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Broken Doll (Love Makes The Difference)

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Author: _Neko_Sensei_

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[Being an orphan and working as a maid wasn't something one dreamt about. As if deprivation wasn't enough, Bismika had to suffer bullying at school. When a certain blue-eyed boy showed interest in her, she misunderstood him as her knight in shining armor. A little did she realize that, she was pulled toward a burning pyre.]
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“I-I wanted to t-tell-“ I was cut short with a loud thud of the tray.
“Here is your order, Sir,”- the waitress seductively placed the frappe.
“Thanks,”- he gave an alluring smile. This was the first time I saw him smiling today.
“Have you decided on the order yet, Ms. Indecisive?”- the waitress's boring tone rang through my ears. I was stunned at her rudeness. I looked at the pair of blue orbs sitting in front of me. He looked unbothered! The mistreatment of the waitress towards me was all normal to him!
Well! A loser like me never deserved a charmer like him. It was time to burst my dream bubble.
“I won't take anything,” somehow I managed to speak. “You can excuse yourself.”
The waitress left not before giving me a disgusting look and another lustful glance toward him.
I was done.
“Sorry to waste your time. But, don't worry. I won't waste more. Thanks for coming,”- I didn't wait for his response.
Leaving the café, I let my tears fall. He just used me for his pleasure! I felt broken.
Suddenly 2 strong hands grabbed my arms and the next moment I was shoved to an empty alley.
I stared at those ocean blue eyes, hard to read as always.
“A simple 'sorry' isn't good enough for wasting my time. I deserve compensation.”
And before I could respond, his lips were on mine and started devouring me like a beast.

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PerkyPompous_Pixie

When I was reading the first few chapters, I thought Liam was going to be the ML and thought it was some minor teasing because he had a crush on her. But as I read further, istg, I was livid! The man deserved some hellish torture! He is already a bully but if he has no proper excuse for his actions, he is truly the defintion of a bully! Then came Aiden - glad he's quite the opposite of Liam. I have read all the way to the latest chapter (chapter 14 + prologue), and I can't wait for the interesting bits to come!! Well done, author!

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sarah007

I really love this kinda book. The bullying is brutal. But it has sad side along with lots of funny moments. I really wait to read the chapters. Please update soon.

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Rin_Nurnia

Now, that was a nice and easy reading. I really enjoyed the chapters especially the second chapter, it feels like the mc is writing a diary and she shares it to the readers

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Ninestar619_5803

The story plot is super amazing. I loved the writing style which shows how one feels when trying to stay strong. This book is good. Excellent work. Keep it up

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Moonwriting

The plot of the story is interesting..love the way you describe her emotions. The world background seems interesting and I'm willing to join the journey... good job author .

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Cup_Cake101

I really love this book. though it's a bully story, the story line is deferent. the punchlines are hilarious. hope you'll finish this book ❤️

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vesnxx

amazing book with a few grammar mistakes but still easily readable. you get all the facts from the start so you know who is who. you can practically feel Bismikas pain and struggle. i will deffinitely continue reading this book ❤😁

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Pupwhee

pleaaase update the story It's so good, I was so disappointed when I saw that it was last updated 1 year ago

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