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Write a reviewOne of the best BBTH FF stories/translations I have read! The translation quality is excellent with a great release schedule (~10 chapters per day). The story/characters are great so far, looking forward to more!
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Beta MC, seriously don't waste your time , don't, waste, your, time. MC got every chance to get all the girls but he miss it, turning it to cliche stretching plot, girl no 1: wow MC so strong, girl no 2: blushed and bla bla, MC? nah he just beta male. plus braindead plot, MC are 7 stage, and other are 1/2, but it takes him 3-4 chapters to just get rid of them!
Well, it's the same as most Chinese fanfic, btth, it's better if it's your first fanfic and you haven't read the novel, but after several, you'll feel it's boring and repetitive when the MCs follow the plot too much or don't change it.
honestly just another cliche chinese novel , the mc hides his power leading to unnecessary and boring drama . the female lead offers nothing other than a pretty face and there is no real direction to the story other than useless drama smh, the only good quality is the translations which i think is wasted on this book . if a story like "journey to become a true god" had this type of translation it would be peak. [img=sad]
Itd a Chinese Novel. What do you expect? An mc that is actually good with a good processor in his head with actual girls liking him. HELL NO. Mc is PURE BORN DEFINATION OF A SIMP at its HIGHEST LEVEL. He doesn't make any advances on any girls when he clearly knows that they like him. The girls fall for him like its a Fallout game. He does everything any girls say without any questions asked. He helps Character that are pure Bi●●h●s like Nalan Ya lan. Yrah he doesn't help her at first but the moment her master asks him he helps her no question asked without asking anything in return. Many people might say heh He considers her master his 'freind'. Ok then would you consider someone you had to save twice from life threatening situations and that said person gives you nothing in return and continues to ask you for your favour. Would anyone even talk to a person like that. ALSO TRANSLATOR YOU DID A GOOD JOB MAN
Ff china yang membuatku emosi saat membaca,mc yang seorang simp,juga gu xun er yang tingkah dan sifatnya yang menjijikan🤬[img=Your move][img=Mad][img=In your face][img=disgusted][img=angry][img=Out of it]
I'm really enjoying this xianxia fanfic, I read the original BTTH a while back but only the first few arcs. I was initially worried the MC would become a simp in pursuit of love. Thankfully the Mc maintains his dignity and forms sincere loving relationships. The Mc is also reasonable and actually repays his debts. He doesn't massacre innocents and makes an effort to help his group grow in power. The pacing is quicker compared to the source material but that's normal for most Xianxia genre fanfics. The grammar has no glaring mistakes and flows very well. The update schedule is fantastic also. In terms of world background it explains some stuff but you need to have some familiarity with the source material to enjoy it more. This isn't really a criticism because it's applicable to most fanfics. Overall I give this fic a big thumbs up 👍. I binged the chapters pretty quickly.
Decent story with a great translator! The update speed is insane and the quality of the translation is also good. It's more of a slice of life type story with a tiny amount of action. Overall, a nice read to pass the time!
People like you who do this kind of translation and editing and also have the decency to upload several chapters a day deserve heaven, Many translators ask for stones to continue uploading, they ask for Patreon subscriptions to "not get discouraged and continue posting chapters", I've seen very few like you, you do an excellent job and you upload many chapters, that's what makes you gain support and stones, keep it up!!!
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Reveal Spoileryou are a madman for posting this many chapters in a short amount of time! Great read till now.
There are some things I don't like about the plot, but that's not the fault of the translator, the translation is done perfect and I don't have the heart to give this anything less than five stars.
The Translation is excellent. The author's Notes are Amusing and Great to read. The Story is great. if you start, you will want to keep reading it. . . . Keep up the excellent work author.👍👍
The translator is good but the story dies when he chooses the poison girl as the main heroine. She lacks the finesse, character, and conviction to be the main girl. She is at best a good side piece to keep in the background because she offers hardly anything besides a pretty face in this story. The MC is a hypocrite and some of the people are OOCs. The romance is bland with no chemistry or build-up at all.
Love this book! It must be the only book that updates everyday in batches!!😅😅. The translation is also top notch! So glad this work is made! 🙏
low key shit is tight. couple spelling errors here and there but Def one of the better translated Chinese stories. wish I could give updating more than 5 stars it deserves 7 for dropping like anywhere from 20-40 chapters a day woth good quality
It's a chainese fic. you can expect it to live up to the name. But I will say, that this one is quite polished compares to the others. There is nothing remarkable but putting them all together, it creates quite a remarkable story. I bunge a hundred or so chapters in a day. that should say so. ething. Overall, I like it. But I'm not going to say it's a great book and you should read it. Simply, I like it
awesome story with great pacing and character building but the best thing is the translation quality I swear I have never seen so few mistakes in translation in my life
One of the best BBTH FF stories/translations I have read! The translation quality is excellent with a great release schedule (~10 chapters per day). The story/characters are great so far, looking forward to more!
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Beta MC, seriously don't waste your time , don't, waste, your, time. MC got every chance to get all the girls but he miss it, turning it to cliche stretching plot, girl no 1: wow MC so strong, girl no 2: blushed and bla bla, MC? nah he just beta male. plus braindead plot, MC are 7 stage, and other are 1/2, but it takes him 3-4 chapters to just get rid of them!
Well, it's the same as most Chinese fanfic, btth, it's better if it's your first fanfic and you haven't read the novel, but after several, you'll feel it's boring and repetitive when the MCs follow the plot too much or don't change it.
honestly just another cliche chinese novel , the mc hides his power leading to unnecessary and boring drama . the female lead offers nothing other than a pretty face and there is no real direction to the story other than useless drama smh, the only good quality is the translations which i think is wasted on this book . if a story like "journey to become a true god" had this type of translation it would be peak. [img=sad]
Itd a Chinese Novel. What do you expect? An mc that is actually good with a good processor in his head with actual girls liking him. HELL NO. Mc is PURE BORN DEFINATION OF A SIMP at its HIGHEST LEVEL. He doesn't make any advances on any girls when he clearly knows that they like him. The girls fall for him like its a Fallout game. He does everything any girls say without any questions asked. He helps Character that are pure Bi●●h●s like Nalan Ya lan. Yrah he doesn't help her at first but the moment her master asks him he helps her no question asked without asking anything in return. Many people might say heh He considers her master his 'freind'. Ok then would you consider someone you had to save twice from life threatening situations and that said person gives you nothing in return and continues to ask you for your favour. Would anyone even talk to a person like that. ALSO TRANSLATOR YOU DID A GOOD JOB MAN
Ff china yang membuatku emosi saat membaca,mc yang seorang simp,juga gu xun er yang tingkah dan sifatnya yang menjijikan🤬[img=Your move][img=Mad][img=In your face][img=disgusted][img=angry][img=Out of it]
I'm really enjoying this xianxia fanfic, I read the original BTTH a while back but only the first few arcs. I was initially worried the MC would become a simp in pursuit of love. Thankfully the Mc maintains his dignity and forms sincere loving relationships. The Mc is also reasonable and actually repays his debts. He doesn't massacre innocents and makes an effort to help his group grow in power. The pacing is quicker compared to the source material but that's normal for most Xianxia genre fanfics. The grammar has no glaring mistakes and flows very well. The update schedule is fantastic also. In terms of world background it explains some stuff but you need to have some familiarity with the source material to enjoy it more. This isn't really a criticism because it's applicable to most fanfics. Overall I give this fic a big thumbs up 👍. I binged the chapters pretty quickly.
Decent story with a great translator! The update speed is insane and the quality of the translation is also good. It's more of a slice of life type story with a tiny amount of action. Overall, a nice read to pass the time!
People like you who do this kind of translation and editing and also have the decency to upload several chapters a day deserve heaven, Many translators ask for stones to continue uploading, they ask for Patreon subscriptions to "not get discouraged and continue posting chapters", I've seen very few like you, you do an excellent job and you upload many chapters, that's what makes you gain support and stones, keep it up!!!
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Reveal Spoileryou are a madman for posting this many chapters in a short amount of time! Great read till now.
There are some things I don't like about the plot, but that's not the fault of the translator, the translation is done perfect and I don't have the heart to give this anything less than five stars.
The Translation is excellent. The author's Notes are Amusing and Great to read. The Story is great. if you start, you will want to keep reading it. . . . Keep up the excellent work author.👍👍
The translator is good but the story dies when he chooses the poison girl as the main heroine. She lacks the finesse, character, and conviction to be the main girl. She is at best a good side piece to keep in the background because she offers hardly anything besides a pretty face in this story. The MC is a hypocrite and some of the people are OOCs. The romance is bland with no chemistry or build-up at all.
Love this book! It must be the only book that updates everyday in batches!!😅😅. The translation is also top notch! So glad this work is made! 🙏
low key shit is tight. couple spelling errors here and there but Def one of the better translated Chinese stories. wish I could give updating more than 5 stars it deserves 7 for dropping like anywhere from 20-40 chapters a day woth good quality
It's a chainese fic. you can expect it to live up to the name. But I will say, that this one is quite polished compares to the others. There is nothing remarkable but putting them all together, it creates quite a remarkable story. I bunge a hundred or so chapters in a day. that should say so. ething. Overall, I like it. But I'm not going to say it's a great book and you should read it. Simply, I like it
awesome story with great pacing and character building but the best thing is the translation quality I swear I have never seen so few mistakes in translation in my life