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48.88% Burning-Hood Deviant / Chapter 22: NEW RIVAL PART II

Chapter 22: NEW RIVAL PART II

"WHAT'S WITH THAT SMILE OF YOUR'S!!"

I asked her cause as soon as I said those words she smirked at me.

"Take me seriously, I've already seen how you fight..Mr Burning-Hood Deviant"

"Wait...how do you know that name?"

"Hey, Akasuki"

"What is it?"

"Could you get a paper and pen, over"

"Why is that?"

"Cause I'm gonna need you to ask her for an autograph, ov—"

"SCREW YOU...I THOUGHT YOU WERE GONNA SAY SOMETHING IMPORTANT!!"

"THIS IS IMPORTANT TO ME!!"

"THEN GO ASK HER YOUR SELF!!"

"YOU!!...you still haven't answered my question yet, how do you know that name or were you there yesterday?"

"No it's simply been trending on the internet, But if I wanted to fight someone..it would be the girl who can create weapons not a Deviant who can't even handle an old man with a sword"

"WHY YOU!!"

I obviously know she was taunting me into fighting her, but still i need to show her who's superior.

*POW*

I jumped to where she was about to kick her but she blocks the kick with her left arm.

"So much for untouchable now, cause I clearly just touched you"

My comment pissed her off a-little, so we both started swapping attack. I jumped behind to take a distance from her.

"Hey Sasuke...your hero is not as sweet as she seems so I'm gonna need you a bit, and I will put on a date with Hayami and Momoi at the same time, over"

"Fine..I'm with you brother, any flaw I find I will report to you, over"

"Thanks..it means a lot to me"

I jumped up and shot an 'Ultra Fire-Fist' at her, she passes through the fire, and jumps from there to where I was while I was still midair.

*POW*

She sends a punch aiming for my face but with my quick reflexes I formed an 'X' with my hands to protect my face by blocking.

*CRASH*

Her strength is still no joke, I wonder why female Deviants have more strength than male. oh..here she comes.

*BOOM*

She lands where I crashed but I just rolled away from there.

"STOP...ROLLING AWAY YOU CHICKEN AND FACE ME LIKE A MAN!!"

"Then give me some time to stand up so I can"

I said as I continuously rolled over the field while she chased me with her feet trying to stomp on me.

"Then the deals of"

She said as she jumps and lands in front of where I was rolling to, I tried to rolling the opposite way but she quickly kicks me in my stomach, and I flew like a football up, She jumps up again and kicks me, as I hit the goal at the opposite side.

"THE UNTOUCHABLE QUEEN SCORES..A GOAL!!!"

"Oww, ugh...Hey Sasuke do you mind trying to find how to beat this show off"

"You haven't given me what to work with, She has only been using her physical abilities against you, so put up some fight so I can analyse her abilities better Mr Burn~ing-Ho~od"

"You don't have to say it like that, cause this time.. I'm definitely gonna crush her"

*THUD*

She lands, but before she does I was already preparing to hit her with my 'Finger Gun'.

*PHEW*

I shot it at her before she fully looks at me.

"Huh, it passed right through her?".

"Oh..you're so predictable, or did your side kick forget to tell you why I'm called the Untouchable Queen of Tokyo"

She said mocking me as she hits me like a football kicking me away.

*CRASH*

"Shit!..I forgot She's Intangible, what a cheat skill, But why didn't she use it from the beginning or has she just been toying with me this entire time.

I rose up from the floor as I concentrated a large amount of flame behind me and used it as a boost for speed to close the distance between us.

"I don't care if She's a lady, I'm gonna go all out".

*VWOOO*

As soon as I got close to her I swung my feet horizontally at her but It passed right through her like she was Ghostfreak from Ben 10. I didn't stop as I rotated still midair while clenching my fist as I punched her on her head vertically.

*DOOM*

"OUCH!!.. IT HURTS!!, IT HURTS!!"

I exclaimed as my fist still went right through her and I punched the floor.

"Hey Umm Sasuke, how do you think I will be able to hit her?, over"

"You won't"

"WHAT?!, W-WHY?!"

"I don't know?, maybe because she's called..THE UNTOUCHABLE QUEEN!!"

Sasuke said sarcastically to me.

"Ugh...screw this, I will make her bow to me"

"Ohh you done already, I thought you would continue sulking like a baby while you let me watch your show"

She said as she rose up from the audience seat which she had sitting down watching me.

"You bitch..DOES THIS LOOK LIKE A JOKE TO YOU, OR ARE YOU JUST TAKING ME FOR GRANTED?!!!"

"Hmm. More or less"

"Ohh I'm so gonna teach you respect"

"You've said it before, you're just all bark and no bite, you chicken"

Ohh She's gone and touched the spot, I know she's purposely taunting me but still her attitude disgusts me.

*VWOOO*

I used 'Tora Hishigi' to close the distance as soon as possible and when I got straight at her I jumped up aiming my feet at the side of her head.

"Huh!?"

*CRASH*

"Like I said, you're very predictable, I've already seen you use this against that girl not too long ago, so I predicted you would use it right about now".

I passed through her, it was like she was reading my mind—

"I know what you're thinking right now, it was like..she was reading my mind, isn't it?"

What?....is She actually reading it, no... from the way she said it, it's not possible, it's not possible for a Deviant to have multiple powers, except if you're the 'Copy Type', but if She is...She shouldn't have it for a long period of time cause everyone knows She has intangibility. But...we can't rule out the possibility that she might actually have Multiple Abilities.

"A-Answer this for me"

"That's weird, I didn't think you were this mature, but what is it~?"

"Do you have Multiple Abilities?"

"What?!..No, I'm not a 'Copy-Type' like that girl just now, if you don't know 'Copy-Type' are those Deviant who are able to use another Deviants ability only for a short amount of time.. and my ability as you already is Intangibility"

So she also calls them the 'Copy-Type' huh?, I guess we do have something in common but—.

"You think I have mind reading abilities don't you?"

"Yes cause you were able to evade my moves like you were in my mind".

"I don't have any mind reading ability, it just a technique I use that I call Foresight, with it I am able to predict what the other party will do by studying them and their action for some time.. Wait, why am I even telling you this?, Well it's not you will understand with that low IQ of yours so there's no need to even fret about it anyway"

"HEY!..are you calling me dumb?"

"No, you called yourself dumb..I just said you have a low IQ, Anyway I better start going now staying here with you is just pointless"

She said as she walks towards the girl who was absorbing my abilities and redirecting it.

"THE HELL?!, you just come here and steal my prey and now you walking away with your tail in-between your legs"

"You should be thankful you didn't receive any vital damage, cause if I wasn't lenient..you would be dead"

*GULPS*

I gulped as She said that last line cause her glare gave me the chills, But even if I argue with her She's right, she doesn't even need her ability to take me out in the first place, but what pains me the most was that she spared me...why are the female Deviants so strong. First Hayami now this girl. She isn't even older than me if not, she might still be in middle school. But what ever.

"My new goal is to catch up to her and defeat her"

I filled my resolve as I stood up pointing my index finger at her back as she walked away. The match for today has been cancelled so I don't think they will play again cause the flow has been disrupted it will impossible for the match to be as it was when they were in the zone.

I looked up and I saw a beautiful sky, and it caught my attention, I felt really down so I laid on the floor as I fixed my gaze on the stars in the sky cause the roof of the football field was open. looking at the stars made to reminisce my past and how I want my future to be, how will this power help me and how many people are stronger than me. It is also possible that there are people who stronger than me right now when they were still human, my life is really embarrassing, beaten up by two girls and an old man who is not even a Deviant in the first place. How do I counter them if there are the bad guys?, I can't always depend on Hayami and Sasuke all the time, What is my path I wonder?.


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