my review or downgrade it when I read you story author but you got me with a outer god and the Thanos thing
I understand others reviews and why they don't like this, but i (who don't use much of my brain to read) really liked reading this. Yes, it has many logical problems with story and characters but if you want just read about reactions to the fact that Lovecraft mythos exists in the world (at least they think that), this fanfic is good to read when you have nothing to do
*maybe a spoiler* This could be a nice concept, but the writing/translation quality is pretty annoying, furthermore I feel like I've read the same sentences explaining how cool his powers are and about the projection statue thingy more than 3 times by chapter 7... I still don't know what this projection he keeps talking about even is (maybe some kind of enhancement). all in all I would say that due to the low writing quality it is not enjoyable even though the concept is intriguing
It is interesting and a idea that I would like to see succeed but the writing is not great and the power levels are confusing and have no referenc to scale off of. Also the author writes it so ambiguous and as someone else also wrote it is too Chinese for my liking. Also the MC is trying to hard to pretend to be all mysterious but it is failing hard.
Good potencial but execution is bad. Not to be racist Mostly because its too much chinese. Like, nick fury is introduced as one Eyed dragon with a Black egg head. And he somehow spits blood. Not even going talk about how mc tries to act all misterious like its the template system in marvel. Mc explaining things are Just "licking his own boot" to the extreme. And the researchers and scientists are referred as scholars... Like cmon... There is a difference
the story seems interesting but the writing is so vague that you just want to give up on it it felt like I am reading some encrypted message that I need to decipher now and then, it is so tiring to read, I hope that the author proof read the chapters its so tiring to read.
Great theme though, terrible execution, the writing seems to be in anagram of so confusing............................................................
If I remeber it only has around chapter 120 will you add some of your ideas? Also can you give me the mtl name or link please ?
could someone please translate this, it seems really good but i cant understand it