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"Everything at some point will meet the end. Death, death was a living creature tormented by his past. Death was once a mortal."
Arthur, in pursuit of power, to uncover the truth behind his dreams and visions.
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*This is my first time writing a novel; feel free to give me tips to improve as I go along.
The start is inspired from 'Space Mage of the Qi World', which is written by my friend who suggested I should publish this.*
Cover Art: Harvest Moon by dblasphemy
- Nima Tamizi
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Excellent world building and setup, excited to see where it will go! The book is excellent in its own right, the confined reality we live in is no longer the constraints to our imagination, as this writer is showing. Other worlds exist, far apart, yet so close; true salvation.
Author support his work. This is my first time writing a novel as mentioned before. Feel free to give me feedback and ideas in the comment section. Thank you <3
Well done Nima, I love this story and I don’t want to stop reading, I definitely keep reading as you post more 🙃It is really creative 🦋Totally, it’s amazing like you . I honestly think that is one of the best stories I’ve read so far …. Everything about is well and unique ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Not rly a reading donny but this is lit cant wait to read chapter 2 im happy that my friend timmy tim tim showed me this im hooked now cant wait for the next chapter!!!😤😤😤😤😤😤 feel like nima has a lot of potential and hopfully he stays consistant
What a great story , the author has a great imagination skills , I would recommend to every to read this novel story, I am looking forward to seeing many novel story by this author in future %100 worth to read it
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Enjoyable and well written. Has it is own unique climate. Good character development and timing of introducing each new persona. As a reader I am under the impression that the deeper you get into the plot the more enigmatical and ambiguous the novel gets. Great start, stay consistent.
An interesting read. Only 2 chapters in and I’m hooked! Also love the way the writing improves as I read only means it gets better. I’m already dying to know more!!
I discovered this from a friend's Instagram story, and when I started reading it, I didn't want to stop. I hope there will be a constant update. I wish you the best with it and I'm looking forward to the future chapters. Even though few mistakes are visible, it is understandable for your first novel. There are a lot of great things that I wanna mention but I don't want to spoiler tag this.
I got introduced to this novel from your insta story. First of all your character design, development is great it's just your writing quality which I can definitely see it being improved in the second chapter which shows that you're getting better and better. Keep it up. I'll follow if it does update regularly.
I can't help but look forward to how this novel will turn out. I'm pretty sure it will turn out to be a good novel with enough polishing, ignoring the fact that Arthur posseses a father with a Chinese name and a mother with a Western name.. and the other fact that his parents have the same last name, the rest was great, especially the ending. (talking about chapter 1)
It’s actually pretty Good for your first time. I hope it gets updated regularly and not get abandoned like other novels that start well. :))
1. A lot of describing and thats good... the reader can easily imagine the scenery and the mood that is shows 2. Peoples faces are mostly just descibed? How is someone dressed is also essential for better understanding and imagining 3. Dont skip scenes too fast...for the begginning is already happening a lot...getting to know the character+his life+his world+ other ppl+ story 4. I like that you made it kinda scary and bloody and that you escalated the excitement 5. The ending is def the best part just because of the clocking, also it is is attractive cuz you want to find out the reasoning behind his future actions 7. Overall, it is a nice novel... its like hella good written, I mean its fancy like its supposed to be, the story is interesting, def want to find out more of it (but just go slowly from now on with the story) 8. For a starter you are doing great so keep us entertained with the story!
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