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Really good. great author. please updatee more. Really good. great author. please updatee more. Really good. great author. please updatee more. Really good. great author. please updatee more.
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this story is nothing like the synopsis says, it is also incredibly boring and slow-paced with the chapters following the MC as a child in the 1800s who seems to conveniently forget that he can grant himself any wishes he wants so that there's some kind of plot and drama. there have also been no updates in almost 1 year, overall bad fanfic.
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anything past chapter like four is absolute garbage there is zero plot I've never seen a story that had so much potential but turned into such a absolute dumpster fire so fast
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Please write more chapters..... This history is good......๐๐๐๐๐ฅ๐ . I'd like this history..can you write more chapters? Because for me this is a fantastic history.
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the book is great and i would say it was a 5 star but the updates are low so it was downgraded but i hope it isnt droopped we need more good athours i hope the athour makes a new chapter and continues the book you have great potential
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Nothing really happens, its a childhood fic in the 1800s with a loy of emphasis on people being typical 'white' people, and an under tge age of 6 initiation of a romantic plot with an equally young girl. Honestly thats disturbing already. Then the author start breaking the 4th wall in a schizophrenic manner and follows it up with adding more divinities to his social contacts list... I felt the world building was subpar, the character hard to relate to or like, the story progression non existent and the writing quality decent. The result of that lead to the rating I have given.