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[Current World: Naruto ]
this story is about a person who dies in AU of Earth where kingdoms still exist the MC being the youngest war general due to war with a stronger kingdom dies and is offered a job that entitles fighting monster and armies but comes with the benefits of going through and getting power if chosen to accept or simply go to heaven or get reincarnated in your world again. continue reading
this is not a harem for the simple reason that I can't make it happen I tried in my first fanfiction but never found a good way to introduce a reason for it and I have read many harem stories and despite not hating the harem idea as fiction but the reasons in the stories I read for it is simply ridiculous and just doesn't work for me like "he is so strong I need sisters" or "he is the last of his clan so he needs more wives"....etc. so this if I decide on a romance it will be a single pairing.
// Disclaimer: I don't own the world or the characters that my OC goes to only his character nor do I own the cover pic and if the owner wants it removed contact me
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It's an alright concept it's just that you suck at english and grammar. Their was literally a misspelled word or some type of grammar problem in every paragraph. I'm not overreacting, after I noticed it I started to really focus on that and it was always a misspelled word, no uppercase, the sentence just being incoherent. You should take a break or hiatus to get at least your grammar up to an higher level.
Written in Google Translate. For not having read the work, I have no right to give a rating lower than 5 Stars, as I will only say one thing here. I am afraid of this 'Unique Couple' that may exist for the MC, because most of the time, the authors choose the worst girl and leave the best out ... this is irritating and depressing to see. I'll keep it in my library until I find someone talking about who's going to be his Pair.
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Bla bla bla blachy w dniu jutrzejszym czasie rzeczywistym siฤ do mnie 55744-monster-musume-no-oishasan i tak jest to bardzo dobry punkt widzenia i tak jest to bardzo dobry punkt widzenia i nie wiem czy nie wiem co z tego powodu nie wiem co z tego co wiem czy nie jest w porzฤ dku dziennym na stronie 55 w tym tygodniu i w sumie nic siฤ w dniu wczorajszym terminie od razu po co to znaczy to w #everything is random#
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Its amazing thank you its Billions times better than your other novel that i readed from the begining to end i want moar !!!! I just want more chapter because reading it give me so much fun and all !!
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To Author, Hope MC stays in Naruto world as like an Home-World(coz he can't just go through every world stay for few like Nomad - He needs a place to return after job) For he has almost collected the most strongest Jutsus and Arts, atleast after the war make him collect all jutsus, Sage Arts and other Arts of the Shinobi World and Put into a book with different types also teach them all about it. Bringing all the Shinobi's, Samurai's and Sage Mountains areas into one place to make into a country(NINSHU/WARRIOR CREED Country) also teach them about Mana too about magic in a way a warrior would use. But would still take jobs from other countries like they Shinobi's used to., but without any clans but put in people unity as 1 single clan and leader will be the one who is strongest as well as Intelligent rest as the system as always with helpers/adviors as council, not put everything into leader but in divisions to make the leader, council and country run more efficiently. *Also preserves nature together with all people teach how to preserve it make the planet rich in all aspects of energy, use tech&Science without harming Nature and it's Planet (for we could see in Boruto-Series taking the Development like Earth also take this as note to teach people where he goes to differnent worlds) so the people could live healthy and the planet would be habitual for eternally(by a wish to Lucis) to not make the Planet like Planet-Earth So to say MC becomes the Master of all. A Master like figure who guides and teach's people like a GRANDMASTER WOULD. Along as his World Guardian Job! Thanks- Reader.
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I like the story very much so far. It is not slow paced and it gives a lot of details revolving around different worlds that he is exposed to be defending. However, I believe he dropped this, since their has not been a new chapter in a while.
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