Can I be a tamer in HP wizardry world? -Fanfic-

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Lokordome

This one has charm. It is really cozy to read. The grammar and spelling could do with a little work. But the voices of the characters come through pretty clearly. Part of that is because Harry Potter is such a familiar setting but another part is how good the Author is at setting up new characters. They aren't all hits but characters like 'Nicky Fleming' come across really vividly. The Stability of Updates is good so far and I hope to see it continue that way. The Story Development is pretty par for the course. Setting up dominoes to push down later sort of stuff. I really like the Slice-of-Life vibe that's coming through right now and I'm a little worried that the Author will decide to exaggerate the threat of Voldemort to increase tension. With the way things are set up the protagonist will be a force-multiplier for Harry and the rest of the people on his side. The first couple of books shouldn't even be problems. World Background is Harry Potter with extras. I like all the hints at more stuff coming through and hope to see the Author utilize all of them to create a cohesive and engaging story. TL;DR This novel is really nice and has a heart and soul that shines through the flaws in the grammar and spelling. Give it a shot.

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Daoist_N1CK

I like it. I like it. I like it. I it.

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multiverses_sage

fun to read but I think a key factor that is in writing like my three vampire .....

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zahra_kianpour

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Aswanth_S_A

Great work please continue Don't drop it in the middle

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Solitudeswordsman

Great fanfic…………………… pls continue the great work

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kinshi

i mean what do do want more a beast taming light novel in the harry potter word. the power that ROB gave to the main character is not too overpowered